曹其军英语作文.doc

英语作文一、考研英语作文务必熟记的重点句式1. It is (has been) estimated that the worlds population could reach 6 billion by the end of the century.2. It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies to control population growth while raising the quality of the population.3. Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldnt utter a word.4. Its hard to say whether the plan is practicable.5. It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.6. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.7. As is known man is the product of labour.8. It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we can overcome.9. It seems certain that they have made a series of experiments.10. It must be admitted that you havent done what you promised to do.11. It is certain that we have a long way to go.12. It is clear that the enemy has no desire for peace.13. It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work twenty hours each day.14. There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.15. It is said that bats have been using radar for millions of years.16. To tell the truth, many mistakes we made could have been avoided.17. As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.18. In my opinion, this computer is different from that one you saw.19. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.20. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.21. It has been proved that every substance, no matter what it is, made up of atoms.22. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.23. It has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose base must be completed within this year.24. Frankly speaking, what you call the truth may not apply to things happening here.25. It is obvious (evident) that the success of the innovation depends on our concerted efforts.26. It is natural that one may have trouble expressing complicated ideas in simple English.27. We will be successful as long as we persevere.28. What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is being carried out.29. It is true that we must redouble our efforts; otherwise we cannot catch up with the developed countries.30. I take it for granted that they will support this idea. I regard it as natural that they will agree to this idea.31. In a certain sense, a successful scientist is a person who is never satisfied with what he has achieved.32. It is a common saying that man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.33. The oceans do not so much divide the world as unite it.34. It can be said that without knowledge of science and technology, it is impossible to build socialist modernizations.35. There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the production.36. Now in China, more and more families can afford to buy high-grade goods, such as washing machines, TV sets, videocorders. 二、作文篇刚刚整理资料时发现的，感觉还不错啊！作文关键是多写，多背，尤其是一些好词，好句，好的论说文。学会了怎样起承转合，那你的作文就算基本过关了。第一部分是曹其军作文指导。第二部分是朱太奇的作文讲座。第三部分是作文常见句型（分为首段，中间段和结尾段）第四部分是几个作文模版第五部分是作文的写作步骤（即如何起承转合）三、考研作文一：考研作文讲座曹其军曹说：考场作文通常是写成三段（四段当然也可以，不过一般情况下三段比较合适）。但是从改卷老师的角度，这三段份量是不同的。一般看到第一段，印象分就已经下来了，所以第一段很关键。第二段老师一般不看，即便看也只是看有没有明显的病句。然后会着重再看一下第三段。从上面可以看出来，第一段跟第三段是关键，有什么特殊的优美的句子尽管用，长难句最好。但是第二段要用短句而不要用长句（！切记），因为长句容易出错。所以曹的作文着重讲的就是第一段跟第三段如何写。至于第二段，自己发挥去。我会把去年的一些笔记（很可惜大部分记在笔记本上丢了仅剩下记在讲义上的一些残余）一起写出来。并且加上脚注。黑体表示一个字都不能改，就照单背下。斜体表示可以改的地方。曹的作文一共分成八个MODEL，下面是Model 1，在看完model后最好背下来，然后完成后面的application，做一两篇熟悉一下。MODEL 1 Poblem-Solution（问题以及问题的解决）Smaple OneAs can be easily observed from the cartoon, intellectuals of middle agg in our country aremaking great contributions, but they also suffer from the poor working and living conditions.Just take a look at the man in the picture. Under the dim light, he is bent on his study whiletaking food. He is thin and the bottles of medicine on the table show that he is very poor in health.From the picture, it is obvious that the issue of intellectuals treatment has really become moreand more serious.This problem may arise from the following factors. To begin with, there is often a shortage of investment on scientific study. According to a recently published report from the State Council（国务院）, only 3% of the total GDP was invested in the development of science and technology last year. The report also predicts that future investment will most probably remain unchanged. Consequently, the shortage of fund has a direct impact upon intellectuals work and health. In the second place, though the central government（中央政府） has made various policies to improve intellectures conditions, some local governments wont implement these policies effectively. Sometimes these governments even intentionally pay no attention to the requests by intellectuals. Last but not the least, most of the intellectuals ignore the importance of sports and outdoor activities. This also gives rise to their poor health and less efficient work.The current situation calls for an immediate solution indeed. In my opinion, both the government and the intellectuals should play their role. On one hand, the government should grant more funds to intellectuals. On the other hand, intellectuals should be aware of the importance of their health, and try every means to build up their health. Only in these co-operative efforts, I believe , will the problem be efficiently resolved.第一段提出问题，这个是个sample是个漫画式作文，但是可以归到model 1里面。注意一下，该漫画对第二，三两段没有任何响，象第二段的According to 之类的废话，不要迟疑，背下来。Sample TwoNowadays one of the fundamental problems China is faced with is the increasing illiteracy（可改成sociological,environmental等根据topic） among the adolescents. According to a recent survey made by Dr. Wang, head of educational department of Beijing University, about 24% of the children between 8 to 15 years old have dropped out of school across the country. The same survey also shows that the number of drop-outs is likely to grow in the years to come. Therefore, it is very clear that illiteracy has been getting more and more serious.（只有serious了才能体现其紧迫感重要性）To account for illiteracy, people have come up with various causes as demonstrated below. For one thing, many families are still too poor to afford schooling for their kids. Take my neighbor as an example（或者A good case in point is my neighbour）. There are five members and four adults were laid off（下岗符合国情） last year. Then life gets very hard for them. Finally, the only child has to leave the school. Actually, poverty is always the major factor behind illiteracy in China. On the other hand, some parents believe that schooling is useless, particularly for girls. They often force their kids to leave school and send them to work. In the end, some students are bored of the school life, and they drop out to escape teachers and school lesson.Whatever the reason, the issue has turned a crippling（造成重大损害的）force to the development of our country. Therefore, some measures should be taken to put an end to this problem. On one hand, our government should make stricter law to forbid parents to take kids away from school. In addition, more funds should be put in to the help of those poor students. On the other hand, we should launch a publicizing campaign（群众运动，具有中国特色，一定要写） to enhance peoples awareness of the harmfulness of illiteracy to our economy and life. Only through these attempts can we hope to solve the problem.这个model我极其喜爱，因为我考研就是套这个model的，虽然我写完后都不知道写什么意思，但是还是得到了一个比较高的分数。第一段提出了问题，就是中国的文盲问题。第二段分析现象，产生原因。大家千万不要小看了Take my neighbor as an example这句话，是举出证据支持论点，不论什么事情，都说你的neighbor，比方说爱滋病问题，你就说邻居家有人得了爱滋病，比方说下岗，就说邻居家全部下岗生不如死。再注意一下povertyis always the major factor behind ，这里是原因前结果后的句子，背。第三段极力推荐背下来，第一句中的reason，如果是说“结果”则要换成consequence；最后的country可以换成society，life，world之类的词语。第一句起到承上启下的作用，优美，背。群众运动不能忘记，否则文革怎么产生，要发动群众运动去enhance peoples awareness增强民众的觉悟，重要，背。最后一句倒装句保证让老师对你的印象更好。Application:1 On Widespread Superstition(Fa Lun gong etc.) 普遍流行的迷信A Current SituationB Some Consequences （家庭被破坏，影响身体健康，注意影响身体健康是万金 油）C suggestions2 Desertification（土壤沙漠化）A present conditionB possible effects （诸如粮食短缺城市消失）C solutions3 Womens salaries are significantly lower than mens in business in different countries as the following tow tables show. Make full use of the information and write an essay of about 200 words. Be sure to include your comment.（table省略）这个是女性待遇问题，仿造Sample One。Model 2 Positive-EnhancementSample OneThere has been a growing concern among the general public over the population census which is now being conducted in our country. According to a recent poll made by Beijing Youth Daily, a local newspaper, about 87 percent of the residents have a good understanding of the census, and they are very cooperative（支持）with it. The same survey also shows that morepeople are concerned about the result of the census. It can be easily concluded, therefore, that the census has become an important issue in our life.Its importance may be demonstrated in two ways as follow. To begin with, the census is directly related to the society in general. On one hand, our country has long carried out the policy of birth control, and regular census may help us get a better idea of our population growth. On the other hand, with the reform and opening-up, there has been a widespread mass migration movement. Many farmers leave their home villages to seek job in the cities. Then it is necessary to know the population migration trend through census, so that the government may make better use of the labor force. Whats more, the census is bound up with our personal life. It is the best way to measure our living standard, including living space, education level, and employment.As the issue of census plays such a key role in our society and life, due attention should be paid from both the government and the general public. The government should make sure that the census is successfully done and finished, and the general public should offer a helping hand whenever necessary. As for myself, I should take part in the publicizing campaign so that more people will understand the importance of census.这个model是讲好得东西，比如说入世，申奥，大学合并（其实我觉得大学合并简直是垃圾不过既然国家这么做所以如果出题目的时候你只能说它是好的）。a growing concern，越来越关注，多好的说法。注意第一段还把北京青年报给搬了出来，跟model 1 的北大教授一样，这是给人权威的说法。咱们是小人物阿说话不顶事，但是权威人物或者正式刊物可就不一样了。 be cooperative with 支持，既然是好的东西公众自然都要支持了，不支持就罚你的款_。第二段是垃圾自己去编，在分析好的时候提供如下建议，分析其对社会好，对生活好，对身体好。看第三段，due attention，应有的重视，很少人能想到这个词吧。the generalpublic should offer a helping hand whenever necessary，对于老百姓来说，该出手时候就出手，决不能迟疑。最后提到As for myself，对于我们这样的小人物，所能做的唯一的事情，就是参与宣传活动。Application: 1 Project Hope2 On Bid for Olympic Games3 University Merging（就是臭名昭著的大学合并）大学合并有什么好处呢？节约资源，有更多地方锻炼身体（虽然风马牛不相及）但是最关键是要有幻想，因为你即便写的好处在道理上狗屁不通也没人会管你，你所做的只是凑字数！Model 3 Point-Evidence(neutral topic + proverb + definition)中性主题 谚语Sample OneAs shown in the graph, it can be easily concluded that the past twenty years have witnessed some ups and downs in Chinas growth rate whereas there has been a steady increase in the amount of GDP. According to the statistics published by the State Bureau of Statistics in 1978, Chinas GDP was 362.4 billion in Renminbi, and it grew to be 7477.2 billion in 1997,almost 27 times higher. From the graph, it can also be predicted that Chinas GDP will continue to increase in the future while its growth rate remains steady.This tendency of GDP increase may be attributed to the following reasons. First of all, with the improvement of peoples living standard, there will be a greater demand for goods and services of all kinds. A good case in point is the Internet. As it comes into our daily life, people need more information and better services. There will provide and incentive for further development in computer technology and manpower. Whats more, in terms of production, China will need to build more roads, railways, and power stations in order to become stronger. More natural resources need to be exploited and used for the benefit of people. Last but not the least, Chinas entry into WTO will greatly improve the export environment of international trade. As a result, the future export is going to play a more important role in Chinas GDP growth.Based on those reasons as illustrated above，I firmly believe that China will experience a stage of continuous, steady and healthy expansion in the years to come. In the long run, it is evident that China will become ever-stronger, and the Chinese will live a better life than ever.注意哦，考场上*不准写比较结构*，太容易出错了！上面这篇范文，就提到了比较级的用法。look，要用就用这种简单明了不会出错的比较级用法，列举出前后的数据，然后说“almost xx times higher”。看第一句哦，the past twenty years have witnessed，这是一种表示被动的说法，根据时间段。in Chinas growth中in用来表示该文主题。还有个很优美的形容词steady，如果是大起大落要用sharp哦。increase表示增加，如果图中是下落就要用fall或者decrease。 grew to be 如果是下降要改成dropped to be。本文的第三段可写可不写，都是垃圾，不过为了凑段数凑字数还是要写的拉hiahiaSample TwoAs we all know, honesty is the best policy. This is an accumulated experience we inherit from our forefathers, and now it is still widely applied to our daily life.To illustrate the point, let me cite a case of Nokia, a mobile phone manufac turer. In the very beginning, it had the largest marker share in China. According to an official publication released in July 1999, about 47 percent of mobile phone users expressed their preference for Nokia, while only 16 percent liked Motorola, Nokias major competitor. This year, however, the opposite situation occurs, and Nokia is said to be phasing out quickly. A major reason behind this sudden reversion, as pointed out by some experts, lies with Nokias being dishonest with its product and service. For example, Nokia promised free service for repair, but any real repair may cost dearly. This way, by and by, Nokia is losing its customers and market.A lesson that we can draw from this example is quite obvious. Honesty is crucial and essential to any one. With the rapid development of internet and other modern technologies, our world is changing fast and becoming increasingly uncertain. It is, therefore, not only important but necessary to be honest now.Application： 1。 Ageing Population in China生活水平提高,医疗水平发展,出生率下降.2。 When in Rome， do as Romans do.(i.e. adaptatin to life orsociety)3。 What does love mean to us？Model 4 Fact-MethodSample OneNowadays tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before. How to finance ones college education has become a matter of great concern for many people, particularly the young students and their family. Actually just as there is more than one way to skin a cat, so it seems we can deal with tuition and fees in many ways. Some can get all the needed money from their parents. Some others can apply for a loan specially set up for college students. Still others can also raise the money completely by themselves, by doing s full-time job in the summer and winter holidays. Or even others can ask their parents to provide the greater part and earn the rest in their spare time by doing a part-time job.In my opinion, the last method may prove to be quite beneficial in many respects. Having obtained most of the tuition and fees from ones parents, one neednt w worry too much about the money and can concentrate on his studies. After all, it is the duty of any college student to study hard and well. On the other hand, a part-time job in ones spare time will enrich his campus life. Through the part-time job one can make a lot of friends, improve ones social skills and learn many practical things. Therefore, I would choose this way, if possible, to cover my tuition and fees.上面范文是一年六级考试的作文，题目是 How do I finance my college education?注意这种题所谓的method就是要回答HOW。如果要扩充一种方法就是用邻居的故事展开。Application: 1. How to succeed in a job interview?2. On making friends.3. Arranging tour for a coming friend.Model 5 contrast side A against side B 针锋相对Sample OneAs regards the farmer migration into the cities, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. A majority of people argue that this mass migration is beneficial to the development of both the countryside and the cities. Other people, however, hold that there are more disadvantages arising from this migration movement.People who believe in the beneficial side of such migration may have some arguments as follows. To begin with, farmers can earn more money by finding jobs in the cities. Most of them will send part of their income back home to their family. This in turn helps expand the economy of the countryside. Whats more, these farmers also help develop the cities in many ways. According to a recent survey as published in the newspaper, most of the construction projects in Beijing are actually done by farmers.In contrast, some people think that farmer migration may give rise to（导致） a series of negative effects as well. These people worry that, with the spread of migration, more land in the countryside will be deserted. This will give rise to a shortage of grain. Some facts about widespread of deserted land have been published recently in the newspapers. In addition, it is also suggested that rising crimes in the cities are related to this migration.Just as any coin has two sides, its no exception with the issue of farmer migration. Though this migration has indeed brought about some negative effects on our society, its benefits are even more obvious. In my opinion, our government should try its best to raise the price of agricultural products, so that farmers neednt go into the cities to get rich. Of course, when there is a surplus of labor force in the countryside,