人教版高三英语复习专项－写作课件.ppt

高考英语,listening,Multiplechoice,Clozetest,Readingcomprehension,Readingexpression,writing,专项:Writing(书面表达),JoyandherstudentsfromClass4,Fivegradesinjudgingyourcompostion:,Grade5（21-25分）Grade4（16-20分）Grade3（11-15分）Grade2（6-10分）Grade1（1-5分）,Trytobeajudge,andmarkthe2passagesaccordingtothestandards,完成任务（是否偏离主题）内容（要点是否完整）语法结构/词汇（句子单词是否正确）,Samples:,DearTom,IamwritingtotellthatIcannotgotoBeijingwithyouthistime.IamsorrybutIreallycannotmanageit.Iknowyouhavelookedforwardtothistripforsuchalongtime,butmygrandmotherisillandIhavetolookafterher.Asyouknow,mygrandmotherlovesmesomuch.Ireallycannotleaveheralone.Beijngisaplacewhichistrulyworthavisit,especiallyinspring.Maybewecangotheretogethersometimeinspring.Howdoyoulikethisidea?YoursJohn,Deareditor,Inthisdayandage,withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ipadisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Butargumentsarisewhenthissmartmachineappearinmiddleschoolclassroom.Asweallknow,everycoinhas2sides.Soisthesituationwithipad.Ontheonehand,itcanhelptomakelearningeasyandsimple.Ontheotherhand,itmayaffectthestudyingatmosphereintheclassroom.Andsomestudentsevenuseitasasigntoshowoff.Thus,itaffectsstudentsphysicalandmentalhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldbereasonablewhenusingipad.Donotuseitduringthelessons.Doyouagreewithmeonthispoint?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply!YourssincerelyLiHua,Shiningpointsofpassage1:,DearTom,IamwritingtotellthatIcannotgotoBeijingwithyouthistime.IamsorrybutIreallycannotmanageit.Iknowyouhavelookedforwardtothistripforsuchalongtime,butmygrandmotherisillandIhavetolookafterher.Asyouknow,mygrandmotherlovesmesomuch.Ireallycannotleaveheralone.Beijngisaplacewhichistrulyworthavisit,especiallyinspring.Maybewecangotheretogethersometimeinspring.Howdoyoulikethisidea?YoursJohn,16,Shiningpointsofpassage2:,Deareditor,Inthisdayandage,withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ipadisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Butargumentsarisewhenthissmartmachineappearinmiddleschoolclassroom.Asweallknow,everycoinhas2sides.Soisthesituationwithipad.Ontheonehand,itcanhelptomakelearningeasyandsimple.Ontheotherhand,itmayaffectthestudyingatmosphereintheclassroom.Andsomestudentsevenuseitasasigntoshowoff.Thus,itaffectsstudentsphysicalandmentalhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldbereasonablewhenusingipad.Donotuseitduringthelessons.Doyouagreewithmeonthispoint?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply!YourssincerelyLiHua,20,1.analysethetopic,2.writeanoutline,3.checkifyoumakeanymistakes,beginning,body,ending,Whatweshoulddo:,审题,Logic（逻辑性）,Keywords（信息词）,Keysentences(信息句）,Genre(体裁）,Person(人称）,Tense(时态）,假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。不少于120字。1.过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受和认识；3.将来的目标及措施。参考词汇：责任responsibilityGoodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“thoughtsonbecomingagrown-up”.,审题,三段式作文,1、beginning,Withthedevelopmentofeconomy/society/.,.,AsfarasIamconcerned,.,2、body,Firstandforemost,Tobegin(start)with,Mostimportantofall,Furthermore,Whatsmore,Moreover,Inaddition,Foronething.foranother.,Ontheonehand.ontheotherhand.,Lastbutnotleast,Eventually,3、ending,Inaword,Insummary,Onthewhole,Tosumup,Allinall,Inconclusion,Generallyspeaking,Frommyperspective,Tipsonhowtomakeyourcomposition“shine”:1.强调句itis/wasthat如：ItwasnotuntilIarrivedhomethatIrealizedIhadleftthebagontheshopcounter.,2.倒装句IrealizedthatIhadmisunderstoodhimwhenhetoldmethetruthOnlywhenhetoldmethetruthdidIrealizethatIhadmisunderstoodhim.3.with的复合结构可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with的复合结构。如：Hefeltgreatlystressedwhentherewasheavyburdenonmind.Withheavyburdenonmind,hefeltgreatlystressed.,4.巧用非谓语动词Youaremorelikelytoleaveagoodimpressionontheinterviewersifyouaredressedinaproperway.Dressedinaproperway,youremorelikelytoleaveagoodimpressionontheinterviewers.5.被动句：Wemustdosomethingtostopfactoriespouringwastewaterintorivers.Somethingmustbedonetostopfactoriespouringwastewaterintorivers.,6.巧用从句Wecametoaplace.Theyhadneverbeforepaidavisittothisplace.Wecametoaplacetowhichtheyhadneverpaidavisitbefore.HewaslateagainanditmademeangryItmademeangrythathewaslateagain7.适当使用插入语如Iguess,however,inaway,certainly,inmyopinion,probably,generallyspeaking,believeitornot,besides,whatsmore等。,即时练习使用上述技巧，合并或改写下列句子1.IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.（强调句）2.Wecanliveahappylifeonlybythismeans.（倒装）3.Hefellasleep.Thelightswerestillon.（with结构）,ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.,Onlybythismeanscanweliveahappylife.,Hefellasleepwiththelightson.,4.Igotonabus.Therewerealreadytoomanypeopleonit.（定语从句）5.Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students.（被动语态）6.Weshouldmakeeffortstoreduceairpollution.（被动语态）,Igotonabusonwhichtherewerealreadytoomanypeople,Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students.,Effortsshouldbemadetoreduceairpollution.,7.Theywerefacedwithmanyproblems.Theydidntloseleart.（非谓语动词）8.Itwasgettingdark.Anditbegantorain.（插入语）9.Heworkedveryhard.Hemadegreatprogressinhisstudy.(改为复合句),Facedwithmanyproblems,theydidntloseheart.,Itwasgettingdark.Whatwasworse,itbegantora