写作技巧-六级写作.doc

七种提分的写作技巧1不要总是以有生命的名词或人称代词开头例1People experience many great changes in the last half century. 低分 Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectation. 高分例2Students should certainly make continuous efforts. 低分 Continuous efforts on the part of students are certainly required. 高分技巧：找到原句中的非生命的名词短语，把它变成主语。例3 birth control is quite necessary in China. 低分 It is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted that birth control is quite necessary in China. 高分技巧：使用主语从句。Many people think=It is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted.例4More and more people agree/realize/are aware that women should enjoy full equality with men. 低分 There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that women should enjoy full equality with men. 高分技巧：使用存在句there be句型。More and more people agree/realize/are aware that.=There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that .例5Many Chinese people have gone to the United states in the past 15 years. 低分 The past 15 years have brought many Chinese people to the United States. 高分技巧：用时间词作主语。效果非常好。如：The last half of the 20th century has seen/witnessed many great breakthroughs in every aspect. 1. 英语中被动句的使用频率远远高于汉语。例1They make a lot of innovations to make money for a few people. 低分 A lot of innovations are made to with the aim of making money for a few people. 高分技巧：宾语变主语。例2We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children. 低分 More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from their children. 高分技巧：动词变名词。2. 不要总是用“如果”、“因为”、“当”等口语意味较重的句子；不要对动词过于依赖，要学会名词或介词结构来表达意思。例1Even if you believe change is inevitable, this does not mean “change is always for the better”. 低分However, reaching the conclusion that change is evitable is not the same as assuming that “change is always for the better”. 高分技巧：使用同位语从句。例1If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars. 低分 Careful comparison of bicycles with cars will show the superiority of the former over the latter. 高分例2If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.低分 The application of book knowledge alone wont bring you good results. 高分例3If we can better understand the greater pressure of the population growth, we will have a correct attitude towards family planning. 低分 A better understanding of the greater pressure of population growth is essential to a correct attitude towards family planning. 高分例4If we are watching too much TV, our reading ability will be seriously affected. 低分 Heavy exposure to TV will exert a negative effect on our reading ability. 高分例5 When a woman sees that she is going to be laid off, she begins to worry all day and night. 低分 The mere prospect of lay-off would set a woman to worry all day and night. 高分例6Because we can not apply book knowledge to practice, we can not handle real problems in society. 低分 The inability to apply book knowledge to practice prevented us from handling real problems in society. 高分技巧：把动词改成名词。3. 不要总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思。例1Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost. 低分 There is hardly a young boy and girl who does not want to earn a little money to help cover college cost. 高分技巧：every=hardly+not 例2Food is the most basic issue to individual and national survival. 低分 No issue is as basic to individual and national survival as food. 高分技巧：最高级=not as.as 例3Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will find advertisements. 低分 It is impossible to pick up a newspaper without finding advertisements. 高分技巧：whenever=impossible+without 4. 恰当使用排比、平行句。例4I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion. 低分I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to have equal opportunities for promotion. 高分5. 使用同位语从句。例1First, most people would agree that the Internet has improved the way we communicate. 低分 First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. 高分6. 不要一个一个地罗列句子，要学会用分词和从句把它们连起来。例Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, resort to smoking. Though they feel a little guilty sometimes. 低分Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though feeling a little guilty sometimes. 高分2011年英语六级参考范文Certificate Craze One of the latest crazes in Chinese colleges and universities is the drive to get multiple certificates in a variety of areas. Whether its a translation certificate, a driving certificate or a certificate or a certificate in math or science, many students hold the opinion that having extra certificates will help them find better jobs. The reasons why students prefer to acquire certificates are various. Some students are desperate for as many certificates as possible mainly because of the great pressure of finding a good job. CVs that do not have many highlights can hardly stand out. Owing to this, many students exert themselves to earn certificates so that they can beat their competitors in the job market. Besides, some hold that professional certificates are important supplement to their school work. Through successfully obtaining various certificates, students can prove their competence and gain self-confidence. As for me, though we can not deny the above benefits, wed better not just join the parade and waste time on certificates that will never be helpful. Besides, it is the abilities that count in securing a job instead of a bunch of certificates. Moreover, we should also prepare for certificates in line with our interests, or rather, our career plan. 提升写作用词描述问题1. wise: advisable, sensible, rational, reasonable 2. important: decisive, crucial, primary, far-reaching, profound3. good: beneficial, enlightening, instructive, valuable, precious4. famous: distinguished, prestigious, renowned5. clear: specific, particular, definite, concrete6. bad: negative, adverse, disadvantageous, dreadful, unfavorable, ill7. good: positive, favorable, advantageous8. useful: helpful, beneficial, rewarding9. bad: serious, severe, grave10. enough/plenty: sufficient, adequate, abundant11. have free time/have: available12. attractive: enchanting, charming, appealing, alluring, fascinating13. go out of date: go out of fashion/style14. very big/large: tremendous, huge, giant, enormous15. expensive: precious, valuable, valued, cherished, treasured, costly, extravagant 16. strong: keen, intense, fierce, violent17. rich: prosperous, flourishing, thriving, booming, wealthy, well-off 18. wonderful: splendid, magnificent, superb, striking, marvelous19. bad(粗俗的，不雅的): unrefined, improper, crude, coarse, rough20. dirty: messy21. great, surprising: fantastic, incredible, unbelievable, extraordinary, marvelous, notable, amazing, astonishing22. unusual: exceptional, rare23. difficult to understand: complicated, complex, mysterious, incomprehensible, confusing, bewildering24. only: sole, single, unique25. different kinds of: a variety of, various, diverse, all sorts of, a wide range of26. lower, worse(低等的，次要的): inferior, junior, minor27. higher, better: superior, senior, major28. waste time/money/space/energy(浪费的):time/money/space/energy-consuming29. increase: ascend, climb, rise, mount, roar, on the rise30. fall: descend, drop, decline描述人物1. hard-working: conscientious, diligent2. careful: cautious3. calm: sober, sensible, rational4. clever: intelligent, brilliant, distinguished, remarkable5. decided: persistent, insistent, determined, resolute, resolved, firm6. unfair: biased, prejudiced, partial7. not kind: hostile, adverse, aggressive8. worried: anxious, uneasy, concerned9. cold/not kind: indifferent, unconcerned, uninterested, cold-hearted10. tired: exhausted, fatigued, run-down, worn-out, weary11. frustrated: discouraged, depressed, low-spirited分析问题1. desire: ambition, thirst, aspiration2. aim: ambition, strategic goal, target3. ability: capability, competence, talent, faculty, capacity4. good: advantage, merit, benefit5. bad side: disadvantage, defect, flaw, drawback, deficiency6. shortage: insufficiency, inadequacy 7. fun: entertainment, amusement8. thing: affair, business, matter9. problem: difficulty, crisis, disaster10. friend: acquaintance, intimate, associate, companion11. people: individuals, characters, folks12. government: authority13: way/method: approach, means, measure采取措施1. work: play a role, perform, function, serve, play a part, take effect2. try to/work hard: attempt to, make efforts to, endeavor to, manage to, try every means to3. make full use of: optimize, make best use of, make the most of4. use: employ, utilize, apply5. teach: tutor, coach, educate 6. cut: reduce, decrease, lessen, diminish 7. makeshorter: shorten, cut down, decrease8. increase: improve, enhance, raise, grow, mount, accelerate9. give: impart, donate, contribute10. do: practice, carry out, conduct, perform11. emphasize: lay/place emphasis on, attach importance to, place weight on, highlight on12. finish, realize: achieve, accomplish, fulfill, complete13. pay attention to(专心于): set ones mind on, concentrate on, be absorbed in, be engaged in, be occupied in, be attentive on, focuson14. decide to do: be determined to do, make up ones mind to do, be resolved to do15. experience: undergo, endure, live with, go through16. be used to: be accustomed to, be adjusted to17. love(珍爱，珍惜，重视): cherish, treasure, value18. understand: digest, grasp, absorb19. give up: desert, abandon20. get rid of: remove, eliminate 21. prevent: ban, prohibit, forbid22. harm: endanger, damage, threaten23. stop/prevent: hinder, curb, hamper, restrain, ward off24. attract: fascinate, tempt, appeal to25. enlarge: expand, broaden, widen, extend, spread26. have: occupy, hold, own, possess, contain27. meet: come across, meet with, encounter, be confronted with, be faced with28. take part in: participate in, engaged in, go in for29. spend: set aside, put aside, spare30. surprise: astonish, shock, startle31. depend on: rely on, lean on, be dependent on32. getagain(恢复): restore, recover, retain, resume33. help: make contribution to, do ones bit to, assist34. know: be acquainted with, be familiar with35. get to know: be aware of, be conscious of36. be careful about: be cautious of, for fear of37. dont know: be ignorant of总结观点1. think/consider: argue, maintain, hold, harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that, takeinto consideration/account2. judge: come to the conclusion, draw the conclusion, conclude, decide3. prove: testify, confirm, verify, turn out, acquire, attain, obtain, reap4. get: earn, gain, procure5. support: in favor of, agree with, approve of, consent to, advocate, recommend6. like: be fond of7. be against/disagree with: be opposed to, object to, disapprove of, reject, frown on8. show: demonstrate, reflect, manifest, indicate, reveal9. It is decided that: be doomed to, be destined to10. explain: account for, illustrate, clarify11. predict: anticipate, foretell, foresee12. say: convey, express, deliver13. tell: depict, describe, display, picture, reveal, demonstrate14. makebelieve: convince, assure, confirm15. cause: give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger16. indicate/suggest: be indicative of, be suggestive of, be fearful17. remember: bear/keep in mind that程度副词1. very: exceedingly, extremely, intensely2. very much: to a great extent, to a large degree3. gradually: step by step, little by little, bit by bit, be degrees4. forever: permanently, constantly5. suddenly: abruptly, unexpectedly6. certainly: unquestionably, unsurprisingly, undoubtedly, definitely, It is no wonder that7. more and more: increasingly8. almost: practically, approximately 9. often: more often than not短语1. for example/instance: as an example, to name only a few2. much/a lot of: a great deal of, a great amount of3. many, a lot of, many kinds of: a great many of, many a, a great variety of, a multitude of, a host of, a majority of, a list of, a series of4. some: a slice of, quite a few, several, a couple of5. a little: somewhat, to a degree6. before: ahead of time/schedule, in advance, beforehand, prior to7. in my opinion: for my part, from my own perspective8. and: as well as 9. think/talk/see/hear: at the idea of, at the mention of, at the sight of, at the sound of10. have to do/must do: be/feel obliged to do sth.11. seeas: regard as, consider as, look on as, treat as, perceiveas, refer toas, viewas12. it possible to: Be likely to do, it is likely to13. form: be made up of, consist of, be composed of14. besides: apart from, in addition to, along with15. lie: be located, be situated, stand, sit16. for/ to: for the sake of, in order to, so as to17. because of: as a result of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to 18. because: seeing that, in that, now that, for the reason that, on the ground(s) that, not thatbut that19. according to: in the light of, in terms of20. in fact: in effect, in reality, as matter of fact, actually21. now/nowadays: at present, at the moment, currently22. then: afterwards, later on, later, after all23. finally: at length, ultimately, eventually24. by: by means of25. by the way: incidentally26. get: derivefrom, originatefrom27. be different from: distinguish from28. if: provided that, as long as, in case, in the event that, assuming that, suppose/supposing , on condition that29. sometimes: from time to time, once in a while, now and then30. never: at no time, by no means, under no circumstances, on no account/consideration31. It is obvious that/obviously: it goes without saying that, it is self-evident that32. have a chance to/of: stand a chance of, have an opportunity to33. I am sorry to say that: It is a pity/regret that提升写作短语1. be prone to 易于，有的倾向，很容易 Weak people are prone to such minor diseases as colds and stomachaches.2. be proficient in (at) 精通于 In finding a better job, those who are proficient in two or more foreign languages usually have priority over those who speak only one foreign language. 3. give sb. insights into使了解 I hope that our talk has given you some insights into the kind of work that weve been doing. 4. run counter to与相抵触，与背道而驰 The feelings of the common folks are to the point of running counter to the wishes of the government. 5. make an attempt at 企图，试图，打算 It was obvious that he was making an attempt at mending fences with the boss. 很显然，他正在试图改善与老板的关系。6. develop a passion for 对产生激情，开始爱好 Youll certainly develop a deep passion for the subject if you dig into it. 7. be aimed at旨在；目的在于 The new rule is aimed at promoting the students to be more spontaneous in studies. 8. have a far-reaching/profound effect on.对有深远的影响 The English teacher had a profound effect on her further study. 9. be consistent with 与一致，与相符 This policy is consistent with the common good of the people公众的利益. 10. go any length to do 不遗余力做 You bet well go any length to assist in the project, rain or shine. 11. stand a good chance of很有的希望 There are always people who stand no chance of making bundles (赚大钱), no matter how hard they work. 12. draw/come to/arrive at/ reach a conclusion 得出结论 From the above-mentioned key points, we can safely draw the conclusion that13. take advantage of利用 You take full advantage of this opportunity of studying abroad. 14. lay a solid foundation for为打下坚实基础 The knowledge and skills you have obtained will lay a solid foundation for your future career. 16. account for说明，解释 A number of factors account for the differences between the two scores.17. supplement to sth.的补充，的增补Some hold that professional certificates are important supplement to their school work.18. be closed related to与密切相关19. make the best/most of 充分利用20. put forward 提出21. remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事22. specialize in专攻23. takefor granted认为理所当然24. takeinto account考虑25. range fromto 在和之间变化26. yield to屈从27. come up with想出（主意），提出（办法）28. do away with废除28. look forward to盼望29. stand up for支持，拥护30.stand up to勇敢地面对31. lose ones temper发脾气32. make a difference有关系，有影响，起（重要）作用33. make full preparation for为做充分准备34. cast/shed/throw light on阐明某事，使某事显得非常清楚35. do damage to破坏36. do research on对进行研究37. exert pressure on对施加影响38. give rise to使发生，引起39. have an effect/impact/influence on对有影响/作用40. justify oneself for为辩护41. make a mess of把弄得乱七八糟42. make reference to43. put an end to结束，停止44. at length最终，终于45. at sbs disposal任处理46. at random任意地47. for the sake of为了，为了的利益，出于的原因47. in line with与一致48. in pursuit of追求，为达到目的49. in the course of在期间、过程中50. in the long run从长远来看51. in terms of就来说，以的观点52. in vain徒劳，白费力53. in view of鉴于，考虑到；由于54. of ones own view自愿地55. on the ground of因为56. to a great extent在很大程度上57. with a view to以为目的，为了58. with respect to关于，至于59. be