2018_2019学年高中英语Module6TheTangPoemsSectionⅤWriting_诗歌改写教案含解析外研版.docx

Section Writing-诗歌改写技法指导本单元的写作任务是诗歌改写。改写是用不同形式表达同一内容，使之成为与原文意思相同而表达方式、文体不同的作品。改写可以变换文章的人称、顺序，可以改变原文的体裁、结构，也可以灵活运用自己的语言，尽可能用多种方法来表达、替换原文的内容。写作时，要注意以下几点：1根据诗歌内容对文章进行合理的引入；2在原诗的基础上，结合生活实际，展开合理的想象，对原有的内容进行扩展；3点出中心，给出合理的结尾。黄金表达：教你如何营造亮点1Written by ., the great poet of the Tang Dynasty, the poem . vividly describes .2While reading the poem, you cant help thinking of .and .which are .3The poem mainly reveals the real life of the people living .4Even though it is considered . by most people, the poem in fact expresses .5The popularity of the poem is still . even though we have experienced great changes in .6As one of the most valuable poems in ., the poem reminds people of .7People can think of the experience of their real life when they read the poem.8Well have a strong sense of .when we read the poem because .9It is generally accepted that the poem represents the conditions of . at that time.10I think the poem will still influence people who .because .写作规范题目要求请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇与时间有关的短文。Time Is MoneyListen, his steps are light.Ticktock, ticktock，Listen, his words are light.Ticktock, ticktock，The Old Man of Time is running.He tells us to catch up with him.Oh, time is money.Dont waste your valuable time.Ticktock, ticktock, ticktock.注意：1不得照抄短诗原文；2结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开；3突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯；4短文不能写成诗歌的形式；5词数100左右。三步作文法第一步：搜索词汇1事实上in_fact/as_a_matter_of_fact/in_reality2珍惜 value3有限的 limited4充分利用 make_full_use_of5总之 in_conclusion/in_a_word6养成的好习惯 get_into_the_good_habit_of/form_the_good_habit_of第二步：由词造句1翻译句子每一秒都是珍贵的。Every_second_is_precious.我们应该充分利用我们的时间。We_should_make_full_use_of_our_time.现在有很多人。There_are_a_lot_of_people_now.他们不知道时间的重要性。They_do_not_know_the_importance_of_time.他们没有意识到浪费时间就是浪费他们宝贵的生命。They_do_not_realize_that_wasting_time_is_simply_wasting_their_valuable_life.这是很羞愧的。It_is_a_shame.2句式升级用原因状语从句连接句Because_every_second_is_precious,_we_should_make_full_use_of_our_time.用定语从句连接句There_are_a_lot_of_people_now_who_do_not_know_the_importance_of_time.用“itisn.that从句”连接句Its_a_shame_that_they_do_not_realize_that_wasting_time_is_simply_wasting_their_valuable_life.第三步：连句成篇People often say, “Time is money.” But in fact time is more valuable than money. Why? Because when money is spent, we can earn it back. However, when time is lost, it will never return. This is the reason why we must value time.The time we have is limited. Because every second is precious, we should make full use of our time. But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time. They waste their time chatting, smoking or drinking and its a shame that they do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life.In a word, we should get into the good habit of saving time. Do not leave what can be done today until tomorrow. Always remember, time is money.对应学生课下能力提升(二十四).阅读理解The Poetry Foundation recently named American poet Jack Prelutsky as the nations first childrens poet laureate (桂冠诗人)The group created the award as a way to increase Americans love of poetry from an early age.As childrens poet laureate, Jack Prelutsky will give two public readings in the next two years. He will also advise the Poetry Foundation about childrens literature and take part in projects concerning children and poetry.Jack Prelutsky has been writing poetry for children for almost forty years. He has written more than thirtyfive books of poems. His first book was called A Gopher in the Garden.It was published in 1967. His latest is called Behold the Bold Umbrellaphant and Other Poems.Jack Prelutsky is well known for creating new words by combining two words to create a new kind of creature. For example, he combined “radish” with “shark” to get “radishark”. “Lion” and “broccoli” became a “broccolion”Jack Prelutsky says children like his poems because he writes about things they care about. Poetry experts say Jack Prelutskys poems recognize childrens feelings. An example of this is the poem My Sister Is a Werewolf which is about how it feels to be different.Jack Prelutsky also writes poems about American holidays. From the romance of Valentines Day to the thrills of Halloween, from the stuffing (and overstuffing) of Thanksgiving to the joy of Christmas, Jack captures these milestones of childhood with delightfully silly poems.1Which of the following can be the best title for the passage?APoems with New Words Grow PopularBFirst Childrens Poet Laureate NamedCChildrens Love for Poetry IncreasedDJack Prelutsky Awarded Nationwide解析：选B标题归纳题。文章开头就点明了主题，然后介绍了这位诗人和他为儿童所作的诗，故选B项。2What is Jack Prelutsky famous for?AHis productivity.BHis long time of writing.CCreating new words in his poems.DHis poems about American holidays.解析：选C细节理解题。根据第四段第一句可知，Jack Prelutsky因为创造新词而出名，故选C项。3Which is the right order according to the passage?atwo public readingsbA Gopher in the GardencBehold the Bold Umbrellaphant and Other PoemsdMy Sister Is a WerewolfAb, c, d, aBd, a, c, bCb, d, c, a Da, b, c, d解析：选C推理判断题。根据第二段第一句可知，a项的时间最晚；根据第三段第三句可知b项的时间最早；根据第三段最后一句可知c项应在d项之后，故答案为C项。4What can we learn from the passage?AThe Poetry Foundation was set up recently.BJack has written thirtyfive poems for children.CThe new words Jack created in his works are easy to understand.DJacks poems about holidays are not popular with Children.解析：选C推理判断题。由第四段的内容可知，Jack Prelutsky在作品中创造的词大都是由两个简单的单词合并在一起构成的，并且他的作品是给孩子们读的，由此可推断这些新词都很容易理解，所以C项正确。.阅读七选五Tips to Manage StressYou cant rid stress from your life completely, but you can reduce it. Know that it takes some efforts because you may have to make changes in your attitude and lifestyle. Reducing stress requires that you know how you react to stress. If you know, you can change your behavior. _1_. See the glass as half full instead of half empty. Also, develop a strategy for handling stressful situations. This way, you wont be caught off guard (措手不及). Here are the helpful tips： _2_When your body is healthy, it can stand up to stress. Keep your body healthy and strong with nutritious foods.A lowfat diet helps slow the progress of some stressrelated diseases. Avoid caffeine (咖啡因), nicotine (尼古丁) and alcohol.Laugh_3_. When you laugh or just smile, the blood which flows to the brain is increased. It is due to the release of endorphins (内啡肽) which results in a drop in the level of stress hormones (荷尔蒙)Be socialWhen you feel stress, your instincts tell you to isolate yourself. When you withdraw, you allow yourself to concentrate more on the problem, which makes your stress level greater. _4_. Be around with young children, who can help make you forget yourself and your worries.Know your stress and personalityDo you know how to react to stress? Do you yell and kick the furniture? Or do you retreat into stony silence? _5_. Make note of any stressor, the time, the place, how you feel, and what you do as a result. By knowing your own personality, you can learn to respond to stress before you reach the crisis mode.ACall friendsBSupport your coworkersCAdd good nutrition and exerciseDKeep a stress diary for two weeksEParticipate as actively as possibleFTry to be more optimistic and confidentGIt may be one of the healthiest ways to reduce stress1解析：选F由下文的“See the glass as half full instead of half empty”可推知，改变态度很重要，要努力变得更加乐观和自信，所以选F项。2解析：选C空处为本段的标题，根据本段中的“Keep your body healthy and strong with nutritious foods”可知，本段主要讲的是增加营养和多锻炼身体可以应对压力，故选C项。3解析：选G根据常识并结合本段的整体内容可推知，笑也许是减少压力的最健康的方法之一，所以选G项。选项G中的It代指“Laugh”。4解析：选A结合本段的标题“Be social”可推知，本段主要讲的是多参加社交活动，不要自我封闭，所以选A项。5解析：选D由下文的“Make note of any stressor, the time, the place, how you feel, and what you do as a result”可知，把与压力有关的东西都记下来，分析并采取相应的策略，这与D项契合，所以选D项。.完形填空My mother has a unique way of embarrassing her children. Whenever she gets _1_ about something, she jumps up and down, screaming. We _2_ this as the “silly dance”. As her daughter, I find this _3_ embarrassing. Anytime she goes into the silly dance, I will _4_ slowly away, smile awkwardly, and _5_ to people, “No, shes not my mother.”Even though my mother brought me much _6_ when I was little, and even though she _7_ does the silly dance when something goes her way, I now _8_ it. Because the silly dance shows just who she is, and it shows that shes happy. _9_ she didnt do her dance and just obeyed our wishes for “not _10_， Mom”， she would compromise who she is.I owe a lot of my _11_ for the theater to my mother. I now sing publicly like my mother does. And my friends are always doing that _12_ awkward smile and usually _13_ under their breath, “Carolyn, public.”So in many ways Im becoming my mother. Im not going to _14_ singing just because people feel embarrassed at it. I have no _15_ that I will embarrass my own children with my performance of the “silly dance”. So what? Thats who I am.Its my _16_ that everyone should dance to the beat of her own drum, even if the guy next to you gives you a(n) _17_ look. I believe in the things that set us _18_. I believe in being myself, no matter how many awkward smiles I _19_. I believe in the idea that never _20_ who I am.语篇解读：本文是夹叙夹议文。作者通过自己的亲身经历告诉我们一个道理：不要在意别人的看法，要做自己。1A.excitedBdisappointedCconfused Dconcerned解析：选A根据下文的“she jumps up and down, screaming”“does the silly dance when something goes her way”及“it shows that shes happy”可知，母亲在兴奋时就会跳起“舞”来，因此选择A。excited“兴奋的”；disappointed“失望的”；confused“困惑的”；concerned“担忧的”。2A.pick up Btake upCrefer to Dturn to解析：选C我们把她的这种舞蹈称为“silly dance”。refer to . as . “把称为”。3A.primarily BgraduallyCoccasionally Dcompletely解析：选D根据下句可知，作者认为这种舞蹈令自己非常尴尬，因此选择completely“完全地，彻底地”。4A.run BrushCinch Dpull解析：选C根据句中的“slowly”“smile awkwardly”可知，此处指母亲无论何时跳起“舞”来，作者都会慢慢地走开。inch“缓慢地移动”，符合语境。5A.apologize BexplainCcomplain Drespond解析：选B根据上下文语境可知，为了使自己摆脱尴尬的处境，作者会向人们解释(explain)道，“不，她不是我妈妈”。6A.annoyance BsupportCfavour Dcourage解析：选A根据上文的内容可知，此处应是表示尽管母亲在作者小的时候给她带来了很多困扰。annoyance“烦恼，苦恼”，符合语境。7A.even BeverCnever Dstill解析：选D虽然当有些事情进行顺利时，她仍然(still)会跳“silly dance”。8A.avoid BimproveCenjoy Dignore解析：选C根据上下文语境，此处指作者现在喜欢上了母亲表达喜悦的方式。因此选择enjoy。9A.Unless BIfCIn case DNow that解析：选B根据语境，此处指如果母亲听从孩子们的意愿不在公共场合跳“舞”，那她就违背了自我。根据句意可知，空处在此引导条件状语从句，表示“如果”，故选If。10A.in public Bin personCin advance Din vain解析：选A参见上题解析。下文中的“sing publicly like my mother does”是提示。in public“公开地，当众”； in person“亲自”；in advance“提前”；in vain“白费力气，徒劳”。11A.affection BtalentCsympathy Dadmiration解析：选A此处指作者把自己对戏剧的喜爱归功于自己的母亲。affection“喜爱”，符合句意。12A.different BunusualCextra Dsame解析：选D根据上下文语境可知，此处指朋友们看到作者在公共场合唱歌，也会露出同样尴尬的微笑，因此选择same。13A.shouting BwhisperingClaughing Dcheering解析：选B根据下文中的“under their breath”可知，此处指的应是作者的朋友们通常会小声说道。whisper under ones breath“耳语，小声说”，符合句意。14A.make up for Bput up withCtake to Dgive up解析：选D根据语境可知，此处指作者不会仅仅因为会让别人感到尴尬就放弃(give up)唱歌。15A.doubt BideaCchoice Dhope解析：选A此处指毫无疑问(doubt)，作者也会使自己的孩子们感到尴尬。16A.advice BdreamCprediction Dbelief解析：选D此处表示作者认为(belief)：每个人都应该按照自己的节拍去跳舞，即使你身边的人会向你投以奇怪的(strange)表情。17A.comforting BspecialCstrange Dappreciative解析：选C参见上题解析。18A.aside BawayCalike Dapart解析：选D此处指使我们有所区别的这些东西。set . apart“使与众不同，使突出”。19A.share BreceiveCrefuse Dremember解析：选B作者表示无论自己收到多少尴尬的笑容，作者都会相信要做自己。receive表示“(客观上)得到，收到”，符合句意。20A.compromise BignoreCforget Dsuspect解析：选A此处指作者在坚持自我这个问题上永不妥协。compromise“妥协，让步”，符合句意。第二段最后一句中的“compromise who she is”也是提示。.语法填空Hospitals havent always been clean and quiet places. Long ago they were dirty and crowded. Nurses were never taught_1_ to look after their patients and many people died. It was Florence Nightingale who changed all this.Florence was born in 1820. As a child, she often went with her mother_2_ (visit) the poor people.They took food and medicine to the sick. It was these visits that first gave her the idea of becoming_3_ nurse.Her chance came in 1854 when Britain went to war with Russia. Florence_4_ (ask) by the government to take a group of nurses to look after the sick and the _5_ (wound). The hospitals were dirty, and there wasnt enough medicine. Florence and her team worked very hard, _6_ (clean) the hospital rooms and made the bed every day. At night, she would go from room to room, _7_ (check) on the patients. She often stayed to talk to the patients and provided comfort_8_ them.After the war, Florence opened a school to teach nurses to look after their patients_9_ (proper). However, she never really made a full_10_ (recover) from the illness that she had in the war, and she died in 1910.语篇解读：本文是对护理事业的创始人、现代护理教育的奠基人弗洛伦斯南丁格尔的介绍。1how考查疑问词。根据语境，此处指以前的护士从未被教过要如何照顾病人，故用how。2to visit考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，此处为不定式短语在句中作目的状语。3a考查冠词。根据语境可知，此处表泛指，指“成为一名护士”，故应用不定冠词 a。4was asked考查时态和语态。此处说的是发生在过去的事情，应用一般过去时；又根据空后的“by the government”可知，Florence与ask之间是被动关系，应用被动语态。5wounded考查词性转换。“theadj.”是固定用法，表示一类人，故填 wounded。6cleaned考查时态。分析句子结构可知，此处与worked和made 并列作句子的谓语，故也应用一般过去时。7checking考查非谓语动词。check与其逻辑主语she 之间是主动关系，故应用现在分词短语作伴随状语。8for考查介词。根据语境可知，此处指的应是“她给他们提供慰藉”，provide sth. for vide sb. with sth.。9properly考查词性转换。空处修饰 look after, 应用副词形式。10recovery考查词性转换。根据语境及空前的“a full”可知此处应用名词形式。.短文改错I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldnt afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, so it was much better than the old one.答案：第一句：realreally第二句：buy前加to第三句：locatinglocated第四句：第一个TheA第六句：shopkeepersshopkeeper第七句：去掉第一个for; thatwhich第九句：choosechose; himme第十句：sobut单元质量检测(六)(时间：100分钟满分：120分).阅读理解(共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分)阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。AWelcome to enjoy the Mattaponi powwow(meeting on North America Indians) and culture day!Created in Virginia, America, the Mattaponi Indian Museum sits on a cliff (悬崖) overlooking the Mattaponi River.The Mattaponis have worked hard to keep their ancient way of life，customs and ceremonies.One purpose of their yearly powwow is to share these traditions with you.MATTAPONI POWWOW AND CULTURE DAY：May 18ADMISSION：Adult$ 6.00, Children(under 12)FreeCome and spend the day with us on the shores of the Mattaponi River for an educational experience presenting the customs and beliefs of the Mattaponi. During this special day, American Indians will dance and play drums while dressed in tribal clothing.This year visitors may join in the dancing and thrumming. Visitors will be able to observe artists and craftsmen as they show their basketmaking and toolmaking skills.American storytellers will help you see how their habits and beliefs are passed on to their children through stories.Enjoy ActivitiesTaste American Indian foodsPurchase crafts and souvenirsPlay American Indian childrens gamesWatch ceremonial dances and listen to ceremonial songsImportant CautionsNo petsBring your own chairs and blanketsTickets may be purchased in advance although no refunds (退款) will be allowedFor more information，please visit http：//main.语篇解读：文章介绍了the Mattaponi powwow and culture day 这个活动的由来，活动的内容和参加活动时的注意事项。1According to the text, the Mattaponis habits and beliefs are handed down from generation to generation through _.AsongsBstoriesCcrafts Ddance解析：选B细节理解题。从文章中的“American storytellers will help you see how their habits and beliefs are passed on to their children through stories.”可知，Mattaponis的习惯和信念是通过故事流传下来的，故选B项。2Visitors coming to enjoy the Mattaponi powwow and culture day can do all the following EXCEPT_.Aenjoy American Indian foodsBwatch ceremonial dancesCplay American Indian childrens gamesDget crafts and souvenirs for free解析：选D细节理解题。Enjoy Activities中的第一条说明A是对的，第四条说明B是对的，第三条说明C是对的，而第二条说要购买手工艺品或纪念品，不是免费的，故选D项。3This text is mainly intended to _.Ainform readers about an eventBpersuade readers to try drummingCsell crafts and souvenirs to readersDeducate readers on different types of powwows解析：选A写作意图题。通读全文，可知文章是介绍the Mattaponi powwow and culture day 这个活动的，所以选A项。BIf you are only just starting to learn Chinese, classical Chinese poetry can seem totally impossible to understand. Sometimes the vocabulary is “oldfashioned” or “poetic” in style; often phrases are so compact (紧凑的) and economical that it is difficult to get across; and, not least, a full appreciation of a poem and all its associations requires a deep knowledge of Chinese literature and history. However, with help even a beginner can get to know some Chinese poems and benefit greatly, not only by learning new vocabulary and characters, but by becoming acquainted with one of the richest and most beautiful Chinese literary forms.A good poem to start off with is Jing Ye Si (Quiet Night Thoughts) by Li Bai (Li Po). This wellknown poem can be found in the Penguin Collection of Li Bais and Du Fu (Tu Fu)s poetry translated by Arthur Cooper, the poem along with his translation is presented below.Chuang qian ming yue guang，Yi shi di shang shuang.Ju tou wa