浙江中考英语总复习第三篇书面表达篇话题写作05日常生活篇外研版.ppt

书面表达,话题写作（五）日常生活篇,【话题点睛】日常生活涉及的话题很广,你可以谈谈日常生活中的一些收获、困惑和感受。,典例分析,要求(1)参考表格内容,可适当发挥;(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;(3)文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);(4)词数:不少于80词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedaftermy5-year-oldsisterNanaathome._,【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是介绍上周日一天的活动以及感受。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:(1)上周日我独自在家照看五岁的妹妹Nana;(2)周日这天上午、中午和下午各做了什么事情;(3)发表你的感受。2.确定时态:一般过去时3.确定人称:第一人称【写作架构】,【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.早上我先给她讲了许多故事。(morning,tell),Imanyfunnyfirst.2.我也教她说一些简单的英语单词。(teachsb.todosth.)IalsoafewsimpleEnglishwords.3.我很开心她很享受这顿午餐。(glad)Iwasverythelunch.4.然后我们休息了一会儿。(have)Thenwe.5.下午我们一起玩游戏。(afternoon,play),wetogether.,Inthemorning,toldher,stories,taughthertospeak,gladthatsheenjoyed,hadarest,Intheafternoon,playedgames,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)1.Ilookedaftermy5-year-oldsisterNanaathome.(改为定语从句)2.Shesaid,“Theyaredelicious.”(改为宾语从句)3.Wewatchedcartoons.Myparentscameback.(用until合并为时间状语从句)4.Ifelttired.Ifelthappy.(用but合并为一个句子)5.WewerehappylastSunday.(改为感叹句),IlookedafterNana,mysister,whois5yearsold,athome.,Shesaid(that)theyweredelicious.,Wewatchedcartoonsuntilmyparentscameback.,Ifelttiredbuthappy.,HowhappywewerelastSunday!,【连句成文】LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedafterNana,myyoungersister,whois5yearsold,athome.Inthemorning,Itoldhermanyfunnystoriesfirst.Thenwesanganddancedhappilytogether.IalsotaughthertospeakafewsimpleEnglishwordsandshelearnedwell.Atnoon,Icookednoodleswithtomatoesandeggs.Shesaidtheyweredelicious.Iwasverygladthatsheenjoyedthelunch.Thenwehadarest.Intheafternoon,weplayedgamestogether.Afterthat,wewatchedcartoonsuntilmyparentscameback.Ifelttiredbuthappy.,拓展积累,【日常活动及购物】1.Wearehavingagoodtimehere.2.Iusuallywatchmoviesandplaygameswithmyfriends.3.Theyoftengobikeridingonweekends.4.Ioftenstayathometoreadandrelax.5.Iwouldliketobuyadressformymumbecauseshelikeswearingadress.【体育锻炼】1.Ioftenexerciseinthemorning.Itcanmakemehealthy,strongandfullofenergy.2.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsandcorrectbadonesinourlife.3.Wedbetternotspendtoomuchtimeonline.4.Theycaneasilybeshort-sightedafterplayingcomputergamesforalongtime.,【饮食健康】1.Tokeepahealthylifestyle,weshouldgetawayfromjunkfood.2.Takemorefruitsandvegetableswhichcanprovidewhatweneed.3.Inaword,abalanceddietcanhelpmakeusstrongerandhealthier.【日常生活谚语】1.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.岁月不待人。2.Neverdothingsbyhalves.做事不要半途而废。3.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。4.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事,只要肯攀登。5.Timeflies.时光易逝。,【生活感悟】1.Youcanlearnalotfromyourexperiences.2.Asthesayinggoes,failureisthemotherofsuccess.3.Studyplaysanimportantroleintheirlife.4.Readingcanmakeourlifecolourful.5.Youshouldstudyhardatknowledge,payattentiontosocialnewsanddevelophobbies.,实战演练,.,实战演练,实战演练,Onepossibleversion:Hi,Rick,Imfinethesedays.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamilytoo.Forexample,Ihavetogetupat6oclockandgotobedbefore10oclock.Imustgobackhomeat6:30p.m.OnschoolnightshangingoutandsurfingtheInternetarenotallowed.ButIdontagreewithsomeruleswhicharetoostrict.BecausesometimessurfingtheInternetisgoodformystudyandIalsoneedtospendmoretimewithmyfriends.Bestwishes!HanLin,B英语课上,你们开展了一次以“Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace?”为主题的讨论,同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片信息,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊EnglishLearning投稿。,注意(1)短文必须包括卡片所给的信息,适当发挥,并谈谈自己的想法;(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;(3)词数:80100。短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句:InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecandotomakehomeahappierplace._,Onepossibleversion:InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecandotomakehomeahappierplace.Weshareddifferentideas.Somesayitsbettertospendmoretimewithfamily.Themorewegettogether,thebetterweunderstandeachother.Familymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries.Forexample,whentheyhaveproblems,weshouldtrytocheerthemup.Othersbelieveitsimportanttogivesmallpresentstoourfamilyontheirbirthdays.Ith