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DesignedbyRoger,ThreeStepsmakesanamazingcomposition,DesignedbyRoger,作文题目：假定你叫张华。一家英文报社来信要邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况，并依照调查写一篇报道。请根据下表提供的信息，对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。,DesignedbyRoger,注意：词数120左右；文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总数Deareditor,ImwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowthestudentsusetheInternet_IhopeeverystudentcanmakeuseoftheInternetproperlyfortheirstudies.,DesignedbyRoger,Step1Listthekeypoints要点1阅读国内外新闻，学习英语readnewsathomeandabroad/learnEnglishhaveaccesstolearningnewsathomeandabroadaswellaslearningEnglish要点2发email、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏sende-mailslistento/enjoy/appreciatemusicsee/watchfilmsplaycomputergames,DesignedbyRoger,要点3网上购物doonlineshopping要点4过多的在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业spendtoomuchtimeinplayingcomputergamesonlinewastetime/affecttheirstudiesbeburiedinbelostinbegluedtobeaddictedtobehookedon,bebadforbeharmfultodoharmtohaveabad/negativeeffectonhaveabadinfluenceon,DesignedbyRoger,要点5浏览不健康信息，对身心有害readunhealthy/harmful/dirtyinformationdoharmtoboththeirbodyandmind.,bephysicallyandmentallyharmfultosb.,DesignedbyRoger,Step2Makesentences要点1阅读国内外新闻，学习英语1.Theycan_readnewsathomeandabroad_learnEnglish_theInternet/_Internet.2.With_,theycanhaveaccesstolearningthelatestnewsathomeandabroad_learningEnglish.3.TheInternetnotonlykeepsthestudents_whatsgoingonathomeandabroadbutalso_themachanneltolearnEnglishbythemselves.,notonly,butalso,through,by,thehelpoftheInternet,aswellas,wellinformedof,provides/offers,DesignedbyRoger,要点2发email、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏1.By_,theycanalsosendemailstotheirfamilies,relativesandfriends,enjoy_music,watchmovies_playcomputergames.2.TheInternetalso_forthemtokeepintouchwithothersby_emailsandtorelaxthemselvesby_music,seeingfilmsandplayingPCgames.,usingtheInternet,and,varioustypesof,makesitpossible,sending,appreciating,DesignedbyRoger,要点3网上购物Theycandoonlineshopping_leavingtheirhomes.2.Itismore_forthemtodoonlineshopping.3.Onlineshoppingbringsthemalotof_.,without,convenient,convenience,DesignedbyRoger,要点4过多的在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业Theyspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline.T_/c_/As_,itwastesalotoftimeandaffectstheirstudies.2.Theyareaddictedto/arehookedononlinecomputergames,_wasteslotsofvaluabletimeanda_theirstudies.,herefore,onsequently,aresult,which,ffects,DesignedbyRoger,3.Theyareburiedin/arelostin/aregluedtoonlinecomputergames,whichresultsin_timeand_intheirstudies.4.Theyareaddictedto/arehookedon/areburiedin/arelostinonlinecomputergames,w_agreatd_ofp_timeandhavingabadeffectontheirstudies.,awasteof,poorperformance,asting,eal,recious,DesignedbyRoger,要点5浏览不健康信息，对身心有害1.Theyreadsomeunhealthy/harmful/dirtyinformation,_doesharmtoboththeirbodyandmind.2.Theyreadsomethingunhealthy/harmful/dirtyonthenet,which,un_/un_,isphysicallyandmentallyharmfultothem.3.Harmfulinformationthattheyreadonthenet_theirbodyandmind.,which,doubtedly,avoidably,hasabadeffecton,适度添加副词，增加语言表现力,DesignedbyRoger,Step3.FormapassageandpolishDeareditor,ImwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowthestudentsusetheInternet._,theycanhaveaccesstolearningthelatestnewsathomeandabroadaswellaslearningEnglishwiththehelpoftheInternet._,theInternetalsomakesitpossibleforthemtokeepintouchwithothersbysendingemailsandtorelaxthemselvesbyappreciatingmusic,seeingfilmsandplayingPCgames._,itismoreconvenientforthemtodoonlineshopping.,Asweallknow,theInternetisplayinganincreasinglyimportantrole/partinourdailylife.,Thereisnodoubtthatitbringsstudentslotsofconvenience.,Tobeginwith/Firstly,Whatsmore,Last/lastly,开头：引出话题,总起句：因特网的优势,分述三个优势,DesignedbyRoger,However,everycoinhastwosides.TheInternetalsohasitsdisadvantages.However,theunfavorableaspectsoftheInternetcannotbeneglected.Somestudentsarehookedon/aregluedtoonlinecomputergames,whichresultsinawasteoftimeandpoorperformanceintheirstudies._,theyalsoreadsomethingunhealthyonthenet,which，_，isphysicallyandmentallyharmfultothem.IhopeeverystudentcanmakeuseoftheInternetproperlyfortheirstudies.,Tomakethingsworse,/Whatsworse,undoubtedly/unavoi