高中英语如何写建议信ppt课件.ppt

书面表达专题 Howtowritealetterforadvice 1 如何算是一篇好文章 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 行文连贯 条理清楚 要点全 词汇 句型 高级 和语法多样化 较复杂 语言地道 连接词 2 写作要点 1 建议信 作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议 2 对象 1 写给个人 就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点 2 写给某个组织和机构 就改进其服务提出建议或忠告 3 3 基本框架 开头 beginning 开门见山 向对方陈述自己的观点 stateyouridea 主体 body 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由 接着提出自己的建议 reasonsandevidence 结尾 ending 呼应开头 重申观点 restateyouropinion 4 4 注意事项 1 建议信要写出写信的原因 建议的内容 提出建议的理由 提出的理由要入情入理 语气一定要礼貌当先 因此建议信要写得简明扼要 目的明确 具有合理性和说服力 2 建议的角度要多样化 避免重复 可从政治 经济 文化 伦理 法律以及个人等多角度给出建议 3 符合英文信件的基本格式 4 基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时 5 常用套语 A 建议信开头常用句式 照应材料 表明写作意图 1 AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper Iamsorrytoknowthat 2 Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto 3 Iknowyouhavetroublein afterreadingyourletterIamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice opinionswithyou Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadvicewithregardto andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions 7 Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout on 6 B 表达建议 body 1 Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould 2 Iwouldliketosuggest recommendthat 3 IfIwereyou Iwould 4 Whynot How What aboutdoing 5 isagood greatidea 6 Youmayconsiderdoing 7 Itwouldseem seemstomethatyoucould 8 Inmyopinion itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction 9 Whenitcomestosuchasituation Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould First Firstly Secondly Then Afterthat Intheend Finally Meanwhile What smore Inaddition Besides Furthermore 7 C 建议信结尾常用句式 Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount consideration Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals suggestions recommendationspractical useful helpful Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions 5 Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit Intheend Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful 8 假如你叫孙军 是红星高中的学生 要给市长写一封信 反映学校门前交通拥挤现象 包括以下要点 参考词汇 穿行threadone sway天桥overpass 9 第一步 审题养成重视审题的习惯 虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的 但审题仍然十分重要 现以样题为例 谈谈如何审题 第一人称 一封信 建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况 说理逻辑性 一般现在时 10 书面表达如何写 三个步骤 Step1Listthekeypoints Step2Makesentences Step3 Formapassageandpolish 11 适当运用模板 12 模板二 Dear 对象 Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning 问题 Firstandforthemost 建议一 Inaddition 建议二 What smore 建议三 Ihopeyou llfindtheseproposalsuseful Yourssincerely LiMing 13 Dear Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto andI lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere Inmyhumbleopinion 以我拙见 youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions Ihopeyou llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails Goodluckwithyou your 祝愿 YourssincerelyLiMing 14 DearBob I mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto 引出主题 Hereareafewsuggestions First itisimportantto Then italsohelpsto Besides itshouldbeagoodideato Youcanalso 此三句不同的句式提出建议 Asto Isuggest 有时根据需要具体到某一反面 Inaddition 其他建议 I msure 预测可能的结果 给对方以行动的信心和决心 I mlookingforwardto 表达愿望 Sincerelyyours LiHua 15 第二步 搜索相关词组或句型 学校和一所小学毗邻 对着大街 高峰期交通繁忙 加之孩子小 家长接送 交通更拥挤 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 16 学校与一所小学毗邻 对着大街 standnextto primary face befacedwith themainstreet There saprimaryschoolnearourschool andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool facedwith facingthemainstreet 推荐句型 Therebe 并列句 非谓语结构 Standingnexttoaprimaryschool ourschoolisfacedwith facesthemainstreet 17 润色小建议 Nexttoaprimaryschool 将介词短语提前 全倒装 stands lies isourschool facedwith facingamainstreet 可将standnextto替换为高级词汇 短语 belocatednextto near beside by border adjoinvt beadjacentto与 毗邻 在 对面beoppositeto 18 Thetrafficisbusyduringtherushhours 高峰期交通繁忙 traffic duringtherushhours Duringtherushhours therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat Duringtherushhours thereisalotoftraffic so that with结构 Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad 19 润色小建议 高峰期 可意译 atpeaktime alargecurrentofcarsandpeople 交通繁忙 可译为 trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞bechokeupwithbecrammedwith被 堵塞 塞满 20 加之孩子小 家长接送 交通更拥挤 send to fetch which 非谓语结构 Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome whichmakesthetrafficheavier Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome makingthetrafficheavier 21 加之孩子小 家长接送 交通更拥挤What smore pickup make Tomakethingsworse What sworse manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded Inaddition Additionally manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome whichmakesthetrafficheavier What smore parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage 22 makingthesituationmoreserious makingthetrafficheavier可意译为 so that too to Thechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome whichmakes makingthetrafficheavier making可替换为 causing leadingto resultingin send fetch 可替换为短语 pickup 润色小建议 23 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 threadone sway whendoing Itisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad 固定句型Itis adj for todo 24 Studentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars 润色小建议 2 Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean seaofcars 灵活运用其它的短语进行意译 适当增加形容词和副词 itisextremelydangerous itisofgreat tremendousdanger 25 suggest suggestion takesteps measures actiontodo suchas 政府应采取措施 如修天桥等 Mysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould 表语从句 固定句型Itishightimethat 虚拟语气 Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass 简单句 26 1 Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems 润色小建议 2 Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems thegovernmentshould A 适当添加一些意思 过渡句 Thegovernmentshouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit B 语义的意译 3 Seeingthesematters neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic itissignificanttobuild C 添加形容词和副词 Istronglysuggest active effectivemeasures 27 第三步 连句成文 但要注意 篇章的连贯性 Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool facingamainstreet it scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage it sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass A Asaconsequence B Accordingtothephenomenonstatedabove C Whenitcomestotrafficjams D Whatmakesthingsworseisthat A C D B 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