（新课标）2019_2020学年高中英语Unit3TraveljournalSectionⅤWriting—电子邮件教案新人教版.docx

Section Writing 电子邮件文体感知电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分。写作规范题目要求假定你是王阳，你的网友李明给你发电子邮件，告诉你今年寒假他要去国外旅行，想让你给他一些有关国外旅行的建议。请根据下面的提示给他回一封电子邮件。1建议：事先了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯；保管好身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品；遵守当地法律，尊重当地风俗习惯；遇到麻烦，向警察或中国大使馆求助。2祝李明旅途愉快。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：大使馆embassy。第一步：审题谋篇一、审题1确定体裁：本文为应用文(电子邮件)；2确定人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主；3确定时态：主要用一般将来时和一般现在时。二、构思第一段：点明写电子邮件的目的；第二段：具体介绍国外旅行的建议；第三段：祝愿。第二步：词汇推敲1culture_and_customs文化和风俗2keep_an_eye_on 注意3obey 遵守4turn_to_a_policeman 求助警察5be_in_trouble 有困难6ID_card 身份证第三步：句式锻造1知道你寒假要到国外旅行，我很高兴。Im very glad to know that you will_travel_abroad to spend your winter vacation.2我愿意给你一些建议。Id like to give_you_some_tips.3这些建议将有助于你安全快乐的旅行。The tips will help_you_travel_safely_and_happily.4为了旅途愉快，你应该了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯。In order to enjoy your trip, you should learn_about_the_language,_history, culture and customs of the countries.5当你旅行的时候保管好你的物品，例如身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品。When travelling,_keep an eye on the things you take, such_as_your_ID_card,_passport,_money and other valuable things.6除此之外，不同的国家有不同的法律和风俗。In_addition,_different countries may have_different_laws_and_customs.7你必须尊重和遵守当地法律和风俗习惯。You must obey_local_laws_and_customs.8你处境困难。You are_in_trouble.9.你应求助警察或中国大使馆。You should turn_to_a_policeman or go to the Chinese embassy.第四步：句式升级造亮点10用定语从句合并句2、3。Id_like_to_give_you_some_tips_that_will_help_you_travel_safely_and_happily.11用状语从句合并句8、9。If_you_are_in_trouble,_turn_to_a_policeman_or_go_to_the_Chinese_embassy.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇(注意使用first of all, second, finally等衔接过渡词)_参考答案：Dear Li Ming，Im very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation. Id like to give you some tips that will help you travel safely and happily.First of all, in order to enjoy your trip, you should learn about the language, history, culture and customs of the countries. Second, when travelling, keep an eye on the things you take, such as your ID card, passport, money and other valuable things. In addition, different countries may have different laws and customs, and you must obey local laws and customs. Finally, if you are in trouble, turn to a policeman or go to the Chinese embassy.Have a good journey!Sincerely，Wang Yang写作提升假定你是李华，你的美国笔友海伦给你发电子邮件，询问你最近的一次最有趣的旅游经历。请你给她回一封电子邮件。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Helen，Id like to tell you something about one of my most pleasant trips._Yours，Li Hua参考答案：Dear Helen，Id like to tell you something about one of my most pleasant trips.My family and I went to Dajiao Gulf for a holiday last weekend, which is twenty kilometers away from my home. Having packed our camera, some snacks, clothes and some other things, we set off at 7 on Saturday morning by car. The most exciting thing was swimming in the sea. We enjoyed the big waves. They always carried us to the beach. The beaches were fantastic. The sunrise and sunset were simply wonderful. Whats more, the sea food there was very delicious.The trip was an unforgettable experience. Id like to show you around there if you come to China.Yours，Li Hua增分佳句1开头语I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about our oneday tour next weekend.收到你的来信我非常高兴，我写信告诉你下周末“一日游”活动的事情。I am much pleased to inform you that I got the first place in the English competition.很高兴通知你我在英语竞赛中取得第一名。How are you getting along with your study?你的学习怎么样？2正文常用语Could you come to visit our school?你能来参观我们学校吗？I would very much like you to join us.我真想你能加入我们。Id love to come，but I cant because I have much work to d