北京市五十七中学高中英语 Unit 2 Heroes writing课件 北师大版必修1.ppt

unit2 heroes canyoutellastoryinenglish leadingin canyouwritethisstorydownincorrectwordsandsentences whatareyourproblemsinwritingastory todaylet slearnhowtowriteastory 写作任务与要求 能按照叙述文的结构写一篇故事 注意 1 交代清楚记叙文6要素 when where who what why how 2 写清楚事情的起因 经过 结果 3 连接词的正确使用 guidedwriting linking sequence before when assoonas firstly firstofall afterthat during later then next finally intheend 写作准备 stage1题材分析 故事其实就是记叙文 是以叙述人物或事情发展变化过程为主的一种文体 自己经历或他人经历 第一人称或第三人称 常用过去时态 记叙文六要素 1 decidedwhoisthehero heroineofyourstoryandwhathe shewasdoingbeforetheactionstarted 写作思路 stage2 2 drawatimelineofthemainevents e g afriend daisy wastakingherdogforawalknearariver takingdogforawalk seechildrenplayingonbridge boyfallsinriver daisydivesinto doghelpthemout example stage3 layout 1 introductionsaywhy whenandwherethethingtookplace saywhowasthere2 thebeginningdescribethepreparations3 developmentdescribesuddenlywhathappened4 conclusiondescribetheendofstoryandyourfeelings 一天早上我和我的朋友去公园散步 onemorningmyfriendandiwentforwalkinginapark 2 一辆失控的汽车突然经过我们 suddenly acardrovepastusoutofcontrol 3 当我跑向燃烧的汽车时 我看到3个人困在车内 whenirantotheburningcar isawthreepeopletrappedinside 4 司机失去意识地坐在车里面 thedriverwassittinginside unconscious 5 我不得不爬进前边的窗户救她 ihadtoclimbintothefrontwindowtosaveher 相关语句练习 pleasewritingastoryabouthelpingpeopleordoingsomegoodthingsinyourpastexperience about50words 下笔成文 samplewriting onemorningiwentforwalkingwithmyfriendtominapark suddenly acardrovepastusoutofcontrol thecarcrashedandafterthatitburstintoflames firstwerantotheburningcar whenwegotthere wesawthreepeopletrappedinside theywerescreamingandweknewwehadtogetthemout itwasincrediblyhotasweopenedthedoors thedriverwassittinginside unconscious wegothimoutandthenwentbackfortheothertwopeople ihadtoclimboverthefrontseatstogettothem surprisingly theywereabletowalkawayfromthecar meanwhile somepeoplewhowerewatchingfromanearbycampsite calledtheemergencyservices intheend iwasstandingthereinastateofshockwhenapolicemanaskedmeformynameandaddress icouldn tremem