大学英语看图作文.ppt

CET-4写作,看图作文,写作步骤,1.读图2.列要点3.拟草纲4.组织句子5.连句成文6.修饰润色,必备句型,Asisdescribedinthepicture.这幅图描述了Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowusthat.这幅图的目的是为了给我们展示Wecandeduceformthispicturethat.从这幅图中我们可以推断Thepictureindicates/conveysthemeaningthat这幅图指出/传达Moreandmorepeoplehavecometorealize.越来越多的人已经意识到Nowitiscommonlyheldthat.butIdoubtwhether.现在大家都普遍认为，但我怀疑,Asisshowninthepicture,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetween.and.从图中我们可以清楚的看到和的关系。Nowondermostseetheproblemof.asthatof.ratherthanthatof.难怪大多数人把看成的问题，而不是的问题。Anyonewiththeleastcommonsenseknowsthat.稍微有点常识的人都知道,Thereismuchdiscussiontodayabout.现在人们都在热烈地讨论Thanksto.,moreandmore.由于越来越多的Asmoreandmorepeople.,muchattentionshouldbeplacedon.由于越来越多的人，所以人们应该重视Ifsuchmeasureswerenottaken,theproblemof.wouldhavebeenmoreserious.如果不采取这些措施，的问题就会更加严重。,Onthesurface/Atfirstthoughtitmayseemasound/anattractive/suggestion/solution/idea,butcarefulweighingonthemind/oncloseranalysis/onsecondthought,wefindthat.表面上/第一眼看上去似乎是一个非常好的想法，但仔细一想/分析,我们却发现AnotherreasonwhyIdisputetheabovestatementisthat.我之所以反对以上论点还有一个原因Unlessthereisacommonrealizationof.,itisverylikelythat.除非大家普遍意识到，否则很可能Noeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemof.,butthecommonrecognitionofthenecessityof.mightbethefirststeptowardschangeintherightdirection.解决问题并不容易，但认识到的必要性是向正确方向发展的第一步。,1.读图,三幅图近视人数不断上升,列要点,1）图片描述2）原因分析3）我的理解建议,3.拟草纲,1）图片描述Picture1Picture2Picture3Theproblem2）原因分析exam-orientededucation（应试教育）/pressure3）我的理解建议Morefreedomineducation/differentwaystoevaluatetheirperformance/moreopportunitiestoaccesshighereducation,4.组织句子,1）图片描述Picture1Picture2Picture3Afteracomparisonofthe3graduationpictures,wecanseethatthenumberofstudentswhoaremyopic/nearsightedisincreasingsharply.,2）原因分析Thereasonwhymoreandmorestudentsgetnearsightedisthattheyliveandstudyunderhighpressure.Inmodernsociety,theexam-orientededucation（应试教育）givesstudentstoomuchstress,theyhavetostudyveryhardtogethighscorestowinabetterfuture.Evenduringtheirsparetime,theyaresenttodifferentkindsofagenciestohaveextralessons.Theyaresotiredthattheyhavelittletimetoresttheirbodiesandtheireyes.Nowondermoreandmorestudentsgetnearsighted,3）我的理解建议Idontthinkitisfairfortheyoung.Theyshouldhavethemorefreedomtolearnwhatevertheyareinterestedinandwillbeevaluatedmoreobjectivelyfromdifferentaspects,indifferentways,notjustexams.Itstimethatweimproveoureducationsystemsoastoprovidetheyoungabettereducationandahealthierlife.,连句成文修饰润色,所谓“模板”Thisillustrationdepicts_(图画中的人物)Ving,with_(补充说明).Recentlyithasbecomecommonforpeopleinmanywalksoflifeto_(进一步阐释)Itseemstomethatthecartoonistissendingamessageabout_(图画主题),whichis_(进一步的说明).Heseemstobesayingthat_(给出细节).Inmyopinion,_(个人阐述).Thissimplepictureisawakeupcallfor_(所涉群体，如thewholeofthehumanrace).Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasurestoputanendto_(问题所在).Onetheonehand,wemust_(建议一).Itisclearthatthedraweroftheillustrationisurgingusto_(进一步说明).Ontheotherhand,_(建议二)Onlyinthiswaycanwe_(展望前景).,2013.12样题作文,样文例析,Wecanseethatinthispicture,ateacheristeachingherpupilstodealwitharithmeticquestions,butsomeofthemthinkthatlearningthesemathematicalskillsisuseless.Theyarguethatbythetimetheyareinthejobmarket,theseskillswillbeoutdated.Astowhetheritisimportanttolearnbasicskills,peopleholddifferentviews.AsfarasIknow,itisveryimportantforonestudenttoacquirebasicskills.Atfirst,masteringbasicskillswellcanlayasolidfoundationforlearningadvancedskills.Basicskillsareafloor,notaceiling.Studentsmustlearnthemfirstsothattheycanmoveontovariousadvancedskills.Whatsmore,learningbasicskillshelpstoimproveconfidenceandenhanceself-esteem.Individualswithbasicskillsarelikelytobemoreconfidentandactive.Allinall,ifwewanttokeepprogressing,itisimportanttolearnbasicskillswell.Bymasteringbasicskillsandlearningnewthings,wewillhaveabrightfuture!,TheImportanceofReadingLiterature,Asishumorouslyportrayedinthecartoon,ateacherishandingaclassicliteraturebooktoastudent,askingthestudentto“justreaditasifyouarereadingalongtextmessage.”Obviously,thesymbolicalmeaningofthispictureistoshowustheimportanceofreadingliterature.,Itshouldbegenerallyacknowledgedthatclassicliteratureplaysasignificantrolenotonlyinpreservingtheessenceofgreatmindsbutalsoinenhancingthequalityofoneslife.Tobeginwith,literatureasthecollectionofgreatmindswillhelpusenormouslybroadenourhorizons,experiencingthingswewonthavethechancetodoaswellasliveswewontbeabletoenjoy.Whatismore,thosefinestoriesselectedandconveyedbythegreatauthor,althoughhappenedinthepast,stillcarrysomeusefulinformationandimplicationforourdailylives.Inaddition,thebeautifulwordsandsentencesflowinginthepagesofexcellentliteraturecangreatlyeaseourtiredness,makingusfeeleasyandquiet.,Therefore,weoughttofullyrealizetheimportanceofreadingliterature.Justastheteacherinthepictureputs,readingliteratureshouldbeaseasyandcommonasreadingtextmessages.Facingthecomingchallengesinthedaysahead,weneedtoequipuswithnotonlysciencebutalsoliteraturebywhichwecanbeautifyourlifeandtheworld.,Assignment,1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments,一、句子开头多样化,英语是一种句型结构灵活多变的语言。由于拘泥于传统语法框架，许多初学写作的人都喜欢用名词开头写句子。这样写倒是无可非议，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同样结构的句子，就显得呆板生硬，缺乏生气了。事实上，在英语写作中除名词可放在句子的开头外，许多其它词类及词组均可放在句子开头的位置。例句：Womenleavetheirhomestotakeafullerpartinsocietyastimepasses.上面这句话至少还有两种开头方式：1.Astimepasses,womenleavetheirhomestotakeafullerpartinsociety.2.Totakeafullerpartinsociety,womenleavetheirhomesastimepasses.,二、避免一个“I”写到底,初学英文写作的人的另一通病是一个“”写到底，句首僵硬，缺乏变化。OnethinginparticularIremembermademefeelgratefultowardmymotherwasthatonedayIwentandaskedherformyowngarden,andsheletmehavemyownlittleplot.Iloveitandtakecareofitwell.Ilovedespeciallytogrowpeas.Iwasproudwhenwehadthemonourtable.Iwouldpulloutthegrassinmygardenbyhandwhenthefirstlittlebladescameup.Iwouldpatroltherowsonmyhandsandkneesforanywormsandbugs,andIwouldkill