求职信细节问题范文.doc

求职信细节问题范文 写求职信的目的在于获得职位，一封求职信无论如何文辞并茂，令人心动，公司HR主管不见到应聘者本人是不会给予工作机会的。因此，求职信的实际目的在于获得面谈的机会。许多人都会copy网上的求职信范本，导致千篇一律，这是非常不可取的。我们已经讲过怎样写求职信，这次我们来谈谈求职信写作中容易被忽略的细节问题。 一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。 Replyingtoyouradvertisement.Answeringyouradvertisement.Believingthatthereisanopportunity.Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourpany.Havingreadyourad. 再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 A:(1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager. (2)Iamapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanager.Ibelievemyqualificationswillmeetyourexactingrequirements. B:(1)IbelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalthatyouareofferingjusttheopportunityIamlookingfor. (2)YouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptedmetoapplyforthisposition. C:(1)HavingreadyouradvertisementintheNewYorkTimesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication. (2)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofapetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostaccounting.Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthiswork. 二、在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子： Idprefernottosetasalary,butsinceyouask,Iconsider6,500amonthtobesatisfactory. Itshardformetosaywhatmysalaryshouldbesetat,butifpressedIwouldhavetoaskforamonthasaninitialsalary. IdontfeelthatIshouldsetmyownsalary,asIamhappyenoughtohavetheprivilegeofworkingforyou.However,Iwouldconsideramonthsatisfactorypensationformyapprenticeship. 三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用： Asforsalary,Idonotknowwhattosay.Would$4,500amonthbetoomuch? DoyouthinkIwouldbeaskingtoomuchifIsaid5,000dollarsamonth? YouknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanIdo.AllIwantisalivingwage. 四、关于求职信的结尾用语，下面也有三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 A:(1)软弱、羞怯的：IfyouthinkIcanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,Ishallbegladtotalkwithyou. (2)改写后（较佳）：Ifmyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,Iwouldbehappytospeakwithyouinperson. B:(1)怀疑，不妥、不安全的：Ifyouareinterested,pleaseletmeknowimmediately,asImsureaninterviewwillconvinceyouImthemanforthejob. (2)改写后：Iwouldliketorequestaninterview.YoucanreachmebytelephoneatBeijing123456betweenthehoursof7-9a.m.and5:30-9:30p.m.anyevening. C:(1)哀求式的句子，不够完整（漏掉面谈时间）：Iwouldappreciatetheopportunityforaninterview.IcanbereachedbycallingBeijing12345678. (2)改写后：MayIhavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurther