四六级英语考试作文模板例解 (2).ppt

HowtoPrepareforEarthquakes Unit6 SectionA 英语写作技巧篇 英语教研室朱家胜 快速写作流程 具体步骤 第一步 解读题意 确定题型 勾画简图 3 5 将确立的论点 罗列的论据 要明确的结论 以树形图的形式一一列出来 并尽可能列出所有能想到的论据和关键词 第二步 选择模板 1 第三步 依图填空 丰富细节 20 25 闪光点 1 多种句式的应用 2 长短句的交替出现 文章有节奏感 3 若干长句后出现的短句可以明显地突出观点 4 连接词的运用 可使文章连贯 富有层次 5 通过举例 对比等 可使文章更为生动 易懂 6 恰如其分地运用一些修辞手法 谚语或名言等 能起到 画龙点睛 的作用 第四步 修改文章 3 5 修改文章主要考虑以下几点 1 语法 如主语和谓语在人称和数上是否保持一致 全篇时态是否保持一致 动词的语态 语气的使用是否正确 词组的搭配是否符合习惯等等 2 标点符号与大小写的运用是否正确 3 有无单词拼写错误等 作文模板 四六级英语考试中出现的作文命题形式 归纳起来有八大类模板 即观点类 批驳类 办法类 原因类 谚语类 应用类 图表类 和记叙类 第一部分观点类模板 Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson Somepeoplethinkthat whileothersarguethat AsfarasIamconcerned Iagreewiththe opinion Foronething Ifirmlybelieve Foranother Justthinkof who Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat Onlyif canwe justasthesayinggoes 提出两种人的观点 需要起始句 明确表明自己同意某个观点 态度需要斩钉截铁 下结论 Sample MyViewonOpportunity1 有的人认为机会是极少的 另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会 2 你的看法如何 写出你的观点 说明你的理由并且适当举例 3 在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的论 Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity Somepeoplethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesintheworld whileothersarguethateverybodywillhavesomekindofopportunityalonghisliferoute AsfarasIamconcerned Iagreewiththelatteropinion Foronething Ifirmlybelieveopportunitiesareeverywherearoundus Nopersonwillbeunluckyenoughtohavenoopportunitiesallthetime because everydoghashisday Foranother sinceopportunitiesaretransient wehavetomakegoodpreparationsandimproveourselves JustthinkofNewton whodiscoveredtheLawofGravitywhenmanypeoplehadwatchedanapplefallingaheadofhim Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthattherearequiteafewopportunitiesinoursociety Onlyifwegetpreparedcanweseizetheopportunitiesinsteadoflettingthemslipby justasthesayinggoes opportunitiesareonlyforthepreparedminds 词汇PK 词汇PK 第二部分批驳类模板1 批驳做法 Todaymoreandmorepeople Theyarguethispracticehasseveraladvantages First Second Forexample IamafraidIcannotagreewiththeiropinion Tobeginwith althoughyoumayfeel itdoesn tmean Inthesecondplace Finally asto Fromtheaboveanalysis wemayarriveattheconclusionthat isnotawisechoice 分两点举例说明某些人的做法 想法 我的不同观点及三点理由 第一句批驳 下结论 Sample MyViewonPuttingWorkUntiltheLastMinute1 现在有些人主张将工作留到最后来做2 我不同意他们的观点 理由是 Todaymoreandmorepeopleputtheirworkuntilthelastminute Theyarguethispracticehasseveraladvantages First theimpendingdeadlinegivesthemalast minutedrive whichcanhelpthemfinishthejobquickly Second iftheyhavealotoftimetofinishthejob theycannotconcentrateontheprojectquicklybecausetheyarenotpressedbytime Forexample somechildrenhavesomehomeworkfortheirwintervacation buttheyalwaysdoitinthelastweek IamafraidIcannotagreewiththeiropinion Tobeginwith althoughyoumayfeelanxioustofinishtheworkwhenthedeadlineisdrawingnear itdoesn tmeanyoucanfinishyourjobwithhighquality Inthesecondplace awisemanwillnotalwaysleavehistaskuntilthelastminute Ifapersonwantstobehighlyefficient heshouldlearntodividehistasksintoseveralsmallparts andsetdeadlinesforeachofthem Finally astothechildrenfinishingassignments Ibelievethattheycan tenjoythemselveswiththeirassignmentsunfinishedFromtheaboveanalysis wemayarriveattheconclusionthatputtingworkuntilthelastminuteisnotawisechoice 词汇PK 词汇PK 第三部分办法类模板1 重大事件 hasalwaysbeenimportantto alike Althoughthisissuehaslongbeendiscussedandexamined itwouldnotbetruetosaythatunanimousagreementhasbeenreached Inmybelief themorebeneficialstepsin areasfollows Firstandforemost Inthesecondplace Lastbutnotleast Inanerawheneconomydevelopsatsuchahighspeed isconnectedwithandvitaltoeverycitizeninthecity Wecanneverwishtorealizeourdreamofa untilallofustakeactionsto 第一句说此问题很重要 第二句说未达成共识 分三方面说明方法 第一句说问题重要 呼应上文 第二句给出办法 同心协力 Sample HowtoImproveUrbanEnvironment1 改善环境很重要2 改善环境的方法有 Environmentalbettermenthasalwaysbeenimportanttogovernmentofficials scientists scientificresearchersandcommoncitizensalike Althoughthisissuehaslongbeendiscussedandexamined itwouldnotbetruetosaythatunanimousagreementhasbeenreached Inmybelief themorebeneficialstepsinimprovingtheoverallenvironmentofourcityareasfollows Firstandforemost theoverallplannershavetocomeupwithacomprehensivedevelopmentschemesothatallthelaterprojectscanbefittedintoitundercoherentconsideration Inthesecondplace theratioofgreenlandshastobelargelyincreasedtoraisethequalityofairandwater Lastbutnotleast commoncitizensshouldjoinintheeffortstoprotectourenvironmentandbattleallthebehaviorstopolluteourhomeland Inanerawheneconomydevelopsatsuchahighspeed environmentalproblemisconnectedwithandvitaltoeverycitizeninthecity Wecanneverwishtorealizeourdreamofacleanerandmorebeautifulenvironmentuntilallofustakeactionstobuild protectandtakecareofit 词汇PK 词汇PK 词汇PK 词汇PK 词汇PK 词汇PK 第四部分原因类模板解释做法 Somepeoplethinkitisnotnecessaryto Deepinmyheart Ialsohavebeenaskingmyselfthesamequestionagainandagain WhydoI Thereasons inmymind canbesummedupinthreerespects Firstofall Inthesecondplace Lastbutnotleast Ifirmlybelieve 说某种做法没有必要 注意段中问句和最后一句过渡句的使用 说明三点原因 做出结论 Sample WhyITakeCollegeEnglishTestBand61 有人认为没有必要参加大学生英语六级考试 CET 6 2 我参加 CET 6 考试的理由 SomepeoplethinkitisnotnecessarytotakepartinCET 6becausetheyhavealreadyobtainedtheirdegreewiththecertificateofCET 4 Deepinmyheart Ialsohavebeenaskingmyselfthesamequestionagainandagain WhydoItaketheCollegeEnglishTestBand6 Thereasons inmymind canbesummedupinthreerespects Firstofall afterpassingCET 4 Ifinishedmyinitial stageEnglisheducationandhadnomoreEnglishclasses Consequently IconductedalltheEnglishlearningactivitiesonmyown anditistimeformetoexaminemyachievements Inthesecondplace thetestisregardedasoneofthemostauthoritativeEnglishtestsavailableforuscollegestudents IfIcansetmymindonthistestandgetasatisfactoryscore Iwillfeelmostconfident Lastbutnotleast thecertificateisalsoanecessityformetofindagoodjob Suchatest Ifirmlybelieve willhelpmeembarkontherighttrackofbothEnglishlearningandmyfuturelife KnowledgeandexperienceaccumulatedcanhelpmereapharvestinEnglishlearning andconfidenceandcouragegainedalongtheroutecanhelpmesucceedinmyfuturecareer 第五部分谚语类模板 完全赞同 isawell knownproverbwhichallofusarefamiliarwith Ifullyagreewithitanditsimplication inmymind canbejustifiedinthreerespects First ittakestimetoaccomplishatask Second Third lookingatthematterfromanotherperspective wewillfindthat Livinginanagewhen As weshould 引入谚语 第二句表明自己赞同的态度 并引出下文 从三个方面进行解释 下结论 Sample EarlyBirdCatchestheWorm1 早起的鸟有虫吃 是大家熟悉的谚语2 为什么这么说 Earlybirdcatchestheworm isawell knownproverbwhichallofusarefamiliarwith Ifullyagreewithitanditsimplication inmymind canbejustifiedinthreerespects First ittakestimetoaccomplishatask theearlieryoubegin themorelikelyyouwillreachyourgoalearlier Otherwiseyoucanneverbesureofyoursuccess Second whendiligencebecomesahabit nothingwillbedifficulttoadeterminedandpersistentperson Forexample youwillneverfeelboredandtiredatdoingsocialinvestigationifyoureallyenjoyit Third lookingatthematterfromanotherperspective wewillfindthatsocialresourcesarealwayslimitedandopportunitiesarealwaysforthosepreparedminds Livinginanagewhenmostpeopleareintelligent diligenceseemsmorethannecessary Asthemoderncompetitionbecomesmoreandmorefierce weshouldrealizetheimportanceofearlybeginning 谚语类模板 部分赞同 Whenwetalkofthefamousproverb weshouldnotsimplylabelitasrightorwrong butexploreitindepth Thisproverbisespeciallytrueunderseveralsituations First Second Third Nevertheless therearealsosomeexceptions Inaword wecandrawtheconclusionthatinmostcases butincertaincircumstances therightchoice 引入谚语 正面论述谚语正确的情况 反面论述 首句为转折过渡 呼应第二 三两个段落 Sample SilenceIsGolden1 许多场合中 沉默是金 是正确的2 但也有例外的情形3 结论 Whenwetalkofthefamousproverb Silenceisgolden weshouldnotsimplylabelitasrightorwrong butexploreitindepth Thisproverbisespeciallytrueunderseveralsituations First ifwehavemadeapromisenottoletoutasecret weshouldalwayskeepsilent Second weshouldavoidtalkingoverfactsorstatisticsofwhichwearenotsure Third wheneverweareexpressingourideas brevityisthesoulofwitandtalkingtoomuchwillalwaysleadtofaultsandmistakes Nevertheless therearealsosomeexceptions Ifwefindoutflawinother sspeakingorwriting weshouldnothesitateamomenttopointitout Andtofriendsoracquaintancesseekingadvice weshouldfeelfreetohelpthem Inaword wecandrawtheconclusionthatinmostcases silenceisgolden butincertaincircumstances talkingistherightchoice 第六部分应用类模板 公开信 Dear I mwritingtoyou Worsestill However Moreover It shightimethat Thankingyouforyourkindness 表明写信目的简单介绍情况 说明目前的困难 表达希望 呼吁人们行动起来 Sample YourHelpNeeded1 对病人的简单介绍 目前的病情和家庭情况2 目前的困难 无法承担医疗费用 需要护理3 望捐助 联系方式 January8th 2005Dearfriends I mwritingtoyou onbehalfofthestudentunion toaskforhelpforourschoolmate ZhangLin fromClassA He fromanaveragefamily gotleukemiatwomonthsago Currently hisconditionhasbeenpromotedquitealotbutstillrequiresfurthertreatments Ashehasbeeninhospitalforsolongatime hisfamilyisnowpoverty stricken Worsestill hismotherwasdismissedforhavingbeenabsentfromworktoolong becauseshehadtotakecareofhiminthehospital Withanotheroperationapproaching hisfamilyistorturedbytheenormousfeesdemanded Hisparentshaverackedtheirbrainsforwaysofcollectingmoneyforthecureofhisillnessandmanagedtogetsome However thatisfarfromenoughyet Moreover hismotherneedssomeoneelsetohelpattendtohim Itishightimethatweshouldhelphimoutofthepresentgreatdifficulty Forthosewhoarekindenoughtooffertheirhelp pleasephone1234567orgoandputyourdonationsintothecollectionboxinfrontofRoom216andyoucanalsogodirectlytoourofficetosignyournamesothatyoucantakecareofhimbyturns Thankyouforyourkindness Yourssincerely LiMingChairmanoftheStudentUnion 应用类模板 演讲辞 FirstI dliketoextend to for I msureIwell Since I Moreimportantly Asfaras isconcerned Inaddition IfIwere Iwould Moreover Tosumup Ifyou please Thankyoufor 简单的致谢 说明自己的条件和优势 阐明如果成功 我会怎么办 希望得到支持并致谢 Sample ACampaignSpeech1 认为自己具备了什么条件 能力 性格 爱好 可以胜任学生会主席2 如果当选 你将会为本校同学做什么 Goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen FirstI dliketoextendmythankstoourcollegeforofferingusthisopportunitytorunforchairmanofthestudentunion I msureIwellsatisfytheconditionsforworkingaschairman Sinceseniormiddleschool Ihavebeenservingasmonitorofmyclass whichhasbestowedinvaluableexperienceonme Moreimportantly myjobhasalwaysbeensunghighpraiseofbybothmyclassmatesandteachers Asfarasmycharacterisconcerned I moptimistic enthusiastic easygoingandalwaysreadytoofferhelp Inaddition Ienjoyavarietyofhobbies rangingfromliteraturetosports AlloftheabovedemonstratesthatIcanbeaqualifiedandcompetentchairman IfIwereelected Iwouldtryeverymeanstocopewithwhateverproblemswemightencounter Moreover takingallourinterestsintoconsideration Iwouldorganizediverseactivitiessoastoenrichouruniversitylifeaswellasimproveourabilityinacomprehensiveway Tosumup Iwoulddedicatemyselftoservingyouaswellaspossibleandtryingtodevelopeveryone spotential Ifyoubelieveinme pleasecastyourvoteforme Thankyouforyoursupportandyourlistening 应用类模板 导游辞 Mydearfriends Welcometo It sreallyagreatpleasureto Theschedulefortodayisasfollows first after astheverysymbolof isregardedas islocatedat Among isconsideredmostimpressivefor Thankyouforlistening Ihopeyouenjoyyourselvestoday 对游客表示欢迎 说明今天旅游活动的安排 介绍将要参加的景点 表达对参观者的祝愿 Sample ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttractionYourrole atourguideYouraudience agroupofforeigntouristsYourintroductionshouldinclude somewelcomingwords theschedulefortheday adescriptionoftheplacethetouristswillbevisiting e g ascenicspotorahistoricalsite etc Mydearfriends WelcometoBeijing It sreallyagreatpleasuretohavethisopportunitytobeyourtourguideandshowyouaroundthissplendidcity Theschedulefortodayisasfollows first at8 00a m we llstartoutfortheBadalingGreatWall afterlunch at2 00p m wewillvisitthenearbyGreat Wall of ChinaMuseumaswellastheGreatNationalTheater fromwhichyoucangetapanoramicviewofit TheGreatWall astheverysymbolofancientChinaengineering spectacularlywindsitswayformorethan5 000kilometers Itisregardedasoneofthefewworldwondersthataresaidtobevisiblefromthemoon WhatwewillvisittodayistheBadalingGreatWall ItislocatedatYanqingCounty morethan70kilometersnorthwestfromthecenterofBeijingCity AmongallthesectionsoftheGreatWall Badalingisconsideredmostimpressiveforitsmagnificentviewandhistoricalsignificance Andin1987 itwasassessedas WorldCulturalHeritage bytheUnitedNations whichagainproveditscharm Thankyouforlistening Ihopeyouenjoyyourselvestoday 第七部分图表类模板 解释原因 Studyingthetablecarefully wecansee Themostimportantreasonofthischange Thereasonwhy Tosumup 描述表格 解释原因 下结论 Sample ChangesinPeople sDiet1 Statethechangesinpeople sdietinthepastfiveyears 2 Givepossiblereasonsforthechanges 3 Drawyourownconclusions Youshouldquoteasfewfiguresaspossible Studyingthetablecarefully wecanseeinthepastfiveyears therehavebeengreatchangesinpeople sdiet Grainisonthedeclinefrom49 to45 itisalsothecasewithfruitandvegetables Buttheconsumptionofmilkandmeat accordingtothetable aregreatlyontherise Themostimportantreasonofthischangeisprobablytheimprovementofpeople slivingquality Whenpeoplebecomericherandricher theywillconsumemoreandmorenutritiousfoodsuchasmilkandmeat andeatlessandlessgrain Thereasonwhyfruitandvegetablesriseabitafterseveralyears lowingtendencyisthatpeo