所有文章都是贴近学生生活的都是符合学生生活实际的.ppt

高三英语复习课,短文改错,主讲人:苏新明,短文改错的命题规律,1.所有文章都是贴近学生生活的，都是符合学生生活实际的. 2.从体裁上看,基本都是记叙文和应用文. 3.从文章总量上看,总词数在100词左右,句子在10个左右. 4.设置错误的规律是,错词最多一般在57 个,多词一般2个,正确1个.,短文改错测试点覆盖面广,错误类型主要包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等,具体分为: 1.时态错误 9.连词错误 2.语态错误 10.形容词错误 3.行文逻辑错误 11.副词错误 4.谓语形式错误 12.句子结构错误 5.介词错误 13.短语搭配错误 6.非谓语动词错误 14.词性错误 7.冠词错误 15.关系代词错误 8.代词错误 16.关系副词错误,Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the school bus at 7:30 a.m The weather 1. was pleasant and every one of us was excited. After 2. two hours ride, we arrived there at nine thirty. We 3. began our programs as soon as we got off from the bus.4. We played games on the hillside and swimming in the 5. river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In afternoon 6. we walked along the river, that winds around the hills. 7. we took a lot of photo and enjoyed ourselves very 8. much. Time past quickly and we had to come back. 9. It was over five oclock when we returned school. 10. What a good trip we had today! Ill never forget it.,001,in,hours,from,swam,the,which,photos,passed,to,步骤和方法,通读全文, 掌握大意 改错题毕竟是考查学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力, 只有把握全文的命脉,如体裁、时态、人物和主要情节等,才有可能找出是时态错误还是上下文逻辑错误等. 此时也能使考生在把握全文之后心理上放松,切不可读一行该一行. 二.整句理解, 逐行推敲. 通读全文之后, 要细致地分析每一个完整的句子,不要被试题的故意设行所打断,一个句子可能占几行要按照先总后分的顺序来推敲.,1.复合句,找出主从句的从属连词,看是否合乎逻辑,主从句的时态是否一致. 2.并列句,看有没有and, but, or, so等并列连词,并列连词使用恰当吗? 3.简单句,那么它属于五种基本句型的哪种?主、谓、宾、宾补是否有误? 4.句型若正确,得按先后顺序耐心检查每个细节,看属于我们总结的哪类错误. 5.看一看有没有上下文逻辑错误. 三.复读全文,检查核对.,002,On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself 1. to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 2. to London, and visit the British Museum and some 3. parks. But I have spent most my money, so I cannot 4. even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 5. Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your6. stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 7. concert cost so much. I may just listen to music. I have 8. some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 9. to my own records, there are no need to spend money.10. All right, thats what Im going to do.,On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself1. to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 2. to London, and visit the British Museum and some 3. parks. But I have spent most my money, so I cannot 4. even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 5. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your6. stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 7. concert cost so much. I may just listen to music. I have 8. some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 9. to my own records, there are no need to spend money.10. All right, thats what Im going to do.,002,On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself 1. to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 2. to London, and visit the British Museum and some 3. parks. But I have spent most my money, so I cannot 4. even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 5. Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your6. stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 7. concert cost so much. I may just listen to music. I have 8. some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 9. to my own records, there are no need to spend money.10. All right, thats what Im going to do.,myself,visiting,of,exciting,But,costs,given,is,the,短文改错的步骤与方法 小结: 一.通读全文, 掌握大意. 二.整句理解, 逐行推敲. 1.复合句 2.并列句 3.简单句 4.上下文逻辑错误. 三.复读全文,检查核对.,1.时态一致 eg. Sometimes we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once.(NMET2004) 全文都是一般现在时,此句中talked显然与上下文不一致,应改为talk. 2主谓一致 eg. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.(04 福建) 主语为her parents,谓语应为复数,应改为were.,短文改错的解题基本技巧,3.平行一致 eg. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. 此题迷惑性较大,乍一看,应该没问题.但 felt 后应跟形容词,lonely是形容词,而 helplessly是副词,应改为helpless. 4 .数的一致 名词的数须与其修饰语保持一致 eg. you can find all kinds of information in just a few minute on the Internet. A few只修饰复数名词,如保持一致, minute应改为 minutes.,5. 主饰一致 句中的主要词(中心词)应与其修饰词间保持一致. eg. I would learn a lot of new words from these books ,but I had terribly problems memorizing them. 修饰名词Problems的应为形容词, terribly应改为terrible. 6. 指代一致 用于指代的各类代词在数,格,性上与上下文保持一致. eg It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we Used to 此句为强调句型,其中被强调部分us 应该是句中主语,故应改为we.,7.语态一致 句中谓语动词或非谓语动词应与上下文语态保持一致. eg I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts. 非谓语动词Giving 与其逻辑主语应该是动宾关系,故应为given, have something done. 8.搭配一致 句中的固定搭配应保持完整并与上下文一致 eg They make their lives by collecting and selling used things. make a/ones living是固定搭配,不受其前代词 their影响,只可用 living. 9.逻辑一致 这是一种隐蔽性较强的且年年必考的错误,检查时应通篇考虑,重点在代词，连词,肯定与否定,及相应的动词如 come与go. eg ,Unfortunately, I wont be able to visit you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. 从全句可知,此处应为解释原因,故although应改为. because,003,I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet, I was 1. then in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left 2. home at early age, We met lots of problems in our daily life.3. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us.4. However,we seldom felt lonely or helplessly.We enjoyed5. our happy life. At weekends, we would pay basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic. We were living in 6. a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters.7. If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, 8. the other would help him out. It has been five years 9. when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet 10. as ever before.,yet,an,ourselves,helpless,swim,treated,others,since,were,短文改错的基本解题技巧 小结: 1.时态一致 6. 指代一致 2.主谓一致 7.语态一致 3.平行一致 8.搭配一致 4 .数的一致 9.逻辑一致 5. 主饰一致,More exercises for you !,004,Aeroplanes are slow driving me mad. I live near an 1. airport and passing planes can be heard at night and day.2. The airport was built during the war, but for some reasons3. it could not be used then, Last year, therefore, it came 4. to use. Over a hundred people must have been driven 5. away from their homes by the noise. I am one of a few 6. people left. Sometimes I think this house will be knock 7. down by a passing plane. I have offered a large sum of 8. money to go away, but I determined to stay here.Every-9. boby says I must be mad and they are probably right. 10.,slowly,at,reason,however,into,the,knocked