江西省全南中学高三英语写作复习课件.ppt

Trytogetthehighestmarksinwriting!,Teachingaimsanddemands:1.Toreviseandrecitesomekeysentenceswelearnedtogether.2.Tolearntowriteagoodcomposition.,Totranslatethefollowingsentences:时光如梭Howtimeflies!2.我们有责任，尽我们最大的努力让我们的社会成为可以居住的一个好地方。Itisourresponsibilitytomakeasmucheffortaspossibletomakeoursocietyagoodplacetolivein.,3.每个人都与其他人有共同之处。Everyindividualhassomethingincommonwithothers.4.当我们考不好的时候，就会心情低落。Wewillfallinlowspiritswhenwedontdowellintheexams.5.正如谚语所说，失败是成功之母。Asthesayinggoes,failureisthemotherofsuccess.,6.令我非常兴奋的是我将参加在枣庄八中举行的英语演讲比赛。（1）Tomygreatexcitement,IwillattendanEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldinZaozhuangNo,8middleschool.(2)WhatexcitesmemostisthatIwillattendanEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldinZaozhuangNo,8middleschool(3)IamgreatlyexcitedtoattendanEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldinZaozhuangNo,8middleschool.,Pleasegothroughthefollowingwordsandrememberthem.Thenrewritethesentencesaccordingtotherequirements.,英语句子的种类,简单句(Thesimplesentence),并列句(Thecompoundsentence),复合句(Thecomplexsentence),请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。1.IturnedontheTV.Iwatchedit.2.Iboughtmysisterapresent.Shedidntlikeit.,并列句,IturnedontheTVandwatchedit.,Iboughtmysisterapresent,butshedidntlikeit.,3.Hewastired.Hewenttobed.4.Thechildhidbehindhismothersskirt.Hewasafraidofthedog.,Hewastired,sohewenttobed.,Thechildhidbehindhismothersskirt,forhewasafraidofthedog.,3.Hemadeapromise.Hedidntkeepit.,Hemadeapromise,buthedidntkeepit.,4.Maryisopeningthedoor.Johnisgreetingherguests.,Maryisopeningthedoor,andJohnisgreetingherguests.,请用括号中所给的词把此组句子连接为一个复合句。,Istillremembertheday.IfirstcametoBeijingonthatday.(when),IstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstcametoBeijing.,高分作文的标准（530分）：完全完成了规定任务；覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力；有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的,假设你是枣庄八中学生李华，将参加主题为“LetsRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1.自我介绍2.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。3.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbonlife）;节能（energy-saving）注意：1.词数：120-150词左右,1.自我介绍,假设你是枣庄八中学生李华，将参加主题为“LetsRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛,温馨提示：注意人称，时态，句式结构，不要漏要点。,1.IamLiHuafromZaozhuangNo.8MiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“LetsRideBicycles”.,IamLiHuafromZaozhuangNo.8MiddleSchool.IwillattendanEnglishspeechcontest,thetopicofwhichis“LetsRideBicycles”.IamLiHua,astudentfromZaozhuangNo.8MiddleSchool.IwillattendanEnglishspeechcontest,ofwhichthetopicis“LetsRideBicycles”.IamLiHuawhoisfromZaozhuangNo.8MiddleSchool.IwillattendanEnglishspeechcontestwhosetopicis“LetsRideBicycles”.,Whatcanweseeinthepicture?,2.Whatcanyouthinkofinyourmindfromthepictures?,manyvehicles,convenience,pollution,trafficjams,思路：1.越来越来家庭拥有轿车，轿车已是交通便利的工具。你想去哪里就去哪里。2.事物一份为二，轿车的发展带来一系列问题，排放的气体对我们身体有害，同时造成交通问题，浪费能源，,2.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题,温馨提示：注意时态，句式结构，不要漏要点。,交通便利的工具：aconvenientmeansoftransportation.事物一份为二：everycoinhastwosides带来一系列问题：willbringaboutaseriesofproblems排放的气体对我们身体有害：thepollutedairgivenoffbycarswilldogreatharmtoourhealth,toomanyprivatecarswillleadtotrafficjamsandagreatdealofenergywillbewastedandsoon.,同时造成交通问题，浪费能源：,2.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题,Nowadaysmoreandmorefamiliesownprivatecars.privatecarsareaconvenientmeansoftransportation.Youcangowhereveryoulike.,Buteverycoinhastwosides.ThedevelopmentoftheprivatecarswillbringaboutaseriesofproblemsForexample,thepollutedairgivenoffbycarswilldogreatharmtoourhealth,toomanyprivatecarswillleadtotrafficjamsandagreatdealofenergywillbewastedandsoon.,Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.,Whataretheydoing?,Ridingbicycles,Whatbenefitscanpeoplegetfromridingbicycles,inyouropinion?,exercise,environmentallyfriendly,energysaving,Whydomoreandmorepeopleliketoridebicycles?,Tolivethelow-carbonlife.,3.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康等。,温馨提示：注意时态，句式结构，不要漏要点,适当拓展。,思路：1.现在，对我们低碳生活是重要的。2.骑自行车的好处。第一，便宜，不用汽油第二，减少污染空气进入我们的环境，结果空气新鲜。最后但同等重要的是，对我们身体有好处，让我们身体更强壮。,我们过着低碳生活forustolivethelow-carbonlife,2.便宜，不用汽油,cheaper,theoilisnotnecessaryforbikes,3.减少污染空气进入我们的环境，结果空气新鲜。,reducethepollutedairintoourenvironmentandmaketheairmuchfresh.,4.对我们身体有好处，让我们身体更强壮。,ridingonabikewilldogoodtoourhealth.Itcanmakeourbodymuchstronger.,Nowadays,itsimportantforustolivethelow-carbonlife。Ithinkchoosingtoridebikeswillbegoodforus.Firstly,bikesarecheaperthancarsandtheoilisnotnecessaryforbikes,Secondly,Ridingbikescanreducethepollutedairintoourenvironmentandmaketheairmuchfresh.Sowecanliveinaclearenvironment.Lastbutnotleast,ridingonabikewilldogoodtoourhealth.Itcanmakeourbodymuchstronger.,假设你是枣庄八中学生李华，将参加主题为“LetsRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1.自我介绍2.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。3.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbonlife）;节能（energy-saving）注意：1.词数：120-150词左右,IamLiHuafromZaozhuangNo.8MiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“LetsRideBicycles”.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.,Howcanwesolvetheseproblemsthen?AsfarasImconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution,Foronething,bicyclesdontneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywontgiveoffwastegas.Whatsmore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.,Therefore,letstaketheresponsibilitytobuildupalow-carboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyou.,Homework:1.Afterclass,recitethecompositionasfluentlyaspossible.2.Lookat(3+2)onPage295andfind(2009安徽)writing.thinkaboutwritingthecomposition.,特殊句式句型强调句型倒装句型复合结构独立主格结构省略句型,将下列句子变成强调句或者倒装句1.IdidntrealizethemistakeuntilIgrowup.(强调划线部分）2.Wecanmakeourcountrystrongerandstrongerinthisway.（倒装句）,ItwasnotuntilIgrowupthatIrealizedthemistake,Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourcountrystrongerandstronger.,III.汉语中的逗号与在英语中的作用并非一致英语中句与句之间的联系绝不依靠逗号,而是借助连接词。缺少连接词,句与句之间也就不存在其合理性.例如:老师问了我一个问题,我不会回答。Theteacheraskedmeaquestion,Icouldntanswerit.Theteacheraskedmeaquestion,and/butIcouldntanswerit.,英语逗号用法与提升英语作文品质-NMET考生容易忽视或误用的英语写作常识DearDick,Hownicetohearfromyouagain.YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?Inshort,thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.Idontknowaboutothers,butIusedtoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.NowIhavemorefreetime.Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseums,andtakingcomputerlessons.IntheeveningsIcanwatchnewsonTVorreadnewspapers.Whatsmore,Icangotobedearlier.AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.Bestwishes,LiHua其中含逗号用法的情形:(1)DearDick,(2)Inshort,(3)Idontknowaboutothers,but.(4)Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseums,andtaking.,(5)Whatsmore,(6)AsfarasIknow,(7)Bestwishes,启示与结论:凡逗号出现的场合和时机无不体现英语的使用习惯或固定的表达方式,也与“为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇,具有较强的语言运用能力”,以及实现“上下文的连贯性,即有效地使用语句间的连接成分,全文结构紧凑,语言的得体性”这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号为主线,研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式,有可能使得写作快速步上新的台阶,从而收到事半功倍的效果。,【要点1】插入语前后须用逗号隔开1.Itis,afterall,duetohisnegligence.毕竟这是由于他的疏忽2.Sheis,asIhavetoldyoubefore,veryfondofcollectingstamps.就像我以前告诉过你的她很喜欢集邮3.Iam,therefore,verycarefulwhencrossingtheroad.因此我过马路时非常小心4.They,Mr.andMrs.White,willbethereinBeijingtomorrow.他们（怀特先生和太太）明天就到达北京5.Heis,tobeexact,sixteenyearsoldandisnotoldenoughtojointhearmy.确切的说，他才十六岁，还没有达到参军的年龄,【要点2】副词从句和逗号(1)句首的副词从句用逗号隔开。Ifitrainstomorrow,Iwillnotgo.明天下雨的话，我就不去了。Whentheymet,theyusedtonodtoeachother.他们见面时,会互相点头。(2)副词从句出现在主句之后,一般不用逗号，但附加的语意强时，就用逗号。Heislovedbyall,becauseheishonest.他人很诚恳，受到大家的爱戴。Heworkshard,sothathemaypass.他很用功，想必能考及格。(3)短的住所、时间副词从句可不用逗号。Whenitrainshestaysathome下雨时他待在家里。Whenpassing(=Whenhewaspassing)helookedin.他路过时顺便进来坐了一会儿。,精彩范文赏析,MyOpiniononCheatingInExamsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexamsatschool.Asstudents,weoftentakeexamsatschool,butsometimeswehavetoomanyexamswhicharetoodifficultforus.Ontheotherhand,someofusarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Sowhentakingexamstheysometimescheatinordertogetbetterresultstopleasetheirparentsandteachers.Inmyopinion,itiswrongtocheatinexamsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.Westudentsshouldbehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexams.Whatsmore,weshouldimproveourstudymethodsandgetwellpreparedforexams.,Atpresentsomemiddleschoolstudentshavepickedupabadhabitcheatingonexams.Theydothispartlybecausetheywanttomaketheirteachersandparentshappy.Somestudentscheatonexamsbecausetheydontstudyhardandcantgetgoodmarks.However,cheatingwillhaveaverybadeffectonmiddleschoolstudents.Ifstudentsusuallycheatonexams,theywillneverstudyhardagainbecausetheyb