中考英语人教写作话题汇总复习：环境保护和学校生活.ppt

第三部分高频话题写作指导,九年级（全）Units13-14,环境保护写作导图分析湖南近3年42套中考真题可知湖南各地市对“环境保护”的话题考查较多，主要分为以下两个命题角度：,1.记叙你参加过的一次环保活动。如2014邵阳为了响应“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，上周我和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动。2.我们能为创建“文明城市”或“国家卫生城市”做些什么？如：2014永州要求以“Howtosetupanationalhealthycity?”为题写一篇作文；2013娄底要求写出“我们能为创建文明城市做什么”。下面以2014邵阳真题为例分析此话题：,Protectenviron-ment:avoluntaryactivity,whenandwhere,theprogress,feelingsaboutthisactivity,at8oclockonSaturdaymorninglastweek;trainstation,cleanthebenches;pickuptherubbish;adviseothersnottothrowrubbish;sweeptheground,tired;happy;wishmorepeopleprotecttheenvironment,亮点句型速成常用句型：Everyoneshouldprotecttheenvironment.Andtheworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.推荐句型：Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.,常用句型：Weshouldplantmoretrees,andwecanlivebetterandmorehealthily.推荐句型：Wearesupposedtoplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthilyinthefuture.Ifweplantmoreandmoretrees,wewilllivebetterandmorehealthilyinthefuture.,开头句：1.Itsimportanttoprotectourenvironment.2.Asthepollutionisbecomingworseandworse,weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheenvironmentprotection.,中间句：1.Weshouldnotthrowlitterontotheground.2.Weshouldnotspitinthepublicplace/cutdownthetrees.3.Wearesupposedtoplantmoreflowersandtrees.4.Wemustpickuptherubbishandthrowitintoadustbin.,结尾句：1.Itseveryonesdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.2.Ihopeeveryonewillmakeacontributiontoimprovingtheenvironmentofourcity.3.Ifallofuscandoalittlethingtoprotecttheenvironment,Imsureitwillmakeabigdifference.,（常用词汇见本书“28天词汇分类速记表”话题（二十）世界与环境）,典例剖析（14邵阳）假设你叫王磊，目前，我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1.文章为电子邮件，要求向朋友讲述在响“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的活动中，我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动（包括时间、地点、人物、活动、感受）。2.本文描述自己的经历，写作时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称。,3.回忆事件通常用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁，语法正确。4.词数应不少于80词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。,【高分范文】Bob,Imwritingtotellyouaboutavoluntaryactivitylastweek.Wegottothetrainstationat8oclockonSaturdaymorning.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomethingtomakeitcleanerand,tidier.First,wecleanedthebenches,andthenwepickeduptherubbishandadvisedothersnottothrowrubbishhereandthere.Atnoon,wesweptthegroundtogetherandthenweleft.,Wewerealittletiredafterlonghoursofhardwork,butwewerestillveryhappy.Ihopeeveryonewillmakeacontributiontoimprovingtheenvironmentofourcity.Hopetowritesoon.Bestwishes!Yours,WangLei,【检测菜单】1.捡起，拾起_2.到处_3.对做出贡献_,hereandthere,makeacontributionto,pickup,学校生活写作导图分析湖南近3年42套中考真题可知湖南各地市对“学生生活“考查频率很高，主要从以下三个角度来考查：1.学生的学习与生活。如：2014张家界要求根据给出的邮件告知笔友自己的学校生活；2014常德中考要求描述初中生活中最值得感谢的人；2013益阳要求以“Mymiddleschoollife”为题描述自己的中学生活；2013永州中考要求描述自己一天的生活和学习。,2.描述学生学习和生活的地点。如：2014株洲中考真题要求考生描述自己的教室，并谈论自己即将离开教室的感受。下面以2014常德中考真题为例分析此话题：,SchoolDays,StudyLife,SchoolActivities,SchoolLife,Learningproblems,Examinationpressure,Boarding/Dayschool,Schoolsports,Classactivities,After-schoolactivities,Thingsbetweenyouandclassmatesorfriends,Thingsbetweenyouandyourteachers,Studymethods,亮点句型速成常用句型：Myschoollifeiscomingtoanendinonemonth.推荐句型：Howtimeflies!Itwillbeanendingofmyschoollifeinonemonth.,常用句型：Thehomeworkisverydifficult,butwemustfinishit.推荐句型：Thehomeworkissodifficult.Butwemusttrytodoitbyourselvesandfinishitontime.Nomatterhowdifficultthehomeworkis,wemusttrytodoitbyourselvesandfinishitontime.,常用句型：Ilikeplayingfootball.推荐句型:Ilikeplayingfootballontheplayground.Ilikeplayingfootballontheplaygroundwithgreatinterest.,开头句：1.Myfavoritesubjectisphysics.2.Iwillneverforgetsuchaknowledgeableteacherinmylife.3.Itsalwaysbusyduringtheschooldays,butitsalsohappyandinteresting.,中间句：1.Sheisabeautifulwomanwithlonghair.2.Wearentallowedtoruninthehallways.3.Itakethesubwaytoschoolandittakes25minutes.4.Theearlybustakeshimtoschool.5.Wedbettertakenoteswhilelisteningtotheteacherinclass.,结尾句：1.YouhavegivenmesomuchhelpthatIwillneverforgetyouinmylife.2.Theschoollifeisverybusyandexciting.Therearemanyactivitiesinourschool,suchas.3.Ourteachershavetaughtusalot.Theynotonlyteachushowtolearn,butalsoteachushowtobeausefulpersoninsociety.,典例剖析（2014常德）初中生活即将圆满结束，至此，你一定有值得感恩的人，请以“ILoveYou,My.!”为题写一篇英文短文。要求：1.内容包括该人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘的事等；2.短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；3.词数80以上。,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1.记叙三年的校园生活中值得感恩的人（建议学生先回忆印象深刻的那些点点滴滴）。2.第一条要求写出人物的外貌、性格、爱好，这些可以略写，写那些难忘的记忆要详写，多列举实例。写作时用第二人称，时态为一般现在时。,3.文章最后还要有个人的感受、体悟、观点等信息，避免单纯的记叙事件，没有个人感触。4.词数应不少于80个，不得出现真实姓名、校名。,【高分范文】ILoveYou,MyEnglishTeacher!Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher.Youreatallmanwiththickglasses.Youlikesportsandoftenplayfootballandbasketballwithus.Yourehumorousandalwaysmakeyourclasseslivelyandinteresting.Yourekindbutstrictwithus.,Youoftenteachustha