2019_2020学年高中英语Module4MusicPeriodFive课件外研版选修6.pptx

,Music,Module 4,Period Five WritingWriting an email about a music survey,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,典例展示,PART 3,写作训练,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,写作指导,本单元的写作任务是回复一封有关音乐话题的电子邮件。回复电子邮件类的写作中应注意以下几点： 1.整体思路 回复电子邮件时，必须先弄清楚对方具体需要知道什么信息，这才是回复邮件的主题内容。 2.篇章结构 回复性邮件，一定不要忘记基本格式，可以在第一段表明很高兴收到对方发来的email；第二段告诉对方自己对此事的看法；第三段可以用比较随便和简明的句子结尾。描述要点时，需要注意层次清楚和过渡自然。,3.遣词用句 电子邮件通常用一般现在时，可适当参考列出的相关词汇和句型。电子邮件的语句没必要太复杂，笔友之间简洁、明了一些为好。关键点在于如何恰当地使用关联词或过渡性语句把所给要点准确地表达出来。,1.回复邮件开头常用句式： (1)I am glad to receive your letter. (2)How happy I am when I know. (3)Thanks for your letter，its my pleasure to do. 2.表达看法常用句式： (1)As far as I am concerned. (2)In my opinion . (3)As for me. (4)Personally，I prefer. (5)My own point of view is that.,常用表达,PART 2,典例展示,经典示例 感悟体会佳作,假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Lucy给你写了一封邮件，问了你一些关于生活中的音乐的事情，请根据以下内容给她回复。 1.你最喜欢的音乐 2.解释你为什么对某些音乐不太感兴趣； 3.阐明音乐在你生活中的重要性(一到两点)。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,写作要求,佳作欣赏,Dear Lucy， Thanks for your letter.You asked me something about music in my life.Let me tell you briefly. Music，without which I even cant live，is an important part in my life.Actually，I like many kinds of music.Well，my favourite music is American country music，such as Take Me Home，Country Road.It mixes some modern melodies；it sounds very nice and pure，which can bring me into dreamland.Whenever I am in trouble，I will turn on the MP5 or the tape recorder and the soft melody will make me relaxed.,Im not interested in rock music.I think it is too loud and difficult for me to understand.The melody is not soft and nice at all！I cant stand the strong beat，which nearly makes me faint! In a word，music has a very important place in my life. How about you？Write to tell me about music in your life.I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua,PART 3,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,现在有许多选秀活动，因此有些学生不顾学业去参加这些活动。假如你叫楚志，你的网友Mike发email给你，说他想休学一段时间去参加一个选秀节目。请写一封100词左右的邮件回复Mike，表明你的看法。 参考词汇：休学quit school；偶像idol,审题 1.确定体裁：本文为应用文电子邮件。 2.确定中心人称：本文的主要人称为第一、二人称。 3.确定主体时态：主要使用一般现在时。,审题谋篇,谋篇 第一部分：就对方的决定发表自己的否定看法。 第二部分：给出否定对方的理由。 第三部分：作总结，告诉对方正确的认识。,必备词汇 1.借口 _ 2.合理的 _ 3.不同意 _ 4.为设计 _ 5.简言之 _,遣词造句,查看答案,excuse,reasonable,disagree with,be designed for,in short/brief,关键句式 1.我认为这不是你放弃学习的好借口。 It is not a good excuse for you to give up your study，I think. 2.许多电视选秀节目是为能参加音乐比赛的青少年设计的。 Many TV shows are designed for teenagers and they can take part in lots of music contests. 3.我们应该做的最重要的事情是学习。 Studying is the most important thing for us.,句式升级 1.用否定转移改写句1 _ 2.把句2改为who引导的定语从句 _ _ 3.把句3改为定语从句 _,查看答案,I dont think it is a good excuse for you to give up your study.,Many TV shows are designed for teenagers who can take part in lots of music contests.,The most important thing that we should be doing is studying.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100字左右的英语短文,组句成篇,参考范文 Dear Mike， Ive heard that you want to quit school to attend the show Searching for Music Talent，I disagree with you totally.I dont think it is a good excuse for you to give up your study.,查看答案,I know that nowadays more and more teenagers have the ambition of being superstars.Many TV shows are designed for teenagers who can take part in lots of music contests.As students，the most important thing we should be doing is studying.Developing our hobbies is also important，but we should develop