2019年高中英语Unit5NelsonMandelaamodernheroSectionⅤWriting_人物介绍教案新人教版.docx

Section Writing 人物介绍人物介绍是高考书面表达常见的形式之一，以简单介绍人物的生平为主，这种简短的人物传记内容是人物生平最基本的信息和最重要的事迹。 一、基本结构1人物的基本信息如：生卒年月、出生地、国籍、职业、家庭背景等；2人物的重要事迹(举例说明)；3人物及其事迹对社会的贡献或影响；4作者对人物的评价。二、增分佳句1He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 2He/She was born in 1911.他/她出生于1911年。3He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from Beijing University.他/她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于北京大学。 4He/She is such a learned/strongwilled person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是如此一个博学/意志坚强的人，我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 5He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.他/她把毕生都致力于工作。6He/She made great contributions to our country.他/她对我们国家作出了巨大贡献。 7He/She was highly thought of by many people.他/她受到很多人的高度评价。 8He/She will live in the hearts of us forever. 他/她会永远活在我们心中。 题目要求请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。11911年生于上海，1935年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯卡门(Von Karman)的赞誉；21938年在美国获航空、数学博士学位；31950年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国；41958年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为新中国的航天事业做出巨大的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父”；52009年于北京去世。注意：词数100左右。参考词汇：航天航空科学技术aerospace science and technology第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为人物介绍；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：介绍已故人物的时态应以一般过去时为主。二、构思1介绍钱学森的个人生平；2介绍钱学森的经历、事迹和成就；3对钱学森的评价。第二步：核心词汇想周全1be_regarded_as被认为是2further_study 进修；深造3think_highly_of 高度评价4obtain_doctors_degree 获得博士学位5be_devoted_to 献身于6pass_away 去世7contribution 贡献8respect 尊敬第三步：由词扩句雏形现11911年生于上海。He was_born_in_1911_in_Shanghai.21935年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯卡门的赞誉。In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was_highly_thought_of by Von Karman because of his great achievements.31938年在美国获航空、数学博士学位。In 1938, he obtained_his_doctors_degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.41950年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国。In 1950, he heard New China had been founded and succeeded_in_coming_back_to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him.51958年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为新中国的航天事业做出巨大的贡献。Since 1958 he had_been_devoted_to aerospace science and contributed a lot to the cause of Chinas aerospace.6他被誉为“新中国航天之父”。He was_regarded_as the father of Chinas space program.72009年于北京去世。In 2009, he passed_away_in_Beijing.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用过去分词短语改写句1和句6Qian_Xuesen,_regarded_as_the_father_of_Chinas_space_program,_was_born_in_1911_in_Shanghai.2用定语从句改写句2和句3In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements, who obtained his doctors degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US in 1938.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Qian_Xuesen,_regarded_as_the_father_of_Chinas_space_program,_was_born_in_1911_in_Shanghai._In_1935,_Qian_went_to_America_for_further_study_and_was_highly_thought_of_by_Von_Karman_because_of_his_great_achievements,_who_obtained_his_doctors_degree_in_aerospace_science_and_mathematics_in_the_US_in_1938._In_1950,_he_heard_New_China_had_been_founded_and_succeeded_in_coming_back_to_his_homeland_in_1955_though_the_American_government_tried_to_stop_him._Since_1958_he_had_been_devoted_to_aerospace_science_and_contributed_a_lot_to_the_cause_of_Chinas_aerospace_and_in_2009,_he_