2018_2019学年高中英语Unit18BeautySectionⅥ（自修课）Writing—影视评论学案（含解析）.docx

Section (自修课) Writing影视评论影视评论简称影评，一般包括对影片的背景、故事梗概、观众最有印象的部分等的介绍以及对影片的评价。一、基本结构影评适宜采用“三段式”写法：1第一段：背景介绍。在评论之前，作者要让读者了解电影的大致情况。因此，对影片背景的介绍很有必要。背景介绍通常包括故事背景、演职人员和获奖情况等。2第二段：内容简介。影片内容的介绍要简明扼要，要清楚地交代故事的情节，尤其是与影评相关的内容。应力求客观，以使读者对故事情节有所了解。3第三段：发表评论。这一部分是写作重点，也是影评的中心部分，可以选择性地从不同角度对电影的主题、情节、演员的演技等方面有针对性地发表个人看法，最后对电影进行总体性的评价。如果认为有必要，也可推荐给其他人观看。注意：对电影所发表的观点通常用现在时态。此外要注意评论的公正性、客观性，不可过于偏激。二、增分佳句1对影片的概述The film . directed by . is a story about .The film . is set in .The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.2对影片的评价This is a very touching film, a mustsee.My favourite part of the film is .Judging from the wild clapping and cheers that filled the cinema, everybody agreed that it was indeed the best film of the year.However, many people have complained that the film is too .Im disappointed with the film because .Many viewers have expressed great dissatisfaction with the movie.Even with these small problems, the film is still a great one, and I really enjoy it!Personally, I think the advantages carry more weight than the disadvantages.The scenery, and the backgrounds seem very real and beautiful/splendid/wonderful.题目要求好莱坞电影阿凡达(Avatar)早已在中国大陆上映。请根据下面内容写一篇短文，介绍该电影的有关情况及你的感想。短文必须包括以下信息：1阿凡达在中国大陆上映时，超过了泰坦尼克号(Titanic)，创票房(boxoffice)新纪录。2电影的拍摄历时五年多，是最昂贵的电影之一。赢得了金球奖(Golden Globe)，获得了九项奥斯卡提名(an Oscar nomination)。3该电影以2154年为背景，讲述了一个残疾(disabled)军人被派往潘多拉星球(Pandora)去说服那里的人们让地球人在他们的家园开采自然资源的故事。4你的感想注意：词数100左右。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为影视评论；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：写影评通常用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，上映时的情况。第二部分，拍摄及获奖情况和电影简介。第三部分，自己的感受。第二步：核心词汇想周全1at_that_time在当时2more_than 多于；不仅仅3evident/obvious 明显的4accompanied_with/as_well_as 和，以及5be_set_in 以为背景6try_to_persuade 试图说服7live_in_harmony_ 和睦相处8instead_of 而不是第三步：由词扩句雏形现1阿凡达早已在大陆上映。(被动语态)Avatar was shown on the Chinese mainland.2它超过了泰坦尼克号，创造了当时的票房新纪录。(that定语从句；现在分词作结果状语)It_broke_the_record_that_was_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.3该电影拍摄历时五年多，很显然是最昂贵的电影之一。(more than; it作形式主语)It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films.4它赢得了金球奖，并获得了九项奥斯卡提名。It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations.5电影以2154为背景。It_is_set_in_2154.6电影讲述了一个残疾军人被派往潘多拉星球。(who引导定语从句)The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora.7他试图说服那里的人们让地球人在他们的家园开采自然资源。He_tried_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.8在我看来，这是最成功的电影之一。In_my_opinion,_this_is_one_of_the_most_successful_films.9从电影中，我了解到不同种族的人们应该互相尊重、和谐相处而不是兵戎相见。(that引导的宾语从句)From_it,_I_learn_that_different_races_should_respect_each_other_and_live_in_harmony_instead_of_being_at_war.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用定语从句及现在分词短语作状语改写句1和句2Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.2用不定式作目的状语连接句6和句7The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇A_Hollywood_film,_Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films._It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations._The_film_is_set_in_2154_and_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_na