大学生英语写作常见语言错误分析.pps

大学生英语写作常见语言错误分析,一、母语干扰 二、英语本身的干扰 三、因粗心、紧张造成的失误,一、母语干扰,1语法结构上的干扰 2语序上的干扰 3用词方面的干扰 4表达方式的干扰,1语法结构上的干扰,1) 在我们生活中有许多像他这样的人。 误：in our life has many people like him 正：there are many people like him in our life 2) 有些假冒伪劣商品也可使用较长的时间。 误：some fake commodities can also use for a long period of time 正：some fake commodities can also be used for a long period of time 3) 如果问题解决了，他们会非常感激你。 误：if the problem solves，they will be very grateful to you 正：if the problem is solved，they will be very grateful to you,语法结构上的干扰,4) 为了和外宾交流，我们必须会说英语。 误：in order to communicate with foreign friends，we must can speak english 正：h order to communicate with foreign friends，we have to be able to speak english 5) 我认为阅读应该有选择性。 误：i think reading should selective 正：i think reading should be selective 6) 帮助别人渡过困境是一种美德。 误：help others to pull through their difficulties is a kind of virtue 正：helpingto help others to pull through their difficulties is a kind of virtue 7) 这(说好了英语)会使你能自如地与外宾交流。 误：n will make you can communicate with foreigners freely 正：n will enable you to communicate with foreigners freely,2语序上的干扰,1) 只有这样，我们才能提高我们的英语水平。 误：only in this way，we can improve our english 正：only in this way can we improve our english 2) 为什么许多人在该说“不”时没有说“不”呢? 误：why many people fail to say“no”when they should? 正：why do many people fail to say“no”when they should? 3) 他为了得到钱财而没有说“不”。 误：he in order to get money didnt say“no“ 正：in order to get money，he didnt say“no“ 。,语序上的干扰,4) 如果你该说不时没说“不”，你也许会做一些错事。 误：you may do some wrong things is you fail to say “no” when you should 正：you may do something wrong if you fail to say“no” when you should 5) 他也会说英语。 误：he also can speak english 正：he can also speak english,3用词方面的干扰,1) 如果他叫你帮他做坏事，你就该对他说“不”。 误：if he calls you to help him do something wrong，you should say “no to him 正：if he asks you to help him do something wrong，you should say “no to him 2) 我将努力学习，提高我的英语口语水平。 误：1 will work hard to raise my spoken english level 正：1 will work hard to improve my spoken english,4表达方式的干扰,1)总之，好处比坏处多。 误：in short，advantages are more than disadvantages 正：in short，there are more advantages than disadvantages 2) 这(说好英语)对你将来的工作会有许多益处。 误：it may have many benefits to your future job 正：it will benefit you a lot in your future lob,二、英语本身的干扰,1连词的误用 2短语搭配与使用错误 3语法用词方面的错误 4逻辑错误,1连词的误用,1) 我是两年前来到上海的。 误：it was two years ago when l came to shanghai 正：n was two years ago that l came to shanghai 2) 他们找工作失败的原因是显而易见的。 误：the reason that they had failed in finding a lob was evident. 正：the reason why (or for which) they had failed in finding a job was evident,2短语搭配与使用错误,依我看，这(举行口语考试)是个好办法。 误：to my point，its a good idea 正：from my point of viewin my opinion，its a good idea。 cet作文中，另外常见的短语错误还有：on the other hand往往被写成in the other hand，on the contrary被写成to the contrary，on purpose写成for purpose，capable of写成capable to，despite写成despite of等等。,3语法用词方面的错误,1)尽管他们很有钱，但是并不快乐。 误：despite they have a lot of money，they are not happy 正：thoughalthough they have a lot of money，they are not happy 2) 英语学习包括听、说、读、写。 误：english learning is consisted of listening，speaking，reading and writing 正：english learning consists of listening，speaking, reading and writing 3) 现在人们可以用计算机与外国朋友联系。 误：now，people can contact with their foreign friends with computer 正：now，people can contact their foreign friends with computer,4逻辑错误,学了那么多年英语，我的口语还是很糟糕。 误：having learned english for so many years，my spoken english is still very poor 正：though l have learned english for so many years，my spoken english is still very poor 1) 英语中虽然也有一词多用的现象，但大多数词在词性转换时，会发生词形的变化，而这些词拼写又十分相近，这造成许多学生在写作时往往发生词性误用现象。常见的错误有，该用succeed时用success，该用choose时用choice，该用affect时用effect，以及把invent写成invention等等。 2) 另外，有许多单词意义完全不同，但拼写上很相近，常使学生在表达关键意义时用错词，如select与elect，international与 intentional，quality与quantity，distinct与extinct，evolution与revolution等等。,三、因粗