高中英语写作教程-记叙.ppt

高中英语作文教学,ListthepointsofthecompositionTranslatethepointsintoEnglishOrganisethepointstoanessay,Three-stepWritingComposition,假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇100字左右的日记。(日记的开头已写好),今天下午我去看电影.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.,今天下午我去看电影.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,Iwenttothecinemathisafternoon.Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.,Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offamansbike.,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.,Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman,buthehadalreadyrodeaway.,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,Istoppedataxitocatchupwiththeman.,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,Themanwasverygratefulandtookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.,我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.,Iwentbacktothecinemabytaxi.Thedriverwasverymovedanddidntacceptmymoney.,1.举例、举例forexample、suchas、namely、first、second、finally2.总结归纳、发表意见inaword、inshort、inonesopinion、personally、toonessurprise3.句与句之间的连贯whatsmore、besides、and、then、so-that4.转折however、while、onthecontrary5.因果therefore、thus、asaresult、so,May3rd,FridayFineOneafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman.Buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.WhatshouldIdo?ThenIhadanidea.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.Thenthedrivertookmetothecinema.WhenIpaidhim,thedriverwouldntacceptthemoney.HesaidhewasverymovedatwhatIdid.,一.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,二.合并为复合句,三.把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,四.避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,五.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,六.适当的联想与发挥。,Iwenttothecinemaoneafternoon.,Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offamansbike.,Oneafternoon,onmywaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.,Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman,buthehadalreadyrodeaway.,Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedatthemanloudly,butherodetoofasttohearme.,Themanwasverygratefulandhetookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.,Gettingthecasebackfromme,themanwassogratefultomethatheinsistedonofferingmesomemoneyasareward.ButIrefusedhimpolitely.,May3rd,FridayFineOneafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman.Buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.WhatshouldIdo?ThenIhadanidea.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.Thenthedrivertookmetothecinema.WhenIpaidhim,thedriverwouldntacceptthemoney.HesaidhewasverymovedatwhatIdid.,May3rd,FridayFineOneafternoon,onmywaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedatthemanloudly,butherodetoofasttohearme.WhatshouldIdo?ThenIhadanidea.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Gettingthecasebackfromme,themanwassogratefultomethatheinsistedonofferingmesomemoneyasareward.ButIrefusedhimpolitely.Withthehelpofthedriver,Iwentbacktothecinema.Tomysurprise,thedriverdidntacceptthem