四级考试图表作文写作技巧.ppt

图表作文,图表作文,What Jobs Do College Students Want To Do Change in Peoples Diet 对策: 1).描述图表内容特别是图表中的变化趋势.(先总的变化趋势,后重点用第一、中间、最后几个数据阐述总的变化趋势data support）（重点） 2).解释某一变化的原因（注意主题句细节的阐述模式，且要注重委婉客观表达）（次重点） 3).作出结论或提出存在的问题 （略写）,After-5_Some useful ,常见的图表作文的第一句话,1) The picture /curve /pie chart shows 2) This table shows the differences between 3) The diagram represents 4) The chart above indicates/presents 5) The information represented in the graph indicates,6) As can be seen from the chart, 7) As is shown in the bar graph, there were 8) From the diagram it can be seen clearly that 9) From these figures one can easily see that 10) According to the graph given above, we can see that,11) This is an illustration of/a typical example of 12) There was a great/slight increase/rise. 13) There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop 14) Take the above chart as an example, 15. From the data( figures) presented in the table( graph/ chart/ curve) we can conclude that,图表描述时的经典句型,1. There was an (very) slight/slow/gradual /small/ steady drop (decline/ fall /reduction/decrease in sth 2. There was an (very ) sudden/ dramatic/ large/ rapid/ sharp/ marked rise in sth 注意：务必要注意主谓一致问题，即到底是谁升，谁降问题,图表式 模式1 From the graph, we know the statistics of _ and _. It can be seen easily that_. There are many reasons responsible for this instance, and the following are the typical ones. For one thing, _. In addition,_. The main reason is that_. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe _.,模式 2 As shown in the pictures, We can see that_. From the figure in the chart, we can come to a conclusion that_. There are reasons for _. First , _. Besides,_. In conclusion/therefore,_.,Changes in Peoples Diet:,As can be seen from the table, great changes took place in peoples diet from 1986 to 1990. The consumption of grain decreased year by year with percentage from 49% (1986) to 45% (1990), while that of some high-energy food, such as milk (from 10% to 13%) and meat (from 17% to 21%), increased steadily. ,Brief introduction of the chart + General trend + Data support 注意时态,Why were there changes in peoples diet? There may be two major reasons, I think. First, people were more likely to afford to buy more expensive food with better nutrition. Second, people tended to pay more attention to the quality of their diet, because they might know it was of great benefit to their health to eat in a scientific way. Therefore, there was great possibility for them to improve the structure of their food.,Reasons Analysis 表达要委婉,同时注意时态,From the above, we can see that peoples living standard had been improved markedly in the five years between 1986-1990. And we can also expect that their life would be more prosperous in the years to come.,总结并合理预测（酌情处理）,What Jobs Do College Students Want to Do,目前学生择业状况 男女学生就业选择的区别 我的观点,目前学生择业状况 男女学生就业选择的区别,我的观点,The bar chart above represents the difference between boy and girl students in choosing jobs after their graduation from colleges. As can be seen from the chart, the most striking contrast is in the occupation of teaching: 45% of girls students would like to do the job whereas there is the smallest group of boys (5%) who want to do the same.What boys like to do most is to become managers (40%) and the second largest group is to be businessmen with boys 30% and girls 25%. However, very few students prefer to be scientists with 5% of girls and 10% of boys respectively.,Brief introduction of the chart + General trend + Data support 注意时态,It can be easily seen that teaching is preferred by females as it is most likely to provide a more regular and purer life. Womens patience also fits the job well. Boys may consider working as scientist, managers, businessmen and lawyers more demanding and stimulating. It is true that more boys want to show their talents in these fields. One thing worthy of note is that the number of girls wanting to do business is not small. This shows that girls also want to do the challenging and exciting jobs.,分析数据背后的