高考英语书面表达专题辅导基础写作调查报告.ppt

1.50% of the girls 50%的女生 2. compared with同比起来 3. account for/take up占(多少比例) 4. be in favor of. 支持/赞成 5. as far as sb. is concerned就某人看来,相关短语,6. arouse their interest激发了他们的兴趣 7. put. in the second place把放在第二位 8. rank the first place / rank first / be in the first place排在第一位,相关句式 1. Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.上周我们就“谁是你的偶像”在2, 600人中进行了调查。 2. Recently our League Committee has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.最近我们团委进行了一次调查, 其结果如下。,3. According to the survey, about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. 根据调查结果, 大约一半的学生有困难的时候会去找他们的同学或朋友。 4. Different persons may have different choices on how to spend pocket money.关于怎样用零花钱, 不同的人有不同的选择。,5. A recent survey suggests that students are different from each other in learning styles.最近的一项调查显示, 学生在学习方式上是各有差异的。 6. As is shown in the survey, drunken driving may result in serious accidents. 正如调查所显示的那样, 酒后驾驶会导致严重事故。,1. 注意审题, 转换图表。撰写调查报告时, 通常需要结合图表, 观察、对比调查数据, 并把调查结果和数据转换为文字表达, 并按写作内容给出的要点按顺序进行写作 。,2. 确定时态, 规范全文。引出报告结果或数据时，发表议论和个人观点, 通常用一般现在时。若出现具体的时间状语, 如last year， next year, recently等时, 应根据具体使用适当的时态。 3. 变换表达, 丰富语汇。调查报告中多出现相同内容的描述或分析, 为避免重复, 建议使用不同语言和句式表达同类信息。,(2007年广东) 上周, 我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题, 在2600名考生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：,写作内容 根据以上数据, 写一篇短文, 包括以下内容： 1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2. 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异； 3. “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4. 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同； 5. 你的偶像及理由。,例题导写 1. 认真审题, 理清要点。第一点写作内容“调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象”是在表格以外的写作引入说明部分找到具体信息, 第二至四写作点中, 要求找出男女生数据的“差异”，写作时要一语中的, 第五点写作内容则让考生自由表达观点。,2. 第五点写作内容, 给予考生很大的发挥空 间,也是体现考生写作水平的很好机会。考生尽量避免使用“I like Jay Chow because he is handsome.”等语言简单、观点肤浅的句子，而应该运用高级语句, 争取高分, 如：My idol is Langlang because he is a person with strong determination. 或The person I admire most is Gou Jian because he is able to realize his dream with his courage and strong will.,3. 扫清难点, 译句成文。翻译以下重要短语句式, 为写作作准备。 (1) 开展了一项关于的调查 _ _ (2) 调查结果表明 _,make /do / conduct/carry out a survey about / on sth.; survey sb. about sth.,The survey /result shows that .,(3) 把看作偶像 _ _ (4) 50%的女生 _ (5) 与是一样的_,consider / choose / figure sb. as idols; think of sb. as idols,be the same as,50% of the girls, half of the girls,(6) 某人或某物排在第一位 _ _ (7) 某人把放在第二位 _ (8) 据某人看来 _,sb. / sth. rank the first place, sb. / sth. is in the first place,as far as sb. be concerned, in ones opinion,sb. put.in the second place,(9) 某人持的观点 _ _ (10) 表示对比、比较 _,however, on the contrary, but，while,sb. hold the opinion that，sb. be of the opinion that,参考范文 Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.,能力提高 一、填空 请用所给动词的适当形式填空。 1. Recently, I _ (survey) my classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it, while 15% _ (dislike) it and 5% _ (have) no opinion. Students who _(like) it say the pictures with the texts are very attractive, which greatly arouse their interest in learning.,have surveyed,dislike,have,like,Moreover, the book is very interesting, _(cover) many hot topics and _(provide) lots of cultural knowledge of the world. However, students who dislike it _(complain) there _(be) too many new words and difficult sentences, _(make) the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook _ (help) most students improve their English enormously already.,has helped,covering,providing,complain,are,making,2. The result _ (show) that 75% of the students _(be) in favor of surfing the Internet for information last year. And the data also _(suggest) that the number _(continue) to rise next year.,shows,were,suggest,will continue,二、勘误 请用横线划出下列句子中的错误, 并将其改正过来。(错误可能不止一处) 1. There are 50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols, however, 48% of the boys choose sports stars.,1. 改法一：There are 50% of the girls think (改为thinking 或who think) of film and TV stars as idols， however，(改为but，或把however前的逗号改为句号，然后另起一句，使用However)48% of the boys choose sports stars. 改法二：There are (删除There are)50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols, .,2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find that the choices from boys and girls are different.,2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find (改为found) that the choices from boys and girls are (改为were) different. 注释该处动词时态与last week, did等相呼应。,上月，我们公司以35岁以下的人群作为调查对象, 选取了1000人进行了关于“网上购物”的一项调查, 调查情况如下：,写作内容 根据以上数据，写一篇调查报告, 内容包括： 1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象; 2. 愿意网上购物的人占调查人数的百分比； 3.人们愿意在网上购物的主要原因； 4. 人们不愿意在网上购物的主要原因； 5. 本次调查的结论。,参考范文 Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping on line among 1000 interviewees younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home.,Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees dont want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line.,精华点评,考生写作时必须排除不必要信息的干扰, 因写作内容中并没有要求写“不愿意网上购物的人所占百分比为32%”这一信息点, 所以不必把表格内容全部翻译。此外, 写作时尽量使用与写作内容相对应的英语翻译, 使文章表达更切题。,例如, 写作内容中出现“主要原因”和“结论”这些重要的写作线索, 考生应该尽量使用与之相应的语句进行翻译, 如“.for the main reason that.; .mainly because; In conclusion; Finally, we arrive at the conclusion that.”, 使阅卷老师对写作信息一目了然，以获取高分。,上月, 为了给顾客提供更好的服务, Sun-flower餐厅作了一次调查, 以下是调查问卷以及调查结果：略,写作内容 根据以上数据, 写一篇短文, 内容包括： 1. 顾客最满意餐厅的两个方面； 2. 顾客最希望通过什么途径了解到餐厅最新信息； 3. 愿意再次到餐厅就餐的顾客所占调查人数的比例； 4. 顾客对餐厅提出的主要建议。,参考范文 In order to serve the customers better, Sun-flower Restaurant carried out a survey last month. It can be learnt from the data that 85% of the customers are satisfied with the service and 72% of them are satisfied with the food ordered. 71% of the customers are willing to learn about the