2011届高考英语话题作文专题突破(1)---个人情况、家庭、朋友及周围的人.doc

2011届高考英语话题作文专题突破（1）-个人情况、家庭、朋友及周围的人 编写人：陈勃 审核人：邓开盛 2011-2-19一、新课标解读：指本人、家人、邻居、同学、老师、朋友和其他人的情况介绍。包括姓名、年龄、生日、出生地、地址、电话号码、QQ号、电子邮箱、职业、品格、性格、习惯、毅力、责任、个性心理、意志品质、业绩或成就；所在学校、年级、班级，等等。还有球星影星、同时代的出现在各领域的名人(contemporary famous people)、科学家、领袖人物、历史人物(historical persons)及其趣闻轶事。二、命题预测：A基础写作: 自我介绍(自荐信、个人简历)；名人简历；名人轶事；写竞选演讲稿；写求职书或应聘信；选择网友、笔友的条件；志愿者申请书、推荐信等。B读写任务：请就性格、习惯、毅力、责任、态度等发表看法； 你认为什么品质或态度等能带来成功及其理由；你认为怎样才能受人欢迎? 从某人的失败或成功中，你学到了什么? 等等。三、写作指导1体裁：记叙文（或应用文）2基本类型：记人（结合叙事）3常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友，老师，父母，名人等等4记叙方法：顺叙（倒叙，插叙）5注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人，不拖泥带水；注意5W1H；人称时态6常见段落结构：主题句发展句结论句四、如何写人（How to introduce or describe a person ）A.必备词汇：I. 姓名 My name is ; Im ; He is a five-year-old boy who is called Tom; A man named Jack was- -II. 年龄 (1) a boy aged five 一个五岁的男孩(2) at the age of five在五岁时(3)in my teens /twenties在我十/二十多岁时(4 ) As a child, I liked to. 我小时候喜欢III. 出生及家庭背景(1)was born in . 出生在; Born in Guangdong Province , Yijianlian is - - -(2)be/come from a wealthy family出生于富裕人家(3)was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭（4）live a hard / happy lifeIV. 外表(1)a 1.80-meter-tall boy 一个高1.8米的男孩(2)overweight胖的；thin瘦的；slim苗条的；strong强壮的(3)look young for ones age 显得比实际年龄年轻(4)good-looking 长得好看；plain-looking 长得一般(5)well dressed 穿得漂亮； neatly dressed 衣着干净整洁能力V. 性格或品质好的方面：active / confident / considerate / honest / brave / gentle / optimistic / polite / positive diligent / modest / helpful / reliable / hard-working/ generous / wise / kind / friendly /easy-going / clever / enthusiastic /ambitious /loyal / independent etc.坏的方面(或中性)：proud / shy / mad / rude /cruel / greedy / lazy / selfish / stubborn / mean /strange / foolish / careless / indifferent / nervous / bad-tempered /impatient / etc.VI. 能力(1)efficient办事高效率的(2)intelligent有智力的；creative 富创造力的(3)a boy with great ability 能干的男孩(4)a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师(5)speak fluent English 讲流利的英语(6)have a gift for 有的天赋(7)be skilled in 在方面熟练(8)be experienced in 在方面有经验VII. 教育经历study in/ graduate from从毕业./ be admitted into被大学录取./ be majored in专业是/ get higher education接受更高的教育/go abroad for further study出国深造/ receive a bachelors/masters/doctors degree获得学士、硕士，博士学位/ gain scholarship 获得奖学金/ get good grades获得好成绩 / study harder than ever before /make great progress in English / VIII. 事迹或成就serve as, （做工作）/be determined to do/do research into this field /devote oneself to（致力于）/try ones best to do sth / have a good way of doing sth / work day and night / make full use of time / / give up ones life for sth / receive the Nobel Prize for Physics / win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名make contributions to （做贡献）achieve our dream of - - -IX. 他人评价set a good example to（树立一个好榜样）be famous at home and abroad（国内外出名）, , be given the title of. 获得称号be honored as（被授予）be rewarded / be regarded as / be considered to be / a model worker /an inspiring leader/ be famous as / be respected by / speak highly of / think well of / X. 其它 （如 健康、兴趣和爱好、个人情感、人际关系等等）略B. 写人经典句型1. 知识面广Ive read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields.2. 英语好Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing.3. 善于交际I would like to make friends with people working in different areas.She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.她与任何人都能相处的很好，无论到哪都很受欢迎。4. 乐于助人I am ready to help anyone in need.Being kind and helpful, she always enjoys helping others out.她善良，乐于助人，总是愿意帮助别人解决困难。5. 合作精神Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others.6. 承诺I make sure that if Im admitted to _, Ill spare no effort to _ .7. 其它In her spare time, she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.业余时间她喜欢听音乐读小说。 C. 写人常用结尾句：1)他不仅是我们的老师也是我们的朋友， 我们尊重他爱戴他。He is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love him.2)他是我们学习的榜样。He has set a very good example for us all to follow.3)有他这样的朋友我感到很骄傲。I feel proud to have such a friend.4)这就是我的父亲：勤劳、善良。我爱我的父亲。My father is such a person: kind-hearted and hard-working. I love my father.5）It was Pauls first important lesson as a student of chemistry and he never forgot it.这就是保罗这个学化学的学生所上的重要的第一课，而他一直没有忘记这堂课。五、经典范文模仿1.【2006年全国卷I】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. Im a 16-year-old girl who has just graduated from a senior school. I think I am a proper member in the organization. Now, let me introduce myself to you. Firstly, my English is very good. I can talk with foreigners fluently. Secondly, Im interested in athletics. And Im good at taking up with others. When my friends get in trouble, I often help them actively. Thirdly, Im so familiar with this place that I can lead anyone to where he wants to go. I make sure that if my application is accepted, Ill offer the best service to people. Im looking forward to your answer.写作点拨：人物介绍类作文主要组成部分：a. 基本情况：姓名、性别、学历、爱好、单位b. 个人条件：1）知识面、英语水平、个人特长；2）交际能力、合作精神、相关经历。3）目的、承诺、希望等。2. 【2010年浙江卷】 最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气的炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装），用英语为班级板报写一篇100120个词的短文。 你的文章应包括下列要点：1.李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；2.你的评论。注意：1. 文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。3.参考词汇：singing contest 歌咏比赛 costume 服装 Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She deserves the honor and we should learn from her. 3. 下面是从【2006年湖南卷】范文里挖掘出本题材的一个写人的黄金模板。 is the one who impresses me most., Though is - - -years old, he looks very young for his age. And hes one of the most popular _.Compared with other _. pays more attention to _ .He tries various ways to make _ . In his opinion, we should not only know _, but also understand _. So , instead of _, he encourage us to _. With his help. weve learned how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.2011届高考英语话题作文训练材料（1）-个人情况、家庭、朋友及周围的人一、基础篇 按要求把下面句子翻译成英文：1. 姚明身高2.26米，体重134公斤，出生与1980年月12日，上海。（同位语）我的英语老师是一位漂亮的女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发.（with短语）Michael Phelps 一位世界出名的游泳运动员，出生与1985年美国。（分词状语）4.2006 年，在打破世界纪录并获金牌之后，Michael Phelps成了年轻人的偶像。（分词状语）5.雷锋给我们树立了一个好榜样，所以人们都应该向他学习。(并列句)6.他不但对科学感兴趣而且有音乐天赋。（not only 句首倒装）7.但他还是个小男孩是，他就梦想成为美国总统。（when）8. 在克服了所有的困难，经历了许多痛苦后，刘翔终于获得了冠军。（强调句）9.以惊人的毅力，丛飞痛苦的与癌症奋斗了5年。（ with 短语）10.我们都知道，尊敬父母是中国的传统美德。（it 形式主语）11.有的父母认为没有必要叫小孩做家务，因为他们只期待他们成绩好。（it形式宾语）12.由于贫穷，在他14岁的时候，他被迫辍学。（被动）13.2008年11月，Obama被选为美国第44 任总统,成为美国历史上的第一位黑人总统。（被动，分词状语）14.我希望我们可以更多地相互了解和更好地理解对方。（宾语从句）15 .当你有困难的时候，你会发现有朋友在身边是有帮助的。（ it形式宾语，省略）一、翻译练习参考答案：1. Yaoming, 2.26 meters in height and 134 kilograms in weight, was born in Shanghai on September 12th 1980.2. My English teacher is a beautiful woman, with big eyes and long hair.3. Born in America in 1985, Michael Phelps is a world-famous swimmer.4. In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal, Michael Phelps became the idol of the youth.5. Leifeng set a good example to us, so all the people should learn from him.6. Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.7. When he was only a little boy, he dreamt of becoming president of the United States.8. It was after overcoming all the difficulties and going through all the hardships that Liuxiang got the champion.9. With great perseverance, Congfei fought against cancer painfully for 5 years, 10. As we all know, it is one of Chinas traditional values to respect parents.11. Some parents think it unnecessary to have their children do housework, because they only expect them to do well in their lessons.12. He was forced to leave school at the age of 14 because of poverty.13. On November 4th, 2008, he was elected the 44th President of the United States, making him the first black President of the country.14. I hope we can know more about each other and understand better about each other.15. You will find it helpful to have so many good friends around you when in trouble.二、作文篇 第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）下周一，你将在班会课上介绍你最喜欢的外籍老师-Mandy。请根据下表内容， 写一篇英文发言稿。写作内容基本情况对我们要求很严格，是我们学校最受欢迎的老师之一兴趣爱好听音乐、演讲喜欢她的理由1. 备课认真，善于鼓励我们多讲英语；擅长于最清晰、最简单的方式给我们传授知识。2. 有很多方式使课堂生动有趣，让我们难忘。3. 很注意我们提出的问题，所以当我们提出一些很简单的问题时， 也从来不觉得尴尬。结论我坚信，在她的教导下， 我们在英语学习中会取得好成绩。写作要求1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不包含在5个句子中；3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。My dear fellow students, Good afternoon. Thank you for giving me this precious opportunity to introduce Mandy, my favorite teacher, to you all. Thats all. Thank you for your listening.第二节 读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。I lose so many things that I could believe that they just walk away by themselves. Most of my friends have such good habits that they never lose anything. They seem to have a place for everything, and things are always where they should be. I hate comparing my habits with them. Some things have a terrible habit of making themselves away when I need them. Pencils and ballpoint pens are never anywhere near the telephone when it rings, no matter how much care I seem to take. Can openers always manage to wander out into the yard someplace and so, opening a can is always a big problem. I decided to change. I had a big box built and put all the things in it. I had a lock installed on it, believing nothing could escape. This was a perfect idea- until I lost the key to the box!【写作内容】1）以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容；2）然后以约120个词就“习惯的价值”这个主题发表你的看法，内容包括：（1）说说你生活中的某些或某个习惯的结果。（2）你如何看待你的习惯？（3）谈谈习惯的价值。(如谈与个人成功的关系等) 写作要求1. 作文中可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。参考答案二、参考范文1. My dear fellow students, Good afternoon. Thank you for giving me this precious opportunity to introduce Mandy, my favorite teacher, to you all. Mandy, whose hobbies are listening to music and making speeches, has been working as an English teacher in our class since last year, who is strict with us and one of the most popular teachers in our school. The reason why I like her most is that she prepares lessons carefully and is good at encouraging us to speak English as much as possible and providing us with knowledge in the clearest and simplest way. In addition, she has many ways to make her classes lively and interesting., which makes what we have learned unforgettable in class. Moreover, she pays attention to all our questions, so we never feel embarrassed to ask some very simple questions. Therefore, I firmly believe that we will do well in learning English with Mandy teaching us. Thats all. Thank you for your listening.2.读写任务 Form a Good Habit This t