高三英语二轮复习 第二篇 分类写作4 申请 求职信课件.ppt

,分类写作,四、申请/求职信,applyfor申请volunteerjob志愿者工作getalongwithsb.与某人相处advantage优势；好处outgoing外向的independent独立的standout突出；显著appealing吸引人的fillinthejobvacancy填补工作空缺graduatefrom从毕业,【必备词语】,sparetime空余时间engagesb.in投入做meetsb.requirement满足某人的要求haveagoodmastery/commandof掌握得好rank排名；名列befondof喜欢localsurroundings当地的周边环境pet宠物beelectedas被选举为liveuptosb.expectations不辜负某人的期望,【必备词语】,1.Imwritingtoapplyforapositioninyoursummercamp.我写信来申请你们夏令营的一个职位。2.Isincerelyhopethatmyapplicationcouldbefavorablyconsidered.我真诚地希望我的申请会被考虑。3.IdohopethatIcanbeluckyenoughtobeadmittedtoyourcamp.我十分希望我能幸运地被你们的夏令营录取。4.Imwritingtoapplyfortheopportunityto.我写信来申请的机会。5.Ihavemyadvantagestobeamemberofyourteam.我有我自己的优势，能成为你们团队的一员。6.Idappreciateitifyoucouldgivemetheopportunity.如果您能给我这个机会，我将非常感激。,【好句朗诵】,7.Theadisreallyveryappealingtome,soImnowwritingtoyouinthehopeoffillinginthejobvacancy.这则广告非常吸引我，所以我写信给您希望能够填补这个职位的空缺。8.IdohopethatIcanmeetyourrequirements.我十分希望我能够满足你们的要求。9.IwouldbegratefulifIcouldbegiventhejob.如果能获得这个工作，我会非常感激。10.Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause.我真的希望得到这次珍贵的机会，因为11.IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.我确信我能够很好地达到你们的期望。,【好句朗诵】,1.Ihavetakenallthetesttomeetyourrequirements.,1.test改为tests,2.Thankyouinadvanceforyoukindconsideration.,2.第二个you改为your,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,3.Thepositionofsalesmanageradvertisinginthenewspaperinterestsmeverymuch.,3.advertising改为advertised,4.Iamwritingtoyoutoinquirethattherewouldbeanypositionavailableformetoworkasatelephoneoperator.,4.that改为whether/if,5.IfIamluckyenoughtobeadmitted,Illworkhardlyandtrytobeagoodengineer.,5.hardly改为hard,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,6.ThanksforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardforyourreply.,6.第二个for改为to,7.IthinkImqualifiedforthepositionyouareofferedintheadvertisement.,7.删掉are,8.MyreasonforleavemyformerpositionisthatIwanttogetmoreexperienceinsales.,8.leave改为leaving,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,9.Shouldyouoffermeapersonalinterview,Iwouldbegratefully.,9.gratefully改为grateful,10.IthinkIamtherightpersonforajobyouadvertisedandmyreasonsareasfollows.,10.a改为the,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,【2012全国卷：申请参加夏令营】假定你是李华，从互联网(theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一）DearSir/Madam,ImLiHua,asecond-yearhighschoolstudentfromChina.Igot7.5forIELTSearlythisyear,whichindicatesthatIwillhavelittledifficultycommunicatingwithothersinanEnglish-speakingcountry.ImwritingtoapplyforapositioninyoursummercampinSingapore.IbelievethisisawonderfulopportunityformetointroduceChinatoyoungpeoplefromothercountriesandtolearnfromthemabouttheircountries.Isincerelyhopethatmyapplicationcouldbefavorablyconsidered.Ifmoreinformationisneeded,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeviathisemail.Yours,LiHua,满分赏析每段的第一句为写作的主要内容，每段的其余部分为添加的具体信息。整篇文章行文清晰，语言地道，值得熟读背诵。用具体的例子(雅思7.5分)来说明英语水平，具体形象；本句句法更是由which引导的非限制性定语从句和indicate(意味着、暗示着)这个高级词汇引导的宾语从句。Imwritingtoapplyforapositionin这个高级句型清楚地点明了写作目的。Isincerelyhopethat礼貌得体，sincerely更强化了这一功能。询问对方是否需要知道更多的信息(Ifmoreinformationisneeded)，符合实际交际情境；pleasedonothesitatetocontactme是地道的表达，让对方随时和自己联系；via是“通过方式”的意思。,满分佳作（二）DearSirorMadam,TheotherdayIhappenedtoreadyouradvertisementontheInternet,sayingthatyouareholdingasummercampaimedatstudentsfromaroundtheworld,andIminterestedtoparticipateinit.ImLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentinChina.Asateenager,Iminterestedinmakingfriendswithkidsofmyagefromaroundtheworld.YourcampwillprovideagoodchanceformetoknowalotaboutothercountriesandtellthemsomethingaboutChina.Whatsmore,IcanimprovemyEnglish,communicatingwithpeoplefromothercountries.IdohopethatIcanbeluckyenoughtobeadmittedtoyourcamp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Regards,LiHua,满分赏析这个句子结构复杂，语法正确，使用了现在分词saying和过去分词短语aimedat，并有happento和participatein这样的高级短语。用到连词whatsmore作为上下文的连接，用communicatingwith现在分词短语作伴随状语。用了do作为强调句，加强语气；beadmittedto(被录取)，词汇使用地道高级。Lookingforwardtoyourreply是写信结束套语，需牢记。,【2010天津卷改编：申请到希望小学支教】作文原题假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等）个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）参考词汇：晨曦希望小学ChenxiHopeSchool,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译敬爱的先生/女士，我是来自高二一班的李华。我写信申请获得帮助晨曦希望小学的学生学习英语的机会。通过这项志愿者工作，我不仅可以帮助他们提高英语，我自己也能够学到如何与人相处及让整个学校受益。我有自己的优势，能成为你们团队的一员。我性格外向、独立，我认为只要我尽最大的努力，我能够比别人更加突出。我打算先和学生沟通，了解他们的需要。而且，我会尽力通过讲故事、唱歌等让他们对英语更感兴趣。如果您能给我这个机会，我将感激不尽。您诚挚的，李华,DearSirorMadam,ImLiHuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo.ImwritingtoapplyfortheopportunitytohelpthestudentsinChenxiHopeSchoolwiththeirEnglish.Throughthisvolunteerjob,notonlycanIhelpthemimprovetheirEnglish,butIcanalsolearnhowtogetalongwithpeopleandbenefitthewholeschool.Ihavemyadvantagestobeamemberofyourteam.Beingoutgoingandindependent,IthinkIwillstandoutamongtheothersaslongasItrymybest.Iplantocommunicatewiththestudentsfirsttoknowwhattheyneed.Besides,IlltrytogetthemmoreinterestedinEnglishbytellingstories,singingsongsandsoon.Idappreciateitifyoucouldgivemetheopportunity.Yourssincerely,LiHua,【2011辽宁卷改编：英文秘书求职】作文原题假定你是李华，将于今年7月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。写一封求职信，包括下列要点:1.年龄；2.学习情况及英语水平；3.兴趣和特长；4.性格特点,作文翻译敬爱的先生/女士，我从报纸得知你们公司需要一位英文秘书。这则广告很吸引我，所以我写信给您，希望能够填补这个工作职位。我今年刚刚18岁，将于今年7月份从新星外语学校毕业。我的学习一直很好，经常在考试中获得第一。作为一名英语专业学生，我尤其擅长口语，打字速度也很快。而且，我能够和别人在团队中相处很好。在空余时间，我喜欢进行户外活动。我的确希望我能够满足您的要求。如果能获得这份工作，我将非常感激。期待您的回复。您诚挚的，李华,DearSir/Madam,IlearnedfromthenewspaperthatyourcompanyneedsanEnglishsecretary.Theadisreallyveryappealingtome,soImnowwritingtoyouinthehopeoffillinginthejobvacancy.Ihavejustturned18thisyear,andwillgraduatefromXinxingForeignLanguagesSchoolthiscomingJuly.Ivebeendoingprettyfinewithmylessons,andalwaysturnoutfirstinexams.AsamajorinEnglish,ImparticularlygoodatspokenEnglish,andcantypeveryfast.Besides,Icanalwaysgetalongwellwithothersinateam.Inmysparetime,Iliketoengagemyselfinsomeoutdooractivities.IdohopethatIcanmeetyourrequirements.IwouldbegratefulifIcouldbegiventhejob.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,【2006全国卷：应征运动会志愿者】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历；2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况；3.承诺：提供最佳服务。生词：申请apply(v.)，application(n.)志愿者volunteerDearSir/Madam:MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheAsianWinterGames.Faithfullyyours,LiHua,【全真考场】,【2006全国2卷：应征运动会志愿者】DearSir/Madam,MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheAsianWinterGames.IwasquiteexcitedwhenIheardtheAsianWinterGameswillbeheldinmycity.Iaman18-year-oldboystudentinaseniormiddleschool.IhaveagoodmasteryofEnglish,alwaysrankingoneofthetopstudentsinEnglishexamsinmyschool.Whatsmore,notonlyamIfondofsports,butIalsolikemakingfriendsandamreadytohelpothers.Beingfamiliarwiththelocalsurroundings,IamsurethatIcanprovidethebestservicetoalltheathletesandtourists.Isincerelywishthegamesagreatsuccess.AndIwillbegratefulifIamluckyenoughtobechosen.Faithfullyyours,LiHua,【2007全国卷：描述理想笔友】假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1.年龄；2.性别；3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Bestregards,LiHua,【2007全国1卷：描述理想笔友】DearPeter,Imwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,hopefullyagirlinherearlytwenties,andwithinterestssimilartomine.Inmymind,sheissomeonewhoisinterestedintravelling,swimming,andplayingtabletennis.Besides,itwouldbebetterforhertohaveapetdogasIhavekeptoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchapenfriend,IhopeIcansharewithherourexperiencesintravelling,takingcareofpets,orwhateverwehaveincommon.AndIbelieveIwillimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountry.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestregards,LiHua,【2015陕西卷改编：应征英语文化节志愿者】假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读