《英语描写文写作》PPT课件.ppt

DescriptiveEssays,DescriptionofaPerson,DescriptiveWriting,Theprimarypurposeofdescriptivewritingistodescribeaperson,placeorthinginsuchawaythatapictureisformedinthereadersmind.Capturinganeventthroughdescriptivewritinginvolvespayingcloseattentiontothedetailsbyusingallofyourfivesenses.,HowdoesaTeddybearlook?,Cuddly（想拥抱的）,soft,lovely,brown,furry,fuzzy（毛绒绒的）,adorable,CharacteristicsofDescription,1.Gooddescriptivewritingincludesmanyvividsensorydetailsthatpaintapictureandappealstoallofthereaderssensesofsight,hearing,touch,smellandtastewhenappropriate.,(1).Therosesfragrantperfumefilleduptheentireroom,driftingintoourwelcomingnostrils.Iimagineitcanonlybemanufacturedinnaturesflawlessgarden.(2).Therosemusttastebetterthanthesweetestofnectars(花蜜).Atleastthebumblebees(大黄蜂)thinkso.,2.Gooddescriptivewritingoftenmakesuseoffigurativelanguagesuchasanalogies,similesandmetaphorstohelppaintthepictureinthereadersmind.,Simileandmetaphor,(1)Herheartislikeafire,blazingwithpassion.(2)Hishairisasmessyasabirdsnest.(3)Thechildisasnaughtyasacuriousmonkey.(4)Hervoiceisasymphony.(5)Thefatherisastubbornbear.,APoem,MyLuveIsLikeARed,RedRosebyRobertBurnsO,myluveslikeared,redrose,哦我心爱的人就像一朵红玫瑰，一朵红玫瑰ThatsnewlysprunginJune.它在春天的六月初绽O,myluveslikethemelodie,哦我心爱的人就像那段旋律Thatssweetlyplaydintune.它是如此甜蜜Asfairartthou,mybonielass,我的淑女，我美丽的人儿SodeepinluveamI,我如此地迷恋你AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,我会永远爱你，亲爱的Tillatheseasgangdry.我爱你直到大海干涸,Tillatheseasgangdry,mydear,我爱你直到大海干涸，我亲爱的Andtherocksmeltwithesun!我爱你直到太阳融化岩石AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,我将永远爱你，我亲爱的Whilethesandsolifeshallrun.我的爱与我的生命同行Andfaretheeweel,myonlyluve!再见，我唯一的爱Andfaretheeweel,awhile!再见，无论多久AndIwillcomeagain,myluve,我会再次回到你身边，我的爱Thoitweretenthousandmile!哪怕我们分别天涯,3.Gooddescriptivewritingusespreciselanguage.Generaladjectives,nouns,andpassiveverbsdonothaveaplaceingooddescriptivewriting.Usespecificadjectivesandnounsandstrongactionverbstogivelifetothepictureyouarepaintinginthereadersmind.,Examples:Abstract:Itwasaniceday.Concrete:Thesunwasshiningandaslightbreezeblewacrossmyface.Abstract:Thetrafficwasheavy.Concrete:Ouroldcarpuffed（冒烟）asMainStreetbecameclogged（堵塞的）withalineofclamoring（喧闹的）motorists.Abstract:Mr.Smithwasagreatteacher.Concrete:Mr.Smithreallyknewhowtohelpusturnourthoughtsintogoodstoriesandessays.,4.Gooddescriptivewritingisorganized.Somewaystoorganizedescriptivewritinginclude:chronological(time),spatial(location),andorderofimportance.Whendescribingaperson,youmightbeginwithaphysicaldescription,followedbyhowthatpersonthinks,feelsandacts.,Descriptionofaperson,Thinkingifthedescriptionissuccessfulintellingthereaderswhatapersonlookslike.Tobespecific,thedescriptionshouldanswersomeofthefollowingquestion.1)Whatclothesisthepersonwearing?2)Howoldisheorshe?3)Howtallistheperson?4)Whatishisorherfigurelike,bigorsmall,slimorstocky?5)Whatishisorhercomplexion?6)Whatarehisorherfacialfeatures,e.g.featuresofhair,eyes,nose,lips,teeth?7)Whatmakesthispersondifferentfromothers?8)Doesthispersonhaveanyfeaturesthatstandout,suchasascaronthenose?,Height,(1)Heisverytall.(2)Heisquiteshort.(3)Heisrelativelynormalheight.,Build,Sheisskinny.(negative)Sheisanorexic.(medical)Sheisunderweight.(negative)Sheisthin.(negative)Sheisslim.(positive)Sheisslender.(positive),Sheisfat.(negative)Sheistubby.(negative)Sheisoverweight.(negative)Sheisplump.(neutral)Sheisstocky.(neutral)Sheisbonny.(positive),ComplexionCharacteristics,DarkLightFairOlivePaleTanPimply（疙瘩）Freckles（斑点）SpotsPimples（粉刺）,Whatsthedifference?,CharacterandPersonality,ambitious,confident,dependent,passionate,vigorous,aggressive,sensitive,patient,prudent,cautious,polite,rude,reckless,optimistic,humorous,sociable,easygoing,diffident,broad-minded,narrow-minded,proud,arrogant,conceited,hesitant,sentimental,pessimistic,insensitive,rigid,insolent,considerate,queer,self-important,self-centered,vain,MyBoyfriendbySangHeeParkLetmedescribemybestfriend.HisnameisJohn.Imethim7yearsagoforthefirsttime.Ifoundoutabouthimfromaflyerpostedinthestreet.Areyouanxiousabouthim?Firstofall,helookslikewhitecake.Hishairiswhitelikefreshcream.Hiseyesareliketwoblackpearls.Hisnoseisalwaysmoistenedlikedewyflowers.Hisearsareasbigastherestofhisface.Wheneverheruns,hishairisglossyandhisearsflutter.Ialwaysembracehim.Atthattime,Ihaveasensationofgoingbehindtheclouds.Inaddition,hissmellissweetlikecandy,exceptwhenhedoesnttakeabathforalongtime.However,Ialwayslikehimanyway.,EachtimeIsay,Letseat,herunsalongpanting.Asaresult,hestrainshisears,andhelollsouthistongue.Maybe,theglitterofhiseyesisthemostpurethingintheworld.However,ifhemakesamistake,herunsunderthesofaandstaysasstiffasice.Then,hehangshishead.Inaddition,hestepsoutfromunderthesofawhilehiseyesswimwithtears.Also,heliesdowntoshowhisbelly.Imustforgivehismistake.Maybeyoucanguess.Heismydog!Heislivinginmyhometown.Asaresult,Imisshimnow.Heteachesmeabouthowtoloveanimals.Inaddition,hemakesfriendswithmewhenIamlonely.Ilovehimsomuch.Asaresult,Iwanttolivewithhimforever.,PhysicalAppearanceDescription,Mr.Bingleywasgoodlookingandgentlemanlike;hehadapleasantcountenance（面容）,andeasy,unaffected（自然的，不矫揉造作的）manners.Hissisterswerefinewomen,withanairofdecided（果断的）fashion.Hisbrother-in-law,Mr.Hurst,merelylookedthegentleman;buthisfriendMr.Darcysoondrewtheattentionoftheroombyhisfine,tallperson,handsomefeatures,noblemien（风采）;andthereportwhichwasingeneralcirculationwithinfiveminutesafterhisentrance,ofhishavingtenthousandayear.,Hischaracterwasdecided.Hewastheproudest,mostdisagreeable（厌恶的，难相处的）manintheworld,andeverybodyhopedthathewouldnevercomethereagain.,SpeechDescription,“Whatishisname?”“Bingley.”“Ishemarriedorsingle?”“Oh!Single,mydear,tobesure!Asinglemanoflargefortune;fourorfivethousandayear.Whatafinethingforourgirls!”“Howso?Howcanitaffectthem?”“MydearMr.Bennet,”repliedhiswife,“howcanyoubesotiresome!”youmustknowthatIamthinkingofhismarryingoneofthem.”“Isthathisdesigninsettlinghere?”“Design!Nonsense,howcanyoutalkso!Butitisverylikelythathemayfallinlovewithoneofthem,andthereforeyoumustvisithimassoonashecomes.”,“Oh!MydearMr.Bennet,”asheenteredtheroom,“wehavehadamostdelightfulevening,amostexcellentball.Iwishyouhasbeenthere.Janewassoadmired,nothingcouldbelikeit.Everybodysaidhowwellshelooked;andMr.Bingleythoughtherquitebeautiful,anddancedwithhertwice.Onlythinkofthatmydear;heactuallydancedwithtwice;andshewastheonlycreatureintheroomthatheaskedasecondtimeIwassovexed（焦急的）toseehimstandupwithher.Iamquitedelightedwithhim.Heissoexcessivelyhandsome!,ActionDescription,Mr.Bingleyhassoonmadehimselfacquaintedwithalltheprincipalpeopleintheroom;hewaslivelyandunreserved,dancedeverydance,wasangrythattheballclosedsoearly,andtalkedofgivingonehimselfatNetherfield.Suchamiable（和蔼可亲的）qualitiesmustspeakofthemselves.Whatacontrastbetweenhimandhisfriend!Mr.DarcydancedonlyoncewithMrs.HurstandoncewithMissBingley,declinedbeingintroducedtoanyotherlady,andspenttherestoftheeveninginwalkingabouttheroom,speakingoccasionallytooneofhisownparty.,MentalDescription,ThemannerinwhichtheyspokeoftheMerytonassemblywassufficientlycharacteristic.Bingleyhasnevermetwithpleasantpeopleorprettiergirls;everybodyhadbeenmostkindandattentivetohim,therehadbeennoformality,nostiffness,hehadsoonfeltacquaintedwithalltheroom;andastoMissBennet,hecouldnotconceiveanangelmorebeautiful.Darcy,onthecontrary,hasseenacollectionofpeopleinwhomtherewaslittlebeautyandnofashion,fornoneofwhomhehadfeltthesmallestinterest,andfromnonereceivedeitherattentionorpleasure.MissBennetheacknowledgedtobepretty,butshesmiledtoomuch.,Scenedescription,Itwasbeautifulspringweather,butneitherdogsnorhumanswereawareofit.Eachdaythesunroseearlierandsetlater.Itwasdawnbythreeinthemorning,andtwilightlingeredtillnineatnight.Thewholelongdaywasablazeofsunshine.Theghostly（幽灵的，可怕的）wintersilencehadgivenwaytothegreatspringmurmurofawakeninglife.Thismurmurarosefromalltheland,fraught（充满的）withthejoyofliving.Itcamefromthethingthatlivedandmovedagain,thingswhichhadbeenasdeadandwhichhadnotmovedduringthelongmonthsoffrost.Thesap（树液）wasrisinginthepines.Thewillowsandaspens（山杨树）wereburstingoutinyoungbuds.Shrubsandvineswereputtingonfreshgarbs（服装，打扮）ofgreen.(takenfromTheCalloftheWild),MovieWriting,PleasewatchthemovieIfYouaretheOne,andthenwriteadescriptiveessayaboutthemaincharacters.,MarriageSeekingAprettyyoungladywassittingtherequietly.Withthesunshiningcharminghair,asenseofdesolation(忧伤)flashedthroughthebeautifulfacebelow.Awakingfromtheimaginationafewsecondslater,QinFenwenttowardsherandsaidhellotoher.Atthismoment,Qingotachancetoobserveheratsuchaclosedistance.Shewaswell-shapedindeed.Thewhiteshirtwithwell-designedV-neckband（衣领）showedherattractivechestandherlongandstraightlegsunderablackminiskirtaddedamaturesenseoffemininitytoher.Howcanthisprettycharmingladybeleft?AquestionoccurredtoQinsmind.,TrueLoveQinFendidntloveher,eventhoughshewasbeautiful.Shehadanarrestingface,pointed（尖角的）chin（下巴）,square（颚）jaw.Hereyeswerepaleblackwithoutatouchofhazel（淡褐色）,starred（点缀）withbristly，（短而硬的）blacklashes（睫毛）andslightlytilted（翘起）attheends.Abovethem,herthickblackbrows（眉毛）slanted（倾斜）upward,cuttingastartlingoblique（倾斜的）lineinherwhiteskin.,ABlindDateShockedbythefirstsightoftheairhostess,QinFenadmiredthebeauty:shewasdressedinawhiteshort-sleevedshirtwithV-collar,ablackknee-lengthskirt,andapairofsimplehigh-heeledsandals.Especiallyherslenderlegs,henoticed,weremuchmoreattractive.Shewassittingonsofaelegantly,withherlegscrossed.Whenshespoke,thewordsfromhersexyplumplipswe