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高水平作文的要求：Criteria(IELTS Band 7 Descriptors)Task Achievementl Addresses all parts of the taskl Presents a clear position throughout the responsel Presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focusCoherence & Cohesionl Logically organizes information and ideas; there is a clear progression throughoutl Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-usel Presents a clear central topic within each paragraphLexical Resourcel Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precisionl Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocationl May produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling, and/or word formationGrammatical Range and Accuracyl Uses a variety of complex structures l Produces frequent error-free sentencesl Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors引言段 一句用改写的方式扣题，另一句承上启下。正文段 写两句或者三句，给出两个或者三个理由。结论段 一两句呼应主题，另一两句升华论述。一、赞同与反对型Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood.（不同意这个观点）This issue is a controversial one that affects the daily life of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally disagree with the title statement for my reasons below.With reference to living surroundings, the reason why I disagree with building a shopping center near my community is that it would be very noisy. Simply speaking, consumers or shoppers may disrupt the daily life of people in the local community. For example, if a shopping mall will be built, it would attract thousands of people and consequently, a lot of noisy and trash as well. Although the majority may stick to the idea that this new supermarket will be good for whole people in and out of the community, I still think its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.Second, a shopping mall always occupies much space. If a community newly includes a shopping mall, it will become crowded and may lose some grassland. Obviously, we will not be able to see the green trees behind the mall or appreciate the night sky clearly. As an illustration, private cars and delivery trunks are always seen to come in and go out of the community. Consequently, what we may hear is noisy and what we see is a mess. Finally, if a shopping center were built, the overall result would have an adverse effect on peoples health because automobiles emit exhausted gas and trash will be seen everywhere. Putting too much emphasis on this, it will obviously result in obscuring other facts. As far as I am concerned, I completely believe that we cannot ignore the need of health due to the convenience of buying something. Moreover, it is impossible that we are crazy for healthy life in such an unpleasant condition.To sum up, I would state my point on this issue after analyzing the three reasons again. It is true that building a shopping mall in a community will interrupt local residents and harm the environment and human beings health. So it is sagacious/wise to support the statement that it is better to build it in he suburb or other places. 分析版This issue is a controversial one that affects the daily life of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally disagree with the title statement for my reasons below.With reference to living surroundings主题词, the reason why I disagree with building a shopping center near my community 选取的观点is that it would be very noisy理由一. Simply speaking, consumers or shoppers may disrupt the daily life of people in the local community进一步说明. For example, if a shopping mall will be built, it would attract thousands of people and consequently, a lot of noisy and trash as well举例说明. Although the majority may stick to the idea that this new supermarket will be good for the whole people in and out of the community相反的观点, I still think its drawbacks outweigh the benefits重申观点.Second, a shopping mall always occupies much space理由二. If a community newly includes a shopping mall假设在这种情况下, it will become crowded and may lose some grassland会导致的结果. Obviously, we will not be able to see the green trees behind the mall or appreciate the night sky clearly进一步说明结果. As an illustration, private cars and delivery trunks are always seen to come in and go out of the community举例说明. Consequently, what we may hear is noisy and what we see is a mess这一段的结果.Finally, if a shopping center were built列出 一个反面情况, the overall result would have an adverse effect on peoples health这个情况的结果 because automobiles emit exhausted gas and trash will be seen everywhere为什么. Putting too much emphasis on this, it will obviously result in obscuring other facts. As far as I am concerned, I completely believe that we cannot ignore the need of health due to the convenience of buying something不同意的理由三. Moreover, it is impossible that we are crazy for healthy life in such an unpleasant condition.进一步说明你的陈述To sum up, I would state my point on this issue after analyzing the three reasons again. It is true that building a shopping mall in a community will interrupt local residents and harm the environment and human beings health总结全文三个理由. So it is sagacious/wise to support the statement that it is better to build it in he suburb or other places提出建议，升华论文. （同意这个观点）This issue is a controversial one that affects the daily life of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally agree with the title statement for my reasons below.With reference to living surroundings, the reason why I agree with building a shopping center near my community is that it will save more time. Simply speaking, current shopping center are always built so far away from home that the residents often spend much time to buy something. For example, living far away from shopping malls makes me spend one hour, even more to get to buy what I need in my daily life. Although the majority may stick to the idea that the new supermarket erecting near my community will bring inconvenience, I still think going shopping in the nearby shopping center will save a lot of precious time fir us.Second, shopping near home not only saves time, but saves money and energy as well. If people who buy things in a suburb cannot afford a private car, it will take them much money or energy to take buses or taxis. Obviously, it s an enjoyable thing that spending less time to buy what we need at nearby market. As an illustration, when having a holiday, a mother can walk to go shopping with her family hand in hand. Consequently, they buy necessities effectively and enjoy a happy life. Finally, if a shopping center were built, the overall result would have an adverse effect on peoples quiet and peaceful life, to some extent. Putting too much emphasis on this, it will obviously result in obscuring other facts. As far as I am concerned, I completely believe that each citizen should focus on their future convenience, but not on some noisy. Moreover, we spend more time indoor so that a large part of our lives cannot be interrupted directly.To sum up, I would state my point on this issue after analyzing the three reasons again. It is true that almost every person will welcome this action and it will bring a lot of advantages for us. So it is sagacious/wise to support the statement that it is better to build the shopping center near our community. 题目范例：同意与否It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would e more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?范例解析：范文(多种技巧）A criticism often heard these days is that the subjects taught in schools tend to be too academic, and contribute little to preparing a young person for the real-life tasks he or she will have to perform after graduation. They say that academic subjects are rooted in the past, and are not useful for solving modern problems. I disagree with this point of view for three reasons.My first reason is that it is the duty of parents, not teachers, to prepare their children to deal with the practical affairs of life. The home, not the classroom, is the ideal place to learn about home management and interpersonal skills. As for work abilities and attitudes, they are best learned on the job and under the supervision of an experienced older worker.My second reason is that academic subjects have withstood the test of time. They represent the accumulated wisdom of our ancestors down through the ages, and, far from being impractical, they equip us with the knowledge and confidence to make sound judgments about any problems which may crop up. In addition, academic subjects are good for training us in mental discipline, while practical subjects are weak in this regard.My third reason is based on the saying Man does not live by bread alone. Schooldays devoted solely to instruction in down-to-earth practical matters would be dull indeed! Lessons in the best literature of the world, and the epoch-making scientific and geographical discoveries of the past enrich our lives and make us feel that we are part of the great family of mankind. All in all, the teaching of academic subjects in schools is entirely appropriate. It is my firmly held view that practical subjects have no place in the classroom. On the contrary, the curriculum should be more academic!本范文在结构上可以说是雅思作文的一个经典范例，而且操作性比较强，也就是说考生经过一段时间的学习，完全可以写出这样的文章来。首段简要描述题目设置的情况，说有一种观点认为学校教的课程学术性倾向太强tend to的意思是倾向于某事，这种观点是一种criticism批评），所以这种观点显然是反对学校教授学术性太浓的课程，紧接着作者旗帜鲜明地表明了自己的态度I disagree我是不同意这个观点的，同时说明不同意有三个理由，读者读到这里，就可以判断出正文将会从三个方面来阐述作者的立场。注意，这里作者是说我不同意，而不是说我认为，这一点就体现出agree or disagree和your opinion两类题目在写法上面的细微差别。第二段到第四段都是以Myreason is开头，这样显得结构十分清晰，考官即使不去细读文章的内容，也很容易抓住文章的整体思路，这种结构可以帮助考生构建一个清晰的文章框架。回到文章的内容上来，第二段实际上是在针对首段中提出的观点进行反驳，首段中说学术性的课程不能帮助年轻人解决在实际生活中不得不去解决的实际问题，第二段就说帮助孩子学会如何解决实际问题是家长的责任而不是教师的责任，学习解决实际问题的场所应当是家庭而不是课堂，至于工作能力和态度应当在工作的时候去学习。第三段提出作者的第二个理由：学术性的课程经受了时间的考验，是我们的祖先积累下来的财富，可以帮我们对任何可能出现的问题做出比较正确的判断。同时与实用性的课程比较，学术性的课程在训练大脑思维方面也占有优势。第四段阐述第三个理由来证明作者的观点，先引用一句话人不仅仅靠面包活着，言下之意就是说实用性的课程就像面包一样，并不是生活的全部，学术性的课程使生活变得更加丰富多彩。综合以上谈到的三个原因，文章在结尾段指出：ALL in all(总而言之，在学校学术性的课程是完全适合的，然后进一步引申说明观点：实用性的课程在课堂上是没有立足之地的，应当多设置一些学术性的课程。 这类文章就是要写清楚自己的观点是同意还是不同意，绝对不要含糊其辞，要态度鲜明，同意就是同意，不同意就写不同意。Discuss类的文章可以在文中不明确表态，但是agre e ordisagree类的文章一定要说清楚自己的态度是什么。2、 喜好选择型Some students choose to study at home by using technology such as computer, television or the Internet, but others believe it is better to study at traditional school.Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.Different people have different views on how to study. When faced with the decision of studying at home by using modern technology or studying at traditional school from teachers, quite a few would claim the former choice will be more meaningful for all students. But others, in contrast, deem that staying and learning at school should be treated as the premier choice and that is also my choice. Among endless factors which influence how to choose a better way of learning, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity/preference for /inclination to learning from school is that conventional school education provides you with good opportunities to make friends and to develop your social skills. Staying in schools lets you become sufficiently prepared before you graduate from schools. The team spirit that is cultivated at school through student cooperation cannot be achieved through studying at home.Another reason can be seen by every person is it is much easier to concentrate on learning knowledge in classes than at home. This is not only because everybody studies together in classes, but because there are not so many distractions at school as there are at home. In addition, well-established schools supply students with a variety of advanced studying equipment.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in the position of advantage because teachers in schools may help you solve a problem timely and directly. After you finish an excellent job, you may share the success and pleasure with your teachers and classes. So it highly improves the efficiency of comprehension and you will build more powerful confidence.To sum up,I am one who has been studying in schools for twelve years and I will continue to study for five more years. There is no doubt that studying in schools and classes brought more benefits and I would prefer to choose the latter. 举一反三Some people choose to work in a large company, but others believe it is better to work in a small company.Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.Different people have different views on work choice. When faced with the decision of working for a large company or working for a small company, quite a few would claim the latter choice will have more advantages. But others, in contrast, deem that working for a large company should be treated as the premier首要的 choice and that is also my choice/point. Among endless factors which influence the final decision of working in a large company, there are three conspicuous 明显的aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity/preference for /inclination to working in a large company is that jobs in big companies such as Microsoft or Intel offer more opportunities for promotion than those at small computer company. Although some small companies may grow fast and also require more talents, I would rather to choose a company which has more positions to compete.Another reason can be seen by every person is that a large company often gives us more confidence to achieve success. For example, being employed by a global enterprise would prove my ability and techniques. We would, therefore, at such time, believe in ourselves since we were hired by a large powerful enterprise. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in the position of advantage because a large company or organization often has a working management strategy and a perfect welfare system. According to some experts, overwork, but without any extra salaries in small companies, is very common in Asia, though it is unfair. So choosing to work for a large company must be a proper and permanent way to achieve everyones success of career.To sum up, working in a large company can exert endless positive influences to everyones occupation and future. It is better for a person who has any ambitions and dreams to work for a large company to achieve promotion, build up self-confidence and obtain perfect welfare. 三、讨论式题目范例： It has been more than 30 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. Discuss. 范文： For over fifty years, a number of nations have been involved in the exploration of outer space. This research has been very costly, of course. Has this money been well-spent or wasted?Some people believe that all or most space research should be eliminated because of its incredible expense, not only in terms of money, but also in terms of scientific and human resources. These people point out the fact that it cost billions of dollars to send astronauts to the moon, but all they brought back were some worthless rocks. These people say that the money and effort now being wasted in outer space could be spent on more important projects right here on earth, such as providing housing for homeless people, improving the education system, saving the environment, and finding cures for diseases.However, other people believe that space research has provided many benefits to mankind. They point out that hundreds of useful products, from personal computers to heart pacemakers to freeze-dried foods, are the direct or indirect results of space research. They say that weather and communication satellites, which are also products of space programs, have benefited people all over the globe. In addition to these practical benefits, supporters of the space program point to the scientific knowledge that has been acquired about the sun, the moon, the planets, and even our own earth as a result of space research.I agree with those people who support space research and wish it to continue. Space research, as shown, has already brought many benefits to humanity. Perhaps it will bring even more benefits in the future, ones that we can not even imagine now. Moreover, just as individual people need challenges to make their lives more interesting, I believe the human race itself needs a challenge, and I think that the peaceful exploration of outer space provides just such a challenge.解析：这篇文章是dicuss类作文的一个典范，结构清晰，语言简洁明了 。首段对题目所设置的场景进行介绍：一些国家致力于外太空研究的时间已超过五十年了，由于这项研究的花费很大，所以就引起了一个问题：这笔钱到底花的值不值得，这正是本文所要讨论的问题。本文的主体段落从正反两个方面对文章的主题进行了讨论，先用一个自然段从反面论述，说明这笔钱花的不值得。在证明这个分支观点时又分别从两个方面来说，一是就金钱的角度而言，花了那么多钱送去外太空的宇航员所带回的都是不值钱的岩石，二是从科学资源和人力资源的角度来看这也是一种浪费。接下来的自然段作者笔锋一转，谈到有另外一些人认为外太空研究是值得的，并给出具体的例子进行论证。例如有许多新产品直接或间接地得益于外太空研究，除了实用的产品外，外太空研究还使人类获知了许多有关太空的科学知识。需要注意的是文章的结尾段。上文中已经说到过Discuss类的文章可以在结尾走向折中，也可以一边倒，本文采用了后者，对外太空研究表示支持。这一结论是在前一段的基础上得出的，虽然主体段落的第一段是谈反对的意见，但第二段是谈支持的意见，结尾段也自然而然地表明自己的观点是一边倒的。这种写法使文章的整体感十分明确，结论也是经过对事物双方面的辩证说明所得出的，从而显得很有说服力。四、问题+理由+建议题目范例： It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations. There is much discussion nowadays as to whether or not th