大学英语四级作文辅导be a civicminded tourist.ppt

modeltest1 大学英语四级练习课 cet4写作练习 词汇替换练习 listsynonymsofthefollowingwords goodbadimportantbutthinkverypeople 1 good beneficialfavorablemarvelousterrificamazingfabulousgorgeous positivepromisingexcellentoutstandingsuperiordistinguishedremarkableincredible 2 bad negativediscouragingunfavorableadversedreadfulharmful 3 important essentialsignificantvitalcrucialprofoundindispensablenecessary playanimportantrolein beofimportancetheimportanceof cannverbeexaggerated 4 but however nevertheless nonetheless whereas 5 think that assumedeemreckonaguemaintainsupposeconceiveinsistconsider holdtheopion standpointthat beconvincedthat tomyknowledge personally frommyperspective asfarasiamconcernedfrommypointofviewfrommyangle 6 very extremelyacutelydecidedlydeeplyexceedingly greatlyhighlyuncommonlyprofoundlyunusually 7 people individualfolkscharacters translatethesentences 我认为 如果人们能合理的玩网络游戏 onlinegames 的话 它将是一种很好的娱乐消遣 然而 有些大学生过于迷恋玩网络游戏 有害于他们的健康和学习成绩 part1writing beacivic mindedtourist 1 第1 2分钟审题 2 第3 5分钟草拟提纲 3 第6 27分钟正文写作 4 第28 30分钟检查修改 cet作文写作步骤 step1 审题 directions forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledbeacivic mindedtourist youshouldincludeinyouressaytourists uncivilbehaviorsinthescenicspotsandthecorrespondingsolutions youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnotmorethan180words body supportingdetails end conclusion step2 草拟提纲 beginning introduceatopic s1 现象 s3 列举不文明现象 s4 采取措施主题句 s5 具体措施1 s2 问题 s6 具体措施1扩展句 s7 具体措施2 s8 具体措施2扩展句 s9 总结句 part1 part1 part1 s1 现象 s3 列举不文明现象 s4 采取措施主题句 s5 具体措施1 s2 问题 s6 具体措施1扩展句 s7 具体措施2 s8 具体措施2扩展句 s9 总结句 part1 part1 part1 s1 现象increasein tendency s3 列举不文明现象uncivilbehaviors s4 采取措施主题句takemeasures s5 具体措施1government regulations s2 问题concern debate criticism s6 具体措施1扩展句regulate punish violate s7 具体措施2improvecitizens quality s8 具体措施2扩展句moraleducation s9 总结句 现象 inrecentyears therehasbeenasharpincreaseinthenumberofchinesetouriststravelingbothhomeandabroad inrecentyears thenumberofchinesetouriststravelingbothhomeandabroadhasbeenontherise inrecentyears tourismhasexperiencedatremendousgrowthinchina 问题 列举 however alongwiththisaresomeuncivilbehaviors whichhavereceivedfiercecriticism forexample sometouristsmaysmoke talkloudly throwtrasharound orevenscrawlonculturalrelicsinthescenicspots 问题 列举 however wecannotfailtonoticethatcountlessuncivilbehaviorsexistinthetouristattractions suchasspeakingloudlyinmuseums jumpingthequeue hurtingwildlifeinzoosanddefacingofancientmonuments 措施主题句 confrontedwiththeproblem weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation inviewoftheseriousnessofthephenominon effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenasfollows 具体措施1 ontheonehand thegovernmentshouldinstitutelawsandregulationstoputthesituationundercontrol inotherwords commonmisconductsofchinesetouristsareexpectedtobeforbiddenandcorrespondingpublishmentforviolatingthelawshouldbestatedclearly 具体措施2 ontheotherhand itishightimethatpeoplealloverchinarealizedtheseriousnessofuncivilbehaviors forinstance itises