2014年中考英语写作专项训练.ppt

Writingpractice,北浦中学九年级备课组,writeashortcomposition检查预习,Lifeislikeajourney,Everyonewillmeethisownproblems.Howtodealwiththem?WhenIwasinGradeone,Igetmyreportcard,anditisverybad.Iamverysad.Iafraidofgoinghome,becauseIdidntwantmyparentsfeelunhappy.ButIhavetogohome.WhenIopenthedoor,IsawmymotherwatchingTVinthelivingroom.Thensheaskedmeaboutmygrades.Itoldsheaboutmygrades.Tomysurprise,shesmiledandtoldme,“Dontworry,Ibelieveyoucangetgoodgradesnexttime.Youshouldbelieveinyourself.lateron,Istudyhardandlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Iregardtheproblemsasthechallenges.andtrymybesttodealwitheverything.Irealizeifwefacetheproblems,dontworry.,Smiletolife,5分,Lifeislikeajourney,Everyonewillmeethisownproblems.Howtodealwith?,WhenIwasinGradeone,Igetmyreportcard,anditisverybad.Iamverysad.Iafraidofgoinghome,becauseIdidntwantmyparentsfeelunhappy.ButIhavetogohome.WhenIopenthedoor,IsawmymotherwatchingTVinthelivingroom.Thensheaskedmeaboutmygrades.Itoldsheaboutmygrades.Tomysurprise,shesmiledandtoldme,“Dontworry,Ibelieveyoucangetgoodgradesnexttime.Youshouldbelieveinyourself.lateron,Istudyhardandlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Iregardtheproblemsasthechallenges.andtrymybesttodealwitheverything.,Now,Irealizeifwefacetheproblems,dontworry.,再现中考作文,Task11.人称？2.主要时态？3.提示包括什么？,2011年,提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以IAmNotaChildAnyMore”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。,IAmNotaChildAnyMore,2012年TheBestMomentinMyMemory,提示：生活中有许多美好的瞬间：当你经过努力取得成功的时候；当你帮助别人或得到别人帮助的时候；当你看到别人做好事的时候请以TheBestMomentinMyMemory为题，写一件发生在你我身边的事，留下你记忆中最美的瞬间。,2013年ATalktoMyself,提示：在初三的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？,再现历年中考作文,Whatsyouropinion?1.人称？-2.主要时态？-3.提示包括什么？,I,三个一般,主要围绕亲情和友情,学会关心身边的人和事。通过某一件事去感悟人生的哲理.,要求：a.80100个词.b.要求有一定比例的复合句,并且要会使用适当的过渡词,段落层次分明.c.作文的表达不局限于一种时态.,写作要求,写作要,求,Task2DiscussionThestepsofwriting,1:认真审题，把握体裁；2:细读提示，确定时态；3:动笔书写，考虑词句；4.:核对修改，规范誊写；,Task3叙事性写作模式：1（开头）2（叙事）3（结尾）开头呼应（点题）结尾,Lovefrom,提示：在你的成长过程中，爸爸妈妈，老师，朋友给了你无限的爱，你肯定把这份深情牢记在心。请记述爸爸妈妈，老师或者是朋友为你做过的一件事，表达他们对你的爱。,娃娃不哭！,Groupwork,Whatisparentslove?,exercise,题目TheLovefrom.要求1.eightminutes2.80-100个词3.writeashortpassage4.report,1、Mumisthegreatestpersoninmylife2、Mumalwayscaresmewellanddoeseverythingforme.3、Thankstoher(mum).Icanliveahappylifeallday.,4.Mumisnotonlymother,butalsomyteacherandmyfriend.5、Whatmovesmysoulandwhatencouragesmetoprogressisyoursincereandselflesslove.永远牵动我灵魂和激励我前进的是你真执与无私的爱.,ndselflesslove,短文范例LovefromMumMymotheristhegreatestpersoninmylife.Thankstoher,Icanliveahappylifeallday.（开头）IstillrememberwhenIwastenyearsold.Ireceivedmymothersgiftthatwasawonderfulbook.Ireaditinmysparetime.Fromthebook.Ihavelearntthattheworldwasfullofloveandbeauty.Ialsoknewthatpeopleshouldhelpeachother,understandeachotherandloveeachother.Iwasverythankful.Becauseitsnotonlyabookbutalsomymothersdeeplove.(叙事)Idliketosay：“Mum,Iloveyou,Thankyou!”（结尾）,Teacherswordsforyou:（教师寄语）Weshouldbelieveinourselves.Becauselifeisalwaysfullofsunshine,thereisplentyoflovefromourparents,friendsandteachers.Wealsoshouldlearntoloveandunderstandeachother.,homework,“Thelovefrom”,HelpingothersmakesushappyEveryoneshouldtryourbesttobecomeapersonwhocanalwayshelppeople.Itsnotonlyothersbutalsowellfeelhappy.Lastsummerholiday,Iwithmybestfriendswenttotheoldpeopleshome.Thereweremanyoldmenwhoneededtotakecareof.Themostimportant,theylookedlonely.So,wedecidedtocheeredthemupbyhelpingthemdosomething.Atfirst,wecleaneduproomsandyard.Lateron,wewashedtheirclothes,althoughitwastootired,wefelthappyandlively.Maybeweneededtodosomethingelse,however,wetalkedwitholdmenandtoldjokes.Ofcourse,wealso,tookphotoswiththem,thentheseoldmensmiledtous,”Thanksforyoudoingforus,weallhopetoseeyouagainbecauseyougiveushappiness.”Finally,ourheartwerefilledwithlovefromkindoldpeople.Itwasreallyaneducationalexperienceforus.Ifwecouldhelpotherpeopleasfaraspossible,theworldwillbefullofloveandwewillfeelhappy.,HelpingothersmakesmehappyEveryonecanmeetmanydifficultthings.Whenwecantdoitalone,weneedhelpfromotherpeople.Oneday,myfriendsandiplayedbasketballwithagirlwhowedidntknow.Sheplayedbasketballverywellandsheplayedveryhappilyasus.Maybeshewasntcarefully,whileshewasshotting,otherpeopleknockedintoherandshefelldown.Itwasbad.Ithoughtshegotinjuredbecauseshecouldntstandupby,herself,althoughwedidntknowherweunderstoodthesafewasimportant.Sowedecidedtosendhertohospital.Wetookataxiandwenttohospitalwithher.Luckily,thedoctorsaidshewasn