很好的英语作文讲解方法四六级英语作文提高.ppt

,I.,让你的英语作文 锦上添花！,闪光的英语作文包含四个要素：,1 完整性：句子结构完整，意义完整；,2 连贯性：句子之间的关系紧密,前后意思连贯，思想表达清楚 有序；,3 简洁性：言简意赅；,4 多样性：包括词汇多样性和句子多样性。,I. 1.词汇多样性：,改变：change，modify，alter，shift，fashion，transform，convert,变化：change，vary，convert，fluctuate， conscillate,保护：protect，conserve，safeguard,保存：save，preserve，conserve，keep，store,影响：effect，influence，impact，infection,流行：popular，prevalent， prevailing，current，common，universal,认为：think，believe，hold，argue，maintain，deem，opine，reckon，figure,意识到：realize，be aware of/that，be awake to，understand，it/sth. dawns on sb.,想到：think of，come up with，occur to/strike sb.，come to，remind，suggest,看作：regard as，look on/consider/view/see/takeas,看作：regard as，look on/consider/view/see/takeas,应该：should，ought to，it is/would be better，it is advisable to,因为：because，since，as，for，because of，owing to，thanks to，due to，as a result of，in virtue of，on account of，with，from，at，of,关于：about，on，with regard to，as regards，concerning，relating to,因此：so，therefore，thus，accordingly，consequently，hence，thereby,然而：however，nevertheless，nonetheless，whereas，though，still，yet,另外：moreover，in addition，besides，furthermore，one more thing,不同：different，difference，differ，vary fromto，conflicting，diverse，diversified，various，a variety of,吸引人的：attractive，appealing，taking，inviting，tempting，fascinating，charming，alluring，glamorous，absorbing，enticing,c,II. 句子多样性,1. 长短句变换：简单句、并列句和复合句交替运用,长句: 准确生动，长于说明推理；,短句: 简洁明快，意义明确，印象深刻，描述动作，表明主 旨，总结归纳，非短句不可,“段间长短不一，全篇句式万千”,结构多样化：,2. 结构多样化: 非谓语动词结构（包括不定式结构和分词结构），可以简化大部分英语从句，产生语言简练，结构丰富多样的效果,名词从句可转化为非谓语动词结构,1. That John won the marathon surprised us., Johns winning the Marathon surprised us.,2. I have not decided whether I should vote for Clint., I have not decided whether to vote for Clint.,u 定语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构,1. The man (who is) standing at the gate is my English teacher.,2. The car (that was) repaired yesterday by him is my mothers.,3. The next train that arrives is from New York., The next train to arrive is from New York.,u 状语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构,1. After he had watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn., Having watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.,2. When they are heated metals expand., (When) Heated, metals expand.,3. Because I do not know what to do next, I want to ask for your advice., Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.,4. I spoke slowly and clearly in order that the audience could understand me.,in order for the audience to understand me.,5. If we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail., United, we stand; divided, we fail.,6. Though he has lived in Canada for tree years, he still cannot speak English well., Having lived in Canada for three years, he still cannot speak English well.,无动词结构也是阅卷老师喜欢看到的亮点,u 形容词无动词结构,1. Big and fat, Victor went to the Gym(健身馆) every Sunday morning.（原因）,2. Speechless, Henry nodded and sat on a folding seat.（伴随状语）,3. Anxious for a quick decision, the chairman called for a vote.（原因）,4.（Although）always helpful, he was not much liked by people.（让步）,5. It has little taste, unless hot.（条件）,名词无动词结构,6. A fellow Georgian（佐治亚人）, Jordan was well-known as a friend of the President.（同位语）,7. Bank loan or no bank loan, well buy the house.（让步）,8. Whatever the reason, his cordiality（诚恳）to her has won him a friend.（让步）,介词无动词结构,9. Because of his mistake several people died.（原因）,10. Without his sisters money, Harr