《应用文写作辅导》PPT课件.ppt

评分标准采用总体评分方法，满分10分。1分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。3分-基本符合应用文写作规范。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。5分-基本符合应用文写作规范。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯：语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。7分-符合应用文写作规范。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误9分-符合应用文写作规范。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。,NotePayattentionthatyourletter/noteshouldbenomorethan80words.,Model1,Direction:Writeanannouncementaccordingtotheinformationgiven.假定你是学生会负责人，应广大学生的要求，邀请著名教授李刚来校为全体学生开设讲座。内容：美国文学时间：4月15日晚7:00-8:30地点：教学大楼103多媒体（multi-media）教室参加者：全体学生,Model2,Directions:YouarerequiredtowriteanoteofLOSTaccordingtotheinformationgivenbelow.YouareLiXin.Youleftyourbookinthelibraryyesterday.Writeanotetoexpressingyourdesiretogetitback.,Model3,Direction:Writealetterofthanksaccordingtotheinformationbelow.YourfriendXiaoPinghelpedwhenyouwereill.Writealetterandexpressyourthankstohim.,Model4,Direction:Writealetterofcongratulationaccordingtotheinformationbelow.YourfriendLilypassedtheCETband-4.Writeheralettertoshowyourcongratulations.,Model5,Direction:Writealetterofapologyaccordingtotheinformationbelow.Youfellillyesterdaymorning,andabsentedyourselffromattendingtheclass.Writeanotetoyourteacher,expressingapology.,Model6,Direction:Writealetterofinquiryaccordingtotheinformationbelow.你是张月。昨天你因病没去上课，你的外教Kate给大家布置了口语作业。给你的同学林芳写一个便条，询问她有关口语作业的详细要求。,Model7,Direction:Writealetterofinvitationtotheinformationbelow.留条给Johnson教授说英语系同学将于5月4日下周一晚7点在401教室举行演讲比赛，请他做评委。,Model8,Direction:Writealetterofjobapplicationaccordingtotheinformationbelow.Youhappentoreadanadforsecretaries.Youlikethejob.Writeanoteexpressingyourapplication.,I.布告、通知布告或通知一般公布即将发生的事，有时也公布已经发生的事，如宣布召开会议、举办宴会或玩会、放映电影或录像、举行各种比赛等等。一般包括以下三部分内容:1.时间：*月*日，星期*，*时*分2.地点3.活动如果是讲座或报告，其通知还应该包括：4.报告人简介如果是有关旅游的通知，则包括：5.其他细节,范文WomenslibMovementonU.S.CampusSpeaker：Prof.BettyPowellProfessorofSociology,SmithCollegeAuthorofTheOtherHalfoftheSkyDate:Friday,8MayTime:10a.m.Place:Rm.101AllWelcome!,FOUNDAbrownleatherwallet,inthedininghallonthemorningofsep.29th.OwnerspleaseclaimattheLostandfoundOffice,Rm.320onthe3rdflooroftheOfficeBuilding.LostandFoundOffice,II.致意、问候、祝贺、祝愿及吊唁等通常写在卡片上，用于不同的场合，传单不同的信息。一般包括三方面内容：收信人ToMr.&Mrs.Smith/Prof.Black信息发信人FromMary/LiLin,III.便条标题视为不同目的写的简短信函。形式比一般书信简单。便条多使用非正式语体或口语体。写便条时可以省略以下几项：收信人和发信人的地址称呼中的dear结尾处发信人的结尾套语日期中的年份但是，便条中的月日一定要写清楚。最好用英语，数字容易引起混乱和误会。,约会范文Tues.May9Prof.Lowell,IdliketodiscusswithyoutheoutlineofmyBAthesis.CouldyoupleaseappointatimeandleaveamessageformewithMs.Lininthedepartmentoffice?Thankyou.WangHong,道歉范文Mon.Oct.20DearProf.Richards,IamsorryIcouldntmakeour4oclockappointment.Prof.SterneslecturelastedalotlongerthanIexpected.Icouldmeetyouinthedepartmentofficetomorrowat3,ifthatisconvenientforyou.Ifnot,pleaseleaveanoteinmymailbox,#529,tomorrowmorning.Thankyou.ZhangHongyi,非正式邀请范文Prof.Lowell,TherewillbeameetingofourdramagrouponSaturdayafternoon,April8,at5inourclassroom,#410,inthisbuildingtodiscusswhichplaytoputonforEnglishEvening.Wewouldliketohearyoursuggestionsandhopeyouwillcome.SongLiping,请求范文1stAugustDearJudy,Congratulationsonyourverygoodpaperattheconference.Couldhaveacopyofitsenttothefollowingaddress?Thankyou.JiaXin,致谢范文DearMr.Singh,IamwritingtotellyouhowgratefulIamforyourwarmhospitalityduringmystayinNewYork.Ienjoyeditgreatly.FangTongbao,留言范文DearMr.Hussain,AMr.WangwhorecentlyarrivedfromBeijingwishestoseeyou.Youarerequestedtoringhimupanytimethiseveningfrom8:00to10:00at5005566,Ext.2106.Liu,Model1,假定你是学生会负责人，应广大学生的要求，邀请著名跨国公司BSCCompany人力资源部经理（HumanResourcesManager）JohnTailor先生来校为全体学生开设讲座。内容：如何准备招聘面试时间：3月20日晚7:00-8:30地点：多媒体（multi-media）教学大楼103教室；参加者：全体学生，尤其是应届毕业生（freshgraduates）,Model1,NoticeStudentUnionshouldbetherequirementsofthevastnumbersofstudentstoinvitewell-knownmultinationalcompaniesBSCCompanyHumanResourcesManager,JohnTailorPresidenttoschoolforallstudentslectures.Content:HowtoprepareforrecruitmentinterviewsTime:March20theeveningof7:00-8:30Location:multi-mediaTeachingBuilding,Room320Participants:allstudents,especiallyfreshgraduates,Model2,YouareLiXin.Youleftyourbaginthelibraryyesterday.Writeanotetoexpressyourdesiretogetitback.,Model2,LostApril2,2011ItisreallymyfaultthatIleftmybaginRoom302ofthelibraryyesterday,inwhichtherearetwotextbooksandanotebook,myIDcardisalsoinit.Willthefinderpleasesendittomeorcontactme.Ineediturgently.Add:Room406.DormBuildingSixTel:1234567Profoundthanksfrom,Owner,LiXin,Model3,YourfriendTomsentyouanalarmclockasabirthdaypresent.Writealetterandexpressyourthankstohim.,Model3,April.10,2011DearTom,Itwasverythoughtfulofyoutoremembermy18thbirthdayandIthankyouverymuchforthealarmclockandforyourgoodwishes.Itisalwaysverydifficultformetogetupinthemorning.Thankstoyourpresent,Icanwakeupontimetothesoundofmusic!Iamverymuchpleasedwithit.ItsjustwhatIneed!Thankyouagainforyournicegiftandkindness.Yourssincerely,LiYing,Model4,YourfriendLilywaselectedPresidentoftheEnglishAssociation.Writeheralettertoshowyourcongratulations.,Model4,Mar.23,2011DearLily,IammuchdelightedtolearnthatyouhavebeenelectedPresidentofouruniversityEnglishAssociation.ThisisaspecialandhappymomentforyouandIamveryproudofyourachievement.TheEnglishAssociationplaysanimportantroleinourcampuslife.Managingsuchanorganizationnotonlyisagreatchallengetoyou,butwillalsoenhanceyourabilitycomprehensively.Ibelievethispositionwillbeanewbeginning,andachangeforyoutoembraceafullerlifeandpavethewayforabrilliantfuturecareer.Pleaseacceptmymostsincerecongratulations!Yourssincerely,LiMing,Model5,你是李明。今天你无法去机场接朋友汤姆，因为你接到通知今天要参加重要的商务会议，并要在会议上发言，会议上午11点才结束，比接机时间晚了2小时。给汤姆写一封道歉信，并表示你会后将去酒店和汤姆会面。,Model5,May20,2011DearTom,IwouldliketoexpressmyapologythatIcantmeetyouattheairport.YesterdayIwasinformedthatImustattendanimportantbusinessmeetingonthedaywhenyouarrive.Iwillgiveaspeechatthemeetinganditissupposedtobeoverat11:00a.m.,whichwillbetwohourslaterthanyourarrivaltime.Iwillmeetyouatyourhotelasquicklyaspossibleafterthemeeting.Imsorryagainfortheinconvenience.Yourstruly,LiMing,Model6,You,WangChen,aretoldthatyourclassmate,LiJiang,wantstohavehiscomputerforhire.Yougotohisroomasyouneedacomputerforwritingyourresearchpaper,butheisout.Leavehimaletterofinquiry.,Model6,May30,2011LiMing,Iwaswonderingifyouwantedtohaveyourcomputerforhire.Ifitistrue,Idliketoknowaboutitsconditionandhowmuchyouwouldchargeforusingitforamonth.Ineedacomputerforwritingmyresearchpaper.WangChen,Model7,假定你是MargaretGreen，你的女儿SusanGreen和她未婚夫PeterLocke的婚礼将于2011年8月15日下午三点在花园酒店举行。写信给你的老友Mr.andMrs.Taylor，邀请他们来参加婚礼，并请他们在6月15前回复，确认是否参加。,Model7,March16,2011DearMr.andMrs.Taylor,Astheparentsofthebride,Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoinviteyoutotheweddingofourdaughter,SusantoherfiancPeterLocke.Onthisjoyousoccasion,wewishtosharethedaywithourclosestfriendsandfamilymembers.TheformaleventwillbelocatedattheGardenHotelonthefifteenthofAugustatthreeoclock,twothous