陕西省延长县高考英语二轮复习 作文品析（1）.doc

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（1）你有一位英国网友,名叫tom, 他听说了中国故宫，但知道不多，于是给你发来e-mail。请你向他介绍一下有关中国故宫的一些情况。请根据下面提供的一些要点给他回一封电子邮件：1. 故宫（the palace museum），又叫紫禁城（the forbidden city）。它于1407 年开始修建，20万人花了13年多的时间，于1420年建成。2. 它所有的宫殿一共有9999个房间。在中国，9这个数字传统地被认为是一个吉祥数。3. 现在，故宫免费向中国中学生于每周星期二开放。4. 故宫有着中国历史上五千多年的珍宝（precious treasure)。请他亲自来看一看。 注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 信的开头已经为你写好：dear tom ,it is nice to receive your e-mail. now id like to tell you something about the palace museum._【参考范文】书面表达： the palace museum is also called the forbidden city. it took 200,000 workers more than 13 years to build the forbidden city. the forbidden city was finished being built in 1420. the largest museum in the world ,the palace museum, holds cultural treasures from the past 5,000 years of chinese history . the citys palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether. chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number . students from all over china now visit in groups at no charge every tuesday . i hope you can come to china and take a look at this museum with your own eyes. best wishes. yours, li ming2009年8月17日在德国柏林举行的世锦赛上，牙买加选手博尔特再次打破百米世界记录，又创佳绩。请根据以下要点向21st century报刊投寄一篇介绍当今百米飞人博尔特的文章。姓名：尤塞恩博尔特(usain bolt)；绰号，闪电(lightning bolt)生日：1986年8月21日国籍：牙买加(jamaica)身高：1.96米职业：田径运动员性格特征：有天赋，勤奋，有爱心，有毅力梦想：再次打破世界记录成绩：2009年8月17日，德国柏林世锦赛，第二次打破100米、200米世界记录；共获3金2008年8月16日，北京奥运会第一次打破100米、200米世界记录，共获3金注意：1.使用必要连接词以使行文连贯；2词数为100。参考词汇：田径track and field；柏林世锦赛the berlin world championship【参考范文】usain boltusain bolt, who is 1.96 meters tall, was born on august 21st, 1986 in jamaica and he has a nickname of lightning bolt. as a worldfamous track and field athlete, he holds a number of world records. on august 16th, 2008, at the beijing olympic games he broke 100meter and 200meter world records and finally won three gold medals, one of which was 100meter relay race gold medal. on august 17th, 2009, in the berlin world championship he broke his own world records again. he is talented, hardworking, loving, and determined. now he is working hard to realize his dream to break world records again.【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（3）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 你接受了一项写作任务，写一篇关于中英诗人的英语介绍。著名诗人时代生平成就评价李白(701762)盛唐，唐朝浪漫主义诗人 一生遭受逆境他热爱自然，向往自由；创作诗文千余篇，其中30多首代代传诵至今被誉为中国的“诗仙”雪莱(17921822)工业革命时期，英国浪漫主义民主诗人英年早逝他不满社会不平等；用诗歌颂劳动阶级的欧洲第一人被誉为“诗人中的诗人”*珀西比希雪莱(percy bysshe shelley)【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 (one possible version) li bai, a romantic poet living in the prosperous period of chinas tang dynasty, is regarded as the “god of poetry” in china. all his life, though he went through a lot of setbacks, he showed his deep love for nature and eager wish for freedom and wrote about one thousand poems, of which more than thirty have been widely read and recited from generation to generation till today. compared with li bai, percy bysshe shelley, a romantic democratic poet lived during the period of great britains industrial revolution. he was born over 1,000 years later than li bai and unfortunately died at an early age, but he also wrote many famous poems showing his dissatisfaction with the social inequality. and shelley, considered as the “poet of poets”, became the first poet who sang for the working class in europe. 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（3）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。helping others can really make a difference to your own life. youre always busy living your own life, but every now and then, take a break for a bit and help someone out. you will not regret doing this. here are a few easy ideas how you can help others: spend some time with one of your elderly relatives or neighbors. help them clean up around the house or take them to a grocery store. just sit with them and have a little chat, because sometimes the smallest acts mean the most. teach a friend or a relative how to use a computer or get on the internet: how to start a blog, how to upload photos to a drugstores website so they can be printed out, how to use an ipod and add music to itunes. its probably stuff you write about on your own blog anyway, so talk about it instead of writing about it, which will help you learn how to explain things verbally. donate clothes that you no longer wear or other things that youre no longer using. someone out there will benefit from the stuff you dont need any more.【写作内容】1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词谈谈你对“助人为乐”的看法，内容包括：(1)阅读上文后你的感想；(2)以实例说明你的观点；(3)你对“帮助别人，快乐自己”的体会或评价。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_ 【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)the passage advises us to find some time to help others, such as doing the chores for our friends and relatives or teaching them how to use a computer. these little acts will improve their lives, as well as ours.for society as a whole, it is worth spending time doing charity work. and i think that what matters most is not how much we offer to people in need, but whether we are willing to give them a hand. sometimes, a little help can make a big difference. i once helped an old woman fix her mosquito net. she said to me gently, “thank you, little girl.” it didnt seem like a big thin