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高考英语二轮 专项写作综合,你校校报急需在校内招聘一位同学任英文版编辑, 请你以学生会的名义用英文以An English Editor Wanted 为题写一则招聘启事,要点如下: 1.工作内容:从英文报刊 杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章;挑选和编辑同学们来稿. 2.要求: 乐意贡献出一些业余时间为同学们服务;英文,美术皆好; 能熟练使用电脑. 3.请感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系. 注意: 字数不少于60.,演练,招聘启示写作技巧: 首先招聘启事, 要有吸引力, 且文字应容易为人们所明白. 启事是一种公告性的应用文.无论机关,团体,单位还是个人需要向公众说明什么事情,求得什么帮助,都可以要把说明的事情写成启事告知大众.通常,启事是张贴在广告栏或墙上,必要时也可以登报.常见的启事有招聘启事,失物启事,招领启事等. 启事的写法: 把启事内容的关键词作为文章的标题写在正文的正上方 如等. 2. 发布启事的日期写在正文的右上方,或省去不写. 3.发布启事的单位或个人的署名写在正文的右下方. 4. 启事一般不用称呼,形式灵活多样,语言言简意赅,内容生 动活泼,招聘启事开头表达: Our school paper is in great need of Our shool paper is starving for Our shool paper is looking for 对申请人要求时可说: The applicant must He should . are necessary/ essential if you get the job, you should 交待联系方式: Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with Will anyone interested in the job please get in touch with? Will anyone interested in the job please contact.? Apply to ,我校校报急需在校内招聘一位同学任英文版编辑 our school paper is in great need of our shool paper is starving for our shool paper is looking for 从英文报刊 杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章 choose from suitable for 挑选和编辑同学们来稿. pick out edit them for use. 要求: 乐意贡献出一些业余时间为同学们服务 The applicant must devote to He should . spare time are necessary/ essential serve if you get the job, you should 英文,美术皆好; 能熟练使用电脑. be good at do well in the ability to 请感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系. Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with Will anyone interested in the job please get in touch with? Will anyone interested in the job please contact.? Apply to ,An English Editor Wanted Our school paper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet suitable for us students. the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use. We hope that he / she could meet the following requirements: first, he / she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others. Second, its necessary for him / her to be good at both English and art. Whats more, the ability to use the computer is important as well. Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the students union this week. students union,单句翻译： 1. 我除了学英语，还学法语。 2. 这件事对你我都很重要。 3. 他不光给我钱，还给我建议。 4. 他不仅是著名诗人，还是著名剧作家。 5. 他们去了长城，我也去了。,. Im learning French as well as English. . It is important for you as well as for me. . He gave me money as well as advice. . He was not only a famous poet but also a well-known play writer. . They went to the Great Wall and I went as well.,6. 我的家乡是一个占地36平方公里，人口20万 的小镇。 7. 解放前，人们生活很艰苦。 8. 20年来，这里发生了巨大的变化。 9. 这里建起了公园、商场、影院、医院，还有 学校。 10. 人们的生活丰富多彩。,. My hometown, with a population of 200 thousand and covering an area of 36 square kilometers, is a small town. . Before liberation, people there lived a hard life. . Great changes have taken place there in the past 20 years. . Besides schools, parks, shops, cinemas and hospitals have also been set up. . Peoples lives are rich and colourful.,必背的关联词60 个 表示而且 whats more besides in addition Furthermore meanwhile not only- but also- as well as to begin with / First of all/ First / Second/Third,表示对照 however on the other hand on the contrary,表示因果 as a result therefore thus otherwise,表示目的 for this reason for this purpose so that in order to in case,表示总结 in a word in short in brief in conclusion in other words generally speaking,表示强调 in fact as a matter of fact to tell the truth last but not least above all the most important without any doubt believe it or not Only in this way,表示个人观点 in my opinion as far as I know as far as I am concerned As we all know,表示解释 that is in this case for example actually as for,表示条件 as long as,at first early in the morning this morning the other day,soon later on after a while several minutes later,finally in the end at last,suddenly immediately at once,表示时间,表示方位 by the side of next to in the middle of in front of,1 我认为，志愿者工作不仅对社会有利，而且 对他们自己有好处，因此志愿者是光荣的，我们 都应积极参加，使我们的国家变得更和谐更美丽。 2 为了援助贫困边远地区的教育，一些志愿者加入 到西部建设中.同时，还有些志愿者组织各种活动 宣传环境保护的重要性。,用恰当的关联词翻译,In my opinion, doing voluntary work will do much good not only to society but also to the volunteers themselves. Therefore, volunteers are honorable and we should take an active part in it to make our country more beautiful and harmonious.,In order to improve the standard of education in those remote and less developed areas, some volunteers join in the Go West Project. Whats more, some others organize various activities to help people realize the importance of protecting our environment.,大约75%的学生上大学有必要，因为高等教育能 增加知识，提高个人素质。然而，15%的学生认为 上大学没有用，因为大学毕业生找到好工作很困难。 而且，学费也太高，付不起。剩余的10%认为条条 道路通罗马，所以他们认为是否上大学无所谓。,About 75% of the students think it necessary to go to college, for further education can increase their knowledge and improve their personal qualities as well. However, 15% of the students think that it is no use going to college because its extremely difficult for college graduates to get satisfactory jobs. In addition, the tuition is too high for them to pay for. The remaining 10% hold the view that “ All roads lead to Rome”. Therefore they think it doesnt make any difference whether they go to college or not.,According to my investigation, some 10 percent of the migrant children are out of school and about 75% of them can only attend cheap private schools where they are offered a poor quality of education with few facilities and few qualified teachers. I think the reasons are as follows: to start with, the parents are too busy to care about their children. Secondly, they havent enough money to pay their tuition fees for urban public schools.,Nowadays, more and more people prefer western festivals to traditional ones. There are many reasons. First, some companies try to encourage to consume as much as possible, for in this way they can make a large fortune. Second, according to our traditions, we usually pay much attention to eating and drinking during traditional festivals, which most people and tired of, while western festivals focus on entertainment and fun. Besides, the ways people spend western festivals are various and attractive. So, I suggest more activities should be organized by the government to promote our traditional culture, and traditional festivals should be set as public holidays so they dont die out someday. We should value our traditional culture and try to celebrate our own festivals in a more interesting way.,运用,The “ Sunshine Physical Education” program, started by the Ministry of Education, requires students to do sports at least one hour a day. Due to heavy homework, most students, especially we middle school students, hardly have time to do physical exercise. Whats more, PE classes are often cancelled. As a result, many of us are near-sight and our health is continuously declining. Physical exercise will not give us a chance to co-operate with others, thus forming a good habit of getting alone with others. In my opinion, body building is important and necessary for us, However busy, we should spare some time to take exercise every day. Only in this way can we be equal to our future jobs.,学生习作 AEFC is a good textbook for middle school students. First, the text goes with interesting colour pictures. So it is easy to understand the main idea of the text. Second, the main ideas gets close to times and life and inspire students to join in it. Furthermore, it can improve our reading and writing, even listening and speaking. Besides, I suggest SEFC open more titles to discuss and add some texts about the education of English. Also, in the listening text, add some English songs. In that case, I think AEFC will be much better than now, and it will be the most popular text.,Im fond of weekends because I can not only have a rest but also help others. Long before, a shop was open in front of my house, which is run by an old woman. Everyday the shop is crowed so that she cant stop to have a rest. So I go to help her every weekend. I think it makes my weekends much valuable.,First of all, the book contains a lot of pictures, interesting and beautiful. It is so good that we like it very much. Secondly, the story of the book is fit of r the period and the life of nowadays. It makes the students study actively. The most important thing is that SEFC can improve our reading and writing, especially the listening and speaking. Although it is more interesting, it can add more stories which are interesting enough. It also increases the articles about the culture of the England and America. In the listening of the book, the music is good. This is my advice. AEFC will have a good future.,One the one hand, I can help my mother clean up the rooms, or plant some beautiful flowers int the yard. It is so interesting that I like it. On the other hand, I can do something freely, for example, reading some books, watching TV and so on. There is no doubt that my weekend is interesting.,First, on my weekends, I always go out for a perfect morning-walking, so I can hear the sound from the nature, such as the bird-singing. Second, I can spend a sweet time with my family. The most important is that can do some housework for my mother in order not to make her always so tired. So I always look forward to weekends.,For example, first the texts with interesting colour pictures make the book more beautiful. Second, the information is not only close to the modern time, close to the life, but also make the students take part in it actively. The third, it can improve reading, writing, especially the abilities of listening and speaking. But I want to give some advice. First, make many interesting problems to discuss. Second, add some texts which are about the culture of England to us. At last, please add some English songs in listening. that may be good. This is my idea about SEFC. Thank you.,Although it is very good, I still have some suggetion. I think these three ways will make SEFC perfect in the future. I feel Im part of them. Thats how I usually spend weekends, so always look forward to weekends. When the weekends, which I have hoped for a long time, come, I am very happy. The articles agree with the era, agree with life and make students enjoy joining in it. I hope it can have more interesting questions to discuss. And I love discussing my faourite subjects with my good friends.,The text have a lot of interesting colour pictures. And the content of the texts are close to our life that make us join in the stories actively. Besides, it can improve our reading and writing. The most important of it is to improve our listening and speaking. We all like to use it. Meanwhile, I have several advice. I hope that it can create more interesting questions to discuss, and add some articles about the culture of America and England. After that, I hope it can add some English songs in listening to make us appreciate. In a word, I hope SEFC can become better and better.,It is all my advice, expecting SEFC can accept it. 肖萌 After that, I watch TV to 11:30. I often go to see my friends and play with them until its dark. it can encourage students to join in it and improve reading and writing. So the middle school students have better listening and actively attend English learning. I think SEFC is the book which can help students English. If that suggestion can be done, English will become a “pop” subject.,Notice,The StudentsUnion May 4, 2004,通知的格式：,Announcement,Ladies and gentlemen, Dear friends, Boys and girls,May I have you attention please?Attention, please!,Thats all. Thank you.,通知套语背一背：,Ladies and Gentleman, Attention please! Im very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be held at 2:00 pm on May 4. It will be held in the reading-room. It will be given by Professor Donald White from Illinois University. He is on a visit to our school. Professor White will give us a talk on the difference between American English and British English pronunciations. I think you will be interested in it. After the lecture, well have a discussion on the subject. Im sure well learn a lot from it. Please attend the lecture on time. Dont forget to take notes while listening. Thats all. Thank you.,Ladies and Gentleman,Attention please!,Thats all. Thank you.,Im very glad to,I think,Im sure,1, 2, 3, 4,Please attend,the lecture on time. Dont forget to take notes while listening.,范文 Notice It has been decided that an English writing composition will be held in our school. All the students are welcome to take part in the competition. The compositions must be about the lives of us students. First prize will be given to the five best compositions, second prize to ten compositions and third prize to twelve compositions. The writing composition will be judged by our English teachers and five winners will be chosen to take part in the English writing competition of the city, which is to be held in August. The Students Union May 4, 2008,训练 你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播 中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友能听懂，请你用 英文写一篇广播通知。 宗旨： 欢迎来访的美国朋友 组织者： 学生会 时间： 8月15日（星期六）晚 7：30 地点： 主楼楼顶花园 活动内容：音乐、跳舞、唱歌、交换小礼物（请包装好、签名 并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词） roof garden exchange gifts sign your name wrap it up The Student Union,May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes. Dont forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, main building. Theres sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.,写 人,写人经典句型翻译： 1 她12岁。 2 她细高条，长着大眼睛，卷头发。 3 她善良，乐于助人，总是愿意帮助别人解决困难。 4 业余时间她喜欢听音乐读小说。 5 她与任何人都能相处的很好，无论到哪都很受欢迎。,She is a girl of twelve years old.,She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.,Being kind and helpful, she always enjoys helping others out.,In her spare time, she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.,She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.,描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语：,good-looking- hard-working- bad-tempered- warm-hearted- absent-minded- dependent- clever- humorous- attractive- talkative- naughty-,pretty beautiful ugly diligent lazy easy-going patient hard-hearted undivided independent smart bright intelligent wise serious ordinary silent quite,confident imaginative brave shy determined strict energetic educated,描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语：,passive mean rude impolite,active-,generous-,friendly-,polite -,自信的 有想象力的 勇敢的 害羞的 有决心的 严格的 精力旺盛的 有良好教育的,表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用表达： (一句多译）,他非常喜欢音乐。,He likes/ loves music very much. He enjoys listening to music. He is interested in music. He is fond of music. He is crazy about music. He is good at music. He has a gift for music. He was born a singer.,他不喜欢音乐。,He doesnt like music. He hates music. He is tired of music. He lost interest in music.,他擅长音乐。,sad happy angry anxious curious eager satisfied excited pleased worried disappointed terrified,描述人物心情的常用词语：,She is still absent. I _ her health. We _your safe return. Tom _ come to the party. I_know what is written in his letter. Children _ naturally _ everything about them. I failed the exam. My parents _ the result. The children _the very thought of the journey. They _by his sudden appearance.,am anxious about,are anxious for,is eager to,am curious to,are,curious about,were disappointed at/about/with,are excited at,were terrified,Our Monitor Our monitor Lu Wentao is not tall or handsome,but he is very popular at school.He has a good personality,Wentao is funny and forgiving.His stories and jokes make all of us laugh,especially when we are in low spirits.Yet when someone tries to make fun of him,he never gets angry.As a monitor,Wentao is friendly to every classmate.No matter who asks him for help,he is always warm-hearted and generous.He is also a reliable person.Both teachers and student trust him.Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom,making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.,Wentao is funny and forgiving.,His stories and jokes make all of us laugh,especially when we are in low spirits.Yet when someone tries to make fun of him,he never gets angry.,As a monitor,Wentao is friendly to every classmate.,No matter who asks him for help,he is always warm-hearted and generous.,He is also a reliable person.,Both teachers and student trust him.Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom,making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.,How to describe a persons personality or characteristics,When you describe a persons character and behaviour, please remember to Support your description with examples.,Organization of a composition,Brief introduction Name of the person The relationship between you and him/her Main body Personality characteristics His/Her activities or achievements Conclusion Your comments/feelings about the person,写人常用结尾句：,他不仅是我们的老师也是我们的朋友， 我们尊重他爱戴他。 他是我们学习的榜样。 有他这样的朋友我感到很骄傲。 这就是我的父亲：勤劳、善良。我爱我的父亲。,He is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love his.,He has set a very good example for us all to foll