英语写作专题-使用复杂句式.ppt

Howtowriteagoodcomposition(III)-Usingcomplexsentences,书面表达高分卷特点,外在美结构美词汇美句式美衔接美,巧用复杂句式，提高文章品味,火眼金睛,Whichoneisbetter?Why?,Shealwayssingswhiledoingherwork.Shealwayssingswhenshedoesherwork.,Aftereverythingwasfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.Witheverythingfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.,Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakeremarkableprogress.Studyhard,andyouwillmakeremarkableprogress.,（状从省略）,(with复合结构),(祈使句+and),1.,2.,3.,(A),(B),(A),(A),(B),(B),Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknewsomanythings.Whatsurprisedhimwasthatthelittlegirlknewsomanythings.,IpassedtheEnglishexambecauseofyourhelp.IwouldnothavepassedtheEnglishexambutforyourhelp.,(名词性从句）,（虚拟语气）,4.,5.,(A),(A),(B),(B),BrainStorm,Whatadvancedstructurescanweusewhenwritingcompositions?,非谓语动词：-ing,-ed,-todo三种从句：名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句各种句式：倒装句，强调句，祈使句，感叹句，省略句，虚拟语气，被动语态等,Practicemakesperfect,通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的.2.我们需要冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。3.他很聪明，但他从不努力。4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。5.坐在一盘子粽子前，这个男孩不知道如何打开（unwrap)它们。6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中(inthedark)的一盏灯。7.他建议孩子们要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。8.当他爬到更高的地方时，他感到呼吸更困难了.,Translatethesentences,1.通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的。,ItisconvenienttokeepintouchwithyourfamilybyusingtheInternet.,2.我们需要冷静下来,反思(reflect)我们的学习方法。,Whatweneedtodoiscalmdownandreflectourlearningmethod.,3.他很聪明，但他从来不努力。,Cleverasheis,heneverworkshard.,Practicemakesperfect,4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。,Itisourattitudetoourselvesthatmatters/counts.,5.坐在一盘(plate)粽子(zongzi)前，这个男孩不知道如何打开（unwrap)它们。,Sittingbeforeaplateofzongzi,theboydidntknowhowtounwrapthem.,6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯。,Asisshowninthepicture,loveislikealampinthedark.,7.他建议学校里的孩子要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。,Hesuggeststhatschoolchildrenavoidoverusingtheireyesanddomoreoutdooractivities.,8.当他爬到更高的地方时，他感到呼吸更困难了.,Thehigherheclimbed,themorebreathlesshefelt.,点石成金,目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations”.请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：主要原因考试偏多、偏难不用功、懒惰取悦父母、老师个人看法作弊不对，违反校规要诚实，努力学习(其他看法）注意：1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；3词数：100左右。4参考词汇：作弊cheat（v.）,MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations,MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations,Atpresent,therearealotofstudentscheatingintheexaminations.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollowed.First,therearetoomanyexaminations.Theyaretoodifficultforus.Second,somestudentspaylittleattentiontotheirstudy.Theyarelazyanddontworkhard.Besides,theydoitbecausetheywanttomaketheirparentsandteachershappy.AsfarasImconcerned,itswrongtocheatintheexams.Itbreakstheschoolsrules.Weshouldtreattheexamsinarightway.Weshouldbehonestandworkhard.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetgoodmarks.,MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations,MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations,Atpresent,therearealotofstudentscheatingintheexaminations.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.First,therearetoomanyexaminations.Theyaretoodifficultforus.Second,somestudentspaylittleattentiontotheirstudy.Theyarelazyanddontworkhard.Besides,theydoitbecausetheywanttomaketheirparentsandteachershappy.AsfarasImconcerned,itswrongtocheatintheexams.Itbreakstheschoolsrules.Weshouldtreattheexamsinarightway.Weshouldbehonestandworkhard.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetgoodmarks.,theImportantPoints,考试偏多、偏难Therearetoomanyexaminations.Theyaretoodifficultforus.不用功、懒惰Somestudentsarelazyanddontworkhard.,better:Sometimeswehavetoomanyexaminations,whicharetoodifficultforus.,better:Notonlyaresomestudentslazybuttheyalsodontworkhardattheirlessons.,取悦父母、老师Theydoitbecausetheywanttomaketheirparentsandteachershappy.作弊不对、违反校规要诚实，努力学习,Better:Inordertopleasetheirparentsandteachers,theysometimescheatwhentakingexaminations.,Cheatinginexaminationsiswrong.Itbreakstherulesofschools.,Better:Itiswrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.,Westudentsshouldbehonestandstudyhard.,Better:Whatwestudentsshoulddoistobehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexaminations.,我们要改进学习方法Weshouldimproveourstudymethods.我们要为考试作好充分准备，取得好的成绩.Weshouldgetwellpreparedforexaminationstogetbetterresults.,Better:Ourstudymethodsshouldbeimproved.,Better:Onlywhenwegetwellpreparedforexaminationscanwegetbetterresults.,MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.Asstudents,weoftentakeexaminationsatschool,butsometimeswehavetoomanyexaminationswhicharetoodifficultforus.Ontheotherhand,notonlyaresomestudentslazybuttheyalsodontworkhardattheirlessons.Sowhentakingexaminations,theysometimescheatinordertogetbetterresultstopleasetheirparentsandteachers.,Inmyopinion,itswrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.Whatwestudentsshoulddoisbehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexaminations.Whatsmore,ourstudymethodsshouldbeimprovedandonlywhenwegetwellpreparedforexaminationscanwegetbetterresults.,佳句共赏,Nowadaysthereisaphenomenonthatsomestudentsoftencheatintheirexaminations.2.Therearemanyfactorscontributingto/accountingforthephenomenon.3.Thesereasonsgivearisetothephenomenon.4.Thereisnodenyingthatcheatingdoesnogoodtous.5.Weshouldattachmoreimportancetohonestyinexaminations.6.Successfavorsthediligent.7.Itsuniversallyacknowledgedthathardworkleadstosuccesswhilelazinessoftenresultsinfailure.,小试牛刀,Writethreecomplexsentences,五月一日，高二(3)班的学生