高三英语写作中词汇与句型表达的多样-新课标-人教版.ppt

HowtoimprovepassagesFocusingonvarietiesofwordsandsentencepatterns,1993年高考作文,1OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldsandmylittlesisterandArFufollowed.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysisterwalkedtotheriverandArFufollowedher.Shesawabeautifulfloweronthebankoftheriver,shewantedtopickit.Shefellintotheriver.WhenArFusawthat,itbarkedandjumpedintotheriverquickly.,Oneday,followedbymylittlesisterandArFu,myparentswenttoworkinthefields.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysister,withnothingtodo,walkedtotheriversidenearbywithArFu.Atthesightofabeautifulflowerontheriverbank,shewantedtopickit.However,shefellintotheriver.SeeingthatArFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterassoonaspossible.,2,_,_,_,_,_,_,书面表达评分标准：,北京卷2005年考试说明中的评分标准情景作文一、评分原则：本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分时应考虑：内容要点，上下文的连贯，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。,词汇和句式的多样性,(因为)_hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.,Thanksto,Asaresultof,Owingto,Dueto,因为,Becauseof,/with/for,我花了50块钱买这本字典。,Spendon/inItcosts/takestoPayfor,ChargesbforIwascharged$50forthedictionary.,我会尽我所能去帮助他。,do/trymybestdoeverythingIcandoallthatIcandowhat/whateverIcan,Iwill,tohelphim.,Illhelphimasmuchaspossible.,高考经典句型结构:1.ItsyearssinceIworkedinBeijing.2.Itwontbelongbeforeyougetwell.3.ItwasnotuntilyoutoldmethatIrealizedmymistake.4.NotuntilyoutoldmedidIrealizemymistake.5.Itissaidthatafirebrokeoutlastnight.6.Therealwaysexistbiggapsbetweendreamsandrealities.7.Shewassoexcitedthatsheburstintotears.8.Workhard,andyouaresuretowin.,Hesatthere,_（手里拿着书）。_（eyes/closed）。_（背着书包）。_（nothing/todo)。,Thereisagirl.Sheissittingbetweenus.2.Thisisabook.Thebookwasboughtyesterday.,Thereisagirlwhoissittingbetweenus.,Thisisabookwhichwasboughtyesterday.,Rewritefollowingsentences,3.走在大街上，他遇见了一个老朋友.,Whilehewaswalkinginthestreet,hemetanoldfriend.,4.,_,thecitylooksbeautiful.,Walkinginthestreet,从天空中看，,Whenitisseenfromthesky,thecitylooksbeautiful.,Seenfromthesky,由于不知道他的电话，他无法与Tom取得联系。,Notknowinghistelephonenumber,hecantgetintouchwithTom.,Rewritethefollowingpassage：Theywentforawalkonthestreet.Theysawtheoldman.Hewasknockeddownbyacar.Thecarwaspassingby.,reading,sleeping,shoes,barking,cat,dumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）,请你根据以下四幅图(总分20)写一篇100词左右的短文。参考词语:slippers(拖鞋),要点：1老人穿着拖鞋读报,狗在边上睡觉。2老人想出门，叫狗拿鞋。3狗闭着眼睛，一动不动，汪汪直叫，老人很纳闷。4猫嘴里叼着鞋走进来，老人目瞪口呆。,Anoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnewspaper.Besidehimlayadogsleepingsoundly.Suddenlytheoldmandecidedtoleavehomeforawhile,buthecouldntgooutwithhisslipperson.Sohewokeupthedogtogettheshoesforhim.Outofhisexpectation,thedogjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain.Theoldmanwascompletelypuzzled.Ashewaswonderingwhatwashappening,hesawthecatcomingtowardshimwiththepairofshoesinitsmouth.Seeingthis,hewastotallydumbfounded.,Anoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnewspaper.Besidehimlayadogsleepingsoundly.Suddenlytheoldmandecidedtoleavehomeforawhile,buthecouldntgooutwithhisslipperson.Sohewokeupthedogtogettheshoesforhim.Outofhisexpectation,thedogjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain.Theoldmanwascompletelypuzzled.Ashewaswonderingwhatwashappening,hesawthecatcomingtowardshimwiththepairofshoesinitsmouth.Seeingthis,hewastotallydumbfounded.,Assignment:优化写作P189下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一