《对读书的感悟》PPT课件.ppt

Writing:常言道：“读书破万卷。”请结合自己的实际情况谈谈对读书的感悟。审题：类型：夹叙夹议(叙：自己的实际情况；议：对读书的感悟）可以从“读书破万卷”这句proverb引人。Readwide,andyouwillwiselywrite.提出自己的观点，要言之有理，言之有据。主要问题：没有提到“读书破万卷”这句话没有结合“自己的实际情况”这一部分。造成内容的缺失和结构的不完整。2）在第一段提出观点后，后面的段落一味地叙述自己的读书的历史/经历；没有支持前面提出的观点。,可以谈到的感悟：Cultivateonesmind/Improveourselves/allowustoavoidmakingthesamemistakesExpandoneshorizons/provideuswithlargeamountsofinformationHelpfulinourstudy/Helpusgainawidevarietyofknowledge/begoodforoneswritingskillsAgoodwaytorelaxoneself/givemefunWeshouldreadwithinterest.Weshouldchoosethesuitablebooks.Weshouldreadingextensively.,TheregoesanoldsayinginChina,whichjustmeansthemoreweread,thebetterwewillwrite.Ithinkitisture.Andinfact,readingplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.(by徐妍婧)Thereisoneoldsaying:Readmorethanamillionbooks,youcanwritedownwhateveryouwant.Certainlyitisatruththatthemoreyouread,themoreknowledgeableyouare.(by张昭)Accordingtotheoldsaying,themoreyouread,thebetteryourarticlewillbe.ButIthinkthereadingqualityismoreimportantthanthequantity.(by蔡。)Thereisanoldsayingthat“Readbooksmorethanmillionsofvolumes.”Isupportthisopinion.(by姚。)Anoldsayinggoesthatitsgoodtoreadmore.Astome,thesayingisactuallycarriedout.Imfondofreading,andthefollowingaremyfeelingstoreading.(by金俐),Thereisasayingthat,“readingbookscandohundredsofthousandspapers.”Isupportit.Inmyopinion,readingbookshassomanyadvantagesasfollows.(陈佳妮)Thereisasayingthat“readingmorethantenthousandbooks.”Althoughitishardforustoreadsomanybooks,Ithinkthemoreweread,themorewegain.(周焕晨),Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatreadingbooksisofgreatbenefit.Bookscanactasourfriendsaswellasourteachers.Andreadingisdefinitelyagoodhabit.Tobeginwith,readingbookswillbroadenmyhorizons.Thebooksshowmenotonlyvariouskindsofknowledge,butalsothecolourfulworld.Furthermore,readingaboutthestoriesofthesuccessfulpeopleisaninspirationtome.Theirexperiences,positivequalitiesandvaluablespiritsencouragemetomakeeffortsandmakeprogress.Idoenjoytheprocessofreadingbooksbecauseitisrelaxingandmeaningfulaswell.NomatterwhatkindofbooksIread.Icanfindsomethingthatwillhaveapositiveimpactonmyfuturelife.Andthatishowreadingbecomesanimportantpartofmylife.Inmyopinion,readingbooksisofvitalimportanceandgreatnecessity.Illkeepthishabitandtakeadvantageofit.(by李念难),Commonerrors:Wecangaineverythingwhatwewantfromreading.IstillrememberthathowexcitedIwaswhenIgotmyfirstbook.Bookisateachercannottalk.Whatisthemostimportantisyoucanlearnhowtobehonestandkindfrombooks.Ialwaysreadabookifthereisnothingtodo.Whateveryouaretaughtbyteachersorlearnityourself.,2005年上海卷（秋季）古人云：“天生我才必有用”（Theremustbeauseformytalent），通过描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。范文：ThereisanoldChinesesayingthattheremustbeauseformytalent.Ihaveregardedthisasmymottoformanyyears.Frommypointofview,everybodyisgoodforsomething.Withsomeusefultalent,youwillmakeyourcontributionstosociety.WhenIwastenyearsold,therewasanoldmanlivingatthecornerofPingyuanRoad.Hedidnthavetheopportunitytostudyinschool,buthelearnedhowtomakewoodenfurniture.Everytimepeoplewenttoaskhimtomendtheirfurniture,hewaswillingtohelpthem.,Inhissparetime,hewouldmaketoyswithsmallpiecesofwood.Someofthemweresoldtothetoystoreandtheothersweregiventous.WheneverIseethelovelytoysmadebythisoldman,Iremembermyhappychildhood.Fromthisoldman,wecanseewhatevertalentyouhave,youcanfindyourownwayofusingit.Themostimportantfactorisyourconfidence.Ifyoubelievethattheremustbeauseforyourtalent,youwillfindit.,较好的表达：(结尾）Everyonehashisownexperienceaboutreading,butonecollectiveopinionisthatreadingbookshelpsusdealwitheverydayproblems.(赵姝琼)Tosumup,Icantlivewithoutreadingbecauseitsapartofmylife.(徐经)Inanutshell,readingisofgreatimportancetoourlifeandwillhaveagreatinfluenceonourfuture.Westillhaveto,however,becarefulwhenchoosingbooks.（金俐）Tosummarize,readingisimportantandpleasant,whynotdosomereadingnow?(任欢)Asyoucansee,readingisahabitwhichIwillkeepallmylife.IhavebenefitedmuchfromitandIhopethateveryonewillbefondofreadinginordertoenjoyhislife.(余静琳)Finally,IthinkIcandrawaconclusionthatweshoulddoourutmosttoreadbooks,whichwillbebeneficialtous.(马睿鸣),7.Asismentionedabove,sincereadinghassomanyadvantages,myattitudetowardsreadingisthatthemoreyouread,themoreoutstandingyouwillbe.(张博文)8.Brieflyspeaking,undereverycircumstancedoIsupporttheideaofreadingbookswithouthesitation.(覃含章)9.Hey!Nomatterwhoyouare,whereyouarefrom,whatyoudo,aslongasyoureadmanybooks,youcanmakeitbetterinyourlife.(卫诗沛)10.So,whynotdevelopahabitofreadingbooks?But,whatisalsoveryimportantisthatweshouldcombinetheorywithpractice.(卫天成)11.Tocometoaconclusion,onlywhenreadingisapartofyourlifecanyoudevelopitspowerfulpotential,whichcanbeofgreatuse.(储杨一真),Consideringthefactthatfewerandfewerstudentslovereading,Itrulyhopethattheyllpickupthebooksagainan