基础写作作文课件简介地方.ppt

评析高三第三次月考基础写作高明二中黄晓红,学习目的:1.学会使用在作文写作中关于介绍地方的一些有用的短语(6个短语）。2.学会可以尽量使用非谓语动词-过去分词来把句子变成5句话作文。,高三第三次月考（11月23日）作文：第一节基础写作,假设你是一名导游，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省。请用英语写一份导游词，简介广东。写作内容1广东省位于中国大陆东南部，南临南海，海岸线总长3368公里，岛屿众多；2广东省历史悠久，简称粤；3广东素有“水果王国”之称，香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝是其中的四大名果；4广东是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利，海运发达；5其中，经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等；6广东省有“食在广东”的美称。,1广东省位于中国大陆东南部，南临南海，海岸线总长3368公里，岛屿众多；,1.GuangdongProvinceislocatedbytheSouthSeainthesoutheastpartofmainlandChina.Ithasquiteafewislandsoffitscoastline,whichhasatotallengthof3,368kilometres.,1.GuangdongProvinceislocatedbytheSouthSeainthesoutheastpartofmainlandChina.Ithasquiteafewislandsoffitscoastline,whichhasatotallengthof3,368kilometres.（用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子）,-LocatedbytheSouthSeainthesoutheastpartofmainlandChina,Guangdongprovincehasquiteafewislandsoffitscoastline,whichhasatotallengthof3,368kilometres.,2广东省历史悠久，简称粤。6广东省有“食在广东”的美称。,2.GuangdongProvincehasalonghistory.ItiscalledYueforshort.,6GuangdongProvinceisknownforthesaying,“Donthesitate(犹豫)tohavemealshere.”,2.GuangdongProvincehasalonghistory.ItisalsocalledYueforshort.6GuangdongProvinceisknownforthesaying,“Donthesitatetohavemealshere.”（用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子）,GuangdongProvince,alsocalledYueforshort,hasalonghistoryandisknownforthesaying,“Donthesitatetohavemealshere.”,3广东素有“水果王国”之称，香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝是其中的四大名果；,3.GuangdongProvinceisknownasafruitking.GuangdongProvinceisfamousforitshighqualitybananas,sugarcane,lycheesandpineapples.（用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子）,-Knownasafruitking,GuangdongProvinceisfamousforitshighqualitybananas,sugarcane,lycheesandpineapples.,4广东是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利，海运发达；,4.ItisalsooneofthemostdevelopedindustrialprovincesinSouthChina,withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater.,5其中，经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等；,5.IthasseveralspecialeconomiczonessuchasShenzhen,Zhuhai,Shantouandsoon.,GuangdongProvince,alsocalledYueforshort,hasalonghistoryandisknownforthesaying,“Donthesitatetohavemealshere.”LocatedbytheSouthSeainthesoutheastpartofmainlandChina,ithasquiteafewislandsoffitscoastline,whichhasatotallengthof3,368kilometres.Knownasafruitking,GuangdongProvinceisfamousforitshighqualitybananas,sugarcane,lycheesandpineapples.ItisalsooneofthemostdevelopedindustrialprovincesinSouthChina,withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater.IthasseveralspecialeconomiczonessuchasShenzhen,Zhuhai,Shantouandsoon.,总结：1.作文中关于介绍地方的一些有用的短语：（尽量回想，并默写下来）,1.belocatedby/in/at=liein/on(位于/坐落于)；2.hasatotallengthof（总共有-长）；3.cover/hasanareaof（有-面积）;4.has/withalonghistory；5.beknownfor/as；6.hasapopulationof(有-人口),2.可以尽量用非谓语动词把句子变成5句话。,假设你是一名高三的学生，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省佛山市高明区。请用英语写一份导游词，简介高明。写作内容1广东省佛山市高明区位于佛山市的西部，水陆交通便利，海运发达.2广东省佛山市历史悠久，广东省素有“食在广东”的美称。因此我们这里也有许多著名的当地美食；如濑粉。3中文被称为濑粉；它是如此的美味，一经尝试后你就永远也不会忘记它的味道。4濑粉是一种特别的食物，它已经吸引了来自世界各地的人们。5欢迎各地的旅游者到高明来玩。,开头：Iamasenior3studentwhothatisfromGaomingseniorhighschool.WelcometoGuangdongProvince.ImIvy.AndImmorethangladtobeyourguide.,1广东省佛山市高明区位于佛山市的西部，水陆交通便利，海运发达.（用非谓语动词过去分词）,GaomingtownislocatedinthewestofFoshancity.Gaomingtownhasconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater.,高明区在哪儿,LocatedinthewestofFoshancity,Gaomingtownhasconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater.,Whatsmore,FoshanhasalonghistoryandGuangdongProvinceisknownforthesaying,“Donthesitatetohavemealshere.”Sotherearealsoaquantityoflocalfamousfood,suchasLaifen.,2广东省佛山市历史悠久，广东省素有“食在广东”的美称。因此我们这里也有许多著名的当地美食；如濑粉。,3中文被称为濑粉；它是如此的美味，一经尝试后你就永远也不会忘记它的味道。（用非谓语动词过去分词）,Laifen,whichthatiscalledinChinese,issodeliciousthatyouwillneverforgetitsflavorafteryouhavetastedit.,Laifen,calledinChinese,issodeliciousthatyouwillneverforgetitsflavorafteryouhavetastedit.,4濑粉是一种特别的食物，它已经吸引来自世界各地的人们。（用定语从句）,Laifenisaspecialityhere,whoseflavorhasattractedthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworld.,Laifenisaspecialityhere,whoseflavorhasattractedthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworld.,5欢迎各地的旅游者到高明来玩。(创新设计P60写作练笔第5句),TouristsfromallovertheworldarewelcometoourhometownGaomingforavisit.,高明皂幕山,高明合水桫椤,夜景高明大桥,Touristsfromallovertheworldarewelcometoourhometownforavisit.LocatedinthewestofFoshancity,Gaomingtownhasconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater.Whatsmore,FoshanhasalonghistoryandGuangdongProvinceisknownforthesaying,“Donthesitatetohavemealshere.”Sotherearealsoaquantityoflocalfamousfood,suchasLaifen.Laifen,calledinChinese,issodeliciousthatyouwillneverforgetitsflavorafteryouhavetastedit.Laifenisaspecialityherewhoseflavorhasattractedthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworld.,HW:基础写作你的美国笔友Lisa暑假期间将要来中国旅游,请你根据提示,写一篇介绍你的家乡广州的短文。1.广州地处广东省中部,面积7434.4平方公里,人口约1000万,是广东的省会,是一座有二千二百多年文明的历史古城；,2.1982年,广州被选定为全国首批历史名城之一；3.广州一年四季如春,繁花似锦,故有“花城”之美誉；4.广州正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海内外游客。,Guangzhou,withahistoryof2200years,isknownas“theflowercity”,whichisthestartingplaceof“thesilkroadonsea”inancientChina.Ithasapopulationof10millionandanare