高考写作之道歉信.ppt

假定你是李华。你校外教史密斯先生给你发来一封电子邮件，邀请你本周六上午陪他去市博物馆看中国当代油画展（ Chinese Contemporary Oil Painting Exhibition ）。但是你有事不能同往。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 你的打算 注意：1.字数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Mr. Smith, Thank you for your invitation to enjoy the Chinese Contemporary Oil Painting Exhibition this Saturday morning. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cant go along with you, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago. I have caught a serious cold with a continuous fever last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was so cold. I thought I would recover after these days, but things go contrary to my wishes. Therefore, I couldnt make it. I feel really sorry for not going with you and the inconvenience it would bring to you. I hope we can arrange another time afterwards. If so, dont hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant time with you. Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. Yours faithfully, Lihua,道歉信 A Letter of apology,Structures,Para 1：简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。 Para 2：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。 Para 3：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。 Para 4：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。,以上两段有时会合二为一,经典套用句型 精彩句首： I am writing this letter to apologize to you for not being able to 我写这信是因向你道歉 I express my regret at being unable to do 对未能做，我表示歉意 Much to my regret I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you at the park gate.很抱歉我没有遵守约定在公园门口等您。 I feel terribly sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a pity to miss the opportunity. 对突然的改变，我感到十分的抱歉，对错过这个机会感到很可惜。,精彩段中 Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 请原谅我说话欠妥。 I feel awfully sorry about it and want you know what happened. 为此，我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。 I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally. 我真心希望你能理解，我并非有意冒犯您。,精彩结尾 I will try my best to avoid the accident happening again in the future. 我将尽全力避免将来发生同样的事故。 I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. 真诚的希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。 Please accept my apology. I do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness.,其他常用句式,1. Would you mind if I change the appointment time? 2. Would it be convenient for you? 3. It is very kind of you to ask us to But, to our regret, we cannot accept it. 4. I am sorry I cannot and I trust that you will be able to understand. 5. I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.,书面表达 假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。但 由于一些原因没有赴约，特写信表示歉意，并希 望另约时间。内容如下： （1）表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）未能赴约的原因 （3）希望另约时间 要求：100字左右 开头已给出，不计总数,Dear smith, Im writing to apologize to you for my failing to keep the appointment that we should meet at 3pm yesterday when you will give me some advice on how to learn English well._ _ _ _ _ sincerely yours, Li Hua,开头 Im writing to make an apology to you for missing our appointment at 3 oclock yesterday afternoon, when you planned /intended to give me advice on how to learn English well. Im writing to be sorry for being unable to keep the appointment we made at 3 oclock yesterday afternoon, when you planned /intended to give me advice on how to learn English well. Im writing to express my sorry for not being able to meet you at 3:00 yesterday afternoon as we appointed, when you planned / intended to give me some advice on how to learn English well.,结尾： I hope you can give me another chance to make an appointment with you again. I will appreciate it if you can give me another chance to meet me. Hope you can forgive me and give me another chance to meet me.,内容 未能赴约的具体原因：可任选其一 1.我叔叔从美国回来, 3:00时下飞机。然而，我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。 2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。 3.在去见Smith的路上，自己的车坏了，不能按时去约见他。 4.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院 5.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。,未能赴约原因： 1. 我叔叔从美国回来,下午3点时分下飞机。然而，我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。 Yesterday afternoon, my uncle came from America and got off at 3pm, but my parents had no time to pick him up, in which case I had to meet him at the airport. After that it was too late to meet you. Thus I missed our appointment.,2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。 My younger sister had a bad fever. She is too young to look after herself, and my parents were at work. Therefore / In that case, I had to stay at home to take care of her. That caused me unable to meet you as appointed. My younger sister had a bad fever. She is too young to look after herself, and my parents were at work, in which case I had to stay at home to take care of her. That caused me unable to meet you as appointed.,趁热打铁 3.在去见Smith的路上，自己的车坏了，不能按时去约见他。 4.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院 5.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。,Dear Mr Smith, Im writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment on 3 yesterday afternoon, which you intended to give me advice on English learning. Im sorry for the inconvenience it caused to you. You may be willing to accept an explanation. However, I dont want you to misunderstand me. On my way to your office, I happen to see a car accident. The old man was bad injured, but nobody came to offer help. So I stopped a taxi and sent her to a nearby hospital. I stayed there for several hour until his son came, and that caused me to miss our appointment. I am aware that our appointment is great importance. I do hope it that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable time to meet me again. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,_,at,_,when,_,unwilling,_,happened,_,An,_,badly,_,him,_,hours,of,Dear Mr Smith, 作文范文推荐 Im writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment at 3 yesterday afternoon, when you intended to give me advice on English learning. Im sorry for the inconvenience it caused to you. You may be unwilling to accept an explanation. However, I dont want you to misunderstand me. On my way to your office, I happened to see a car accident. An old man was badly injured, but nobody came to offer help. So I stopped a taxi and sent him to a nearby hospital. I stayed there for several hours until his son came, and that caused me to miss our appointment. I am aware that our appointment is of great importance. I do hope that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable time to meet me again. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,假如你叫李华，你的一位美国留学生朋友Peter邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的生日聚会，但你不能参加，请根据以下内容给他写一封电子邮件： 表达想参加的意愿 说明不能参加的理由 表示歉意并另约时间 注意： 词数100左右； 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday.,Dear Peter I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is very kind of you to invite me to your house and I hopefully want to celebrate your birthday with you and express my best wishes to you. Much to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, for which I am now quite busy preparing. Whats worse, I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself. I am truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. I believe we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam? Im looking forward to your reply. Best regards, Li Hua,假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr. Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请用英语给外教写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点： 1表示歉意； 2解释上课使用手机的原因； 3提出自己的请求并适当