高一英语如何写英语作文ppt.ppt

假如你是李萌，家住北京，你的表妹家住在杭州。春节时你想利用假期到表妹家住一个月，然后再返回北京。写信告诉表妹你的计划： 1.春节旅游高峰期，不一定能够买到打折机票。全价飞机票比较贵，火车提速后比较方便，所以选择坐火车从北京到杭州； 2.同表妹在杭州火车站见面； 3.一个月后乘火车返回北京；,题目要求,作文训练1,4.最后，想听听表妹的意见。 注意：1.词数120150词； 2.不能逐点翻译，需要适当发挥； 3.格式已给出。,写作批阅,Dear cousin, How are you doing these days？Whenever I think of the holidays well spend together,I feel excited.Ive decided to go to Hangzhou by train rather than by air.I had planned to take plane there,but the problem is that,during the Spring Festival holidays,there is no guarantee that I can get a discount.At the same time, the train has speeded up,and its more convenient to take a train. Concerned the above matters, I decide to take TRAIN Z9 that arrives at 830 the next morning.When am in Hangzhou,Id like you to meet me at the station. And Id also like you to be my guide and then we can have a good time together.And one month later,before the new term begins,Ill go back home by train again.,What about your opinion?I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Yours, Li Meng,教师点评,1.How are you doing these days？中的doing应改为going, 因为How are you going？才表示“你近来咋样？”的意思。 2.I had planned to take plane there句中的take后加上冠词a。若用by时才不加冠词，即by plane。 3.Concerned the above matters中的concerned改为concerning。因为concerning是介词，意为“考虑到”，符合句子。 ,经典句式,1.Whenever I think of the holidays well spend together,I feel excited. 2,there is no guarantee that I can get a discount. 3.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.,题目要求,假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Ms.Lynn要来中国发展贸易,并准备在广州买一套合适的住房。碰巧前几天你在广州晚报上看到一则售房广告，现请你将广告内容用E-mail发给Ms.Lynn。词数：120150。房屋信息如下：1.位置：广州市天河区花园路; 到白云机场开车仅需30分钟; 2.环境：周围有广场、购物中心、停车场和游泳池等； 3.设施：卧室、客厅、厨房、浴室等； 4.详情请拨电话,作文训练2,写作批阅,Dear Ms.Lynn, Im glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. The other day,I happen to read an advertisement for a house for sale in Guangzhou Evening.And Im now writing to tell about it. The house located in Huayuan Road,Tianhe District,Guangzhou City,which is about half an hour from the Baiyun Airport by car.Around the building are a large square,a shopping center,a parking lot,a swimming pool and so on.And now I tell you,something about the house.It contains a bedroom,a living room,a kitchen and a bathroom.I believe it must be comfortable to live. If you want to know more information,you can just call Yours, Li Hua,教师点评,1.I happen to read an advertisement for a house for sale in Guangzhou Evening中的happen改为happened。根据时间状语the other day可知应用过去时态。 2.And Im now writing to tell about it.中的to tell后加you。,因为tell是及物动词其后应接双宾语，即tell sb.sth.;tell sb.about sth. 3.The house located in Huayuan Road中的located的前面加is。be located in 意为“坐落于某处”。 4.I believe it must be comfortable to live.中的live后加in。live表示“居住”时为不及物动词，句中live的逻辑宾语是it，故应在其后加上介词in。,经典句式,1,which is about half an hour from the Baiyun Airport by car. 2.Around the building are a large square,a shopping center,a parking lot,a swimming pool and so on.,题目要求,假定你是Amy, 收到网友李华的电子邮件, 说他上高中 后, 发现英语难学, 现在正因成绩难以提高而犯难。为此, 请你给他写一封回信。词数120150词。要点如下： 1.要相信自己, 不要放弃。信心是成功的关键和前提； 2.制定一个英语学习计划，如：早读、记日记和复习语 法等； 3.找一份与教材同步的英语报纸, 可以从中学会许多 知识。,作文训练3,写作批阅,Dear Li Hua, Im glad to have received from your letter but Im sorry to hear that you are having some difficulties with your English study.The following is my advice for you and I wish it will be of some help. First,believe yourself. Confidence is the most important element of success.As long as you have it,nothing is impossible. Second,make a plan for your English study.For example,keep on reading English aloud in the morning, keep a diary in English everyday and go over the grammar points in the evening., Third,get an English newspaper to go with the textbook and you will learn a lot from it. I hope you make great progress in your English study! Yours truly, Amy,1.Im glad to have received from your letter中的from 应该去掉。receive a letter from sb.收到某人的来信。 2.and I wish it will be of some help中的wish改为hope。此处 应用hope接宾语表示“希望”；wish表示愿望或祝愿，当其后接从句 时从句中要用虚拟语气。 3.First,believe yourself.中的believe后加in。Believe sb./sth. 通常表示相信某人所说的话；believe in sb./sth.则表示信任某 人或某事；believe in oneself意为“自信”。 ,教师点评,4.For example,keep on reading English aloud in the morning中去掉介词on。 keep doing sth.意为“不断做某事；坚持做某事”；keep on doing sth.则强调“断断续续的进行”。 5.keep a diary in Engl