四级图画作文模板.doc

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below, You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第一段： 描述图片 引向主题Emerging from the cartoon is a thought-provoking scene: seating in front of a screen, the parents are typing a message, inviting their son to come down-stairs. By this scenario, the cartoonist is warning us that Internet seems drawing us near, but setting us apart. 第二段：点明主题 充分拓展Indeed, We have all stepped into an era of online communication. Each of us seems getting closer in the digital world, but not everyone has looked at the side-effect: face-to-face communication is fading away. In our daily life, its not uncommon that some teenagers may chat with strangers online (for hours) but refuse to talk to family members face to face (for even a minutes).第三段：根据上文 有效评论We have to step out of the shadow, but how? The media should promote the awareness of harm of Internet addiction. Meanwhile, warm family atmosphere is needed to get back the young Internet surfers. Just as what the cartoon connotes, we should be master of the Internet, but not be mastered by it.图画作文第一段：分两部分：引入图片细节、总结图片主旨引入图片细节的表达1) Emerging from the cartoon is a thought-provoking scene:2) Under the amusing appearanceof the cartoon is a thought-provoking scene that3) A thought-provoking scene, as is portrayed in the cartoon is that 点名图片主旨的表达1) By this scenario, the cartoonist is warning us that2) The cartoonist aims to tell us that3) The cartoonist uses this metaphor to inform us that4) The cartoon mirrors a social phenomenon/ crisis that5) The cartoon reveals/ unveil/ displays/exhibits a social phenomenon that6) A social phenomenon is echoed by the cartoon that 第二段第一句：（交代所处的时代背景）1) Indeed, we have all stepped into an era of，Obviously, We are surrounded by in recent years.2) We are facing a social texture characterized by(后面只能加名词性的短语或从句)3) Currently, We are enjoying the conveniences brought by4) So far, the society has a marked characterized of人们对同一事情的不同看法1) Each of us seems, but not everyone has looked the side-effect2) Observes are split on whether this is a wholly good thing, on the one hand, on the other hand.3) views are different as to whether this is completely beneficial to us, some hold that, while others argue that.举例证明：1) In our daily life, its not uncommon that,such cases (a case) may not be unfamiliar to us2) Not less than one case come to my mind, but the following one will suffice.3) Any cases? Let look at the following one-第三段：1) We have to step out of the shadow, but how ?2) We must ward off