初中英语作文指导.doc

英语作文指导要想在考试有限的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的书面表达，须掌握熟练的解题技巧，把握几个解题关键，这里介绍一种五步写作法。1. 细心审题审题，即考生动笔前通过仔细阅读试题，明确目的要求。通过审题可以达到：（1）明确体裁。书面表达虽然重在内容，但格式也不能忽视。（2）确定内容。弄清题目设置的情景或提供的要点，便能紧扣题意，定什么不写什么，做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。（3）确定人称。弄清命题者要求考生用什么人称。（4）确定时态语态。时态语态的准确运用，亦是判断书面表达好坏的一条重要标准。一般说来，说明文、议论文多用一般现在时，记日记多用一般过去时，记叙文多用一般过去时和过去进行时。通过审题，明确体裁，知道事情发生的时间，对确定时态起着关键作用。2. 理顺要点根据考纲要求，漏写或没写清要点均要失分。理顺要点，是防止多写、漏写、乱写，保证内容完整的行之有效的办法，有的书面表达要点并非按事件发生顺序提供，考生须通过严密的构思加以条理化，最好在写作前将试题中的要点用笔标出，然后按事件先后或各要点之间的内在联系排列好。3. 组织句子将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，这是书面表达的关键的一步。完成这个步骤要注意：（1）书面表达重在达意，不要简单直译，而要用自己最有把握的短语或句型将意思完整表达出来，切忌使用冷僻词语，切忌用汉语句型去套用英语，乃至写出大量汉式英语。（2）如果碰上汉语提示中一时找不着相对应的英语词语或句型，不要轻易放弃，要开动脑筋，学会用内容相近的句子来表达。（3）尽可能写结构简单的句子，少用自己尚无把握的复合句。（4）选择正确的人称、时态、语态，注意冠词、单复数、大小写、标题等。上述几点在组织句子时若能高度重视，则错误便可大大减少。4. 串句成篇这个过程就是将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，形成短文。串句成篇，绝不是将一句话一句话简单地排在一起，要注意上下句的逻辑关系，必要时使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语。有的书面表达还可以分段，但段与段之间要过渡自然。若词数少于题目要求，可适当增加一些与内容相关的句子；若词数多于题目要求，也可考虑将能够合并的句子合并起来。5. 检查修改文章草稿写成后，默读一至两遍，检查修改，看文章是否对题，格式是否正确，内容是否完整，文句有无语病，行文是否连贯，拼写是否错误，词数是否恰当。有的书面表达题要求考生自拟标题，考生这时要注意不要丢掉标题，还要注意标题首字母的大写（标题中实词则大写首字母，虚词则不必大写）；如命题者不要求考生自拟标题的则不必拟标题，以免画蛇添足。经过检查修改后，再认真誊写，力求卷面整洁。这样经过周密思考、按步骤写出来的文章，比起毫无计划、信手拈来的文章质量肯定要好得多。书面表达。(15分)暑假生活即将开始，小明打算提高他的英语成绩， 但不知该如何去做，请把你的秘诀告诉他好吗？Its not very difficult to learn English. But the most important thing is the method of learning. Firstly, you can join an English club. There you can practice speaking with others. And you can also meet a lot of new friends. Secondly, you can do more listening in the morning, listen to the tapes and repeat after it. In this way, you can improve your listening. Thirdly, you can find a pen-pal, and write to him as often as possible, your writing skill must be improved. All in all, I think the most important thing is to be confident.书面表达。(15分) 请以 Have you ever been to the Great Wall?为题写一篇记述文。内容提示如下：1、长城的景色及地理位置 2、游长城的感受 3、文章以设问句Have you ever been to the Great Wall?开头。Have you ever been to the Great Wall? OK, I have been there once. That was a sunny day, my friends and I took a bus to the Great Wall. When we got the foot of it, we saw a lot of visitors. We began to climb the wall. At this time we saw the beautiful scenery, the wall is like a huge dragon. the Great Wall is famous as its old walls in the world. Its not far from the city of Beijing. Its said that it is one of the seven wonders in the world. Its very long, the most famous wall is Badaling Wall, Im proud that I got to the top of the wall. Though we were all tired ,we felt very happy.（书面表达1）假如你的新笔友叫Mike。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的情况。信的内容必须包括：你的姓名，年龄，所就读的学校，年级、班级，爱好，最喜欢的学科及理由，最喜欢的影片及理由等。信的内容不得少于十句话。信的开头和结尾已给出。 January 12 th,.2002Dear Mike,Thanks for your letter. Now Id like to tell you something about myself._ Yours,Bob January 12 th,2002Dear Mike, Thanks for your letter, Now Id like to tell you something about myself.My name is x x. Im twelve. I study at Bei Da Resource Middle School, Im in class Four Grade One. My favorite subject is science and I also Like geography. Because they are very important and useful. I Like playing the violin .I like an action movie .Because it is exciting .What about you? Do you like an action movie?please write to tell me soon.（书面表达2）请你仔细阅读下面的招聘广告。 l Boys and girls aged 12-15.l Are you good with children?l Happy kids winter camp Needs help with:l sports music computersl Come and join us! Send your personal(个人)information to . 假如你是李平想要应聘，请你根据招聘广告中的要求，在表格空白处至少填出两项你所能做的事情。并根据表格中的所有信息，发一封e-mail，介绍你的个人情况、兴趣爱好及能力。字数4060。信的开头、结尾已给出 NameAge SchoolLikecanLi Ping13No.3 Middle SchoolReading,computers,Playing basketballDear sir,I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music.My I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon.Yours, Li PingDear sir, I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music. My name is Li Ping I am thirteen (years old). I study / am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I like reading and playing basketball. I like computers, too. I can play football well. I can stag many English songs, And I can dance and swim. I can surf the Internet and send e-mails. I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon. Yours,Li Ping（书面表达3）根据提示，请以“School Rules”为题，写一篇短文或对话 提示：每所学校都有规章制度，下面是你们学校的一些规章制度，请你向一位新生Mary作一下介绍。内容包括：1. 上课不能迟到。2. 教室要保持(keep)干净和安静。3. 见到老师要问好。（greet)4. 不允许在教室里吃东西。5. 不许在课堂上听音乐，玩游戏。6. 不要损害花草树木。（pick flowers; climb trees）School Rules Welcome to our school, Mary. Here are some of our school rules. Let me tell you: We cant arrive late for class. We cant talk loudly in class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our class clean. When we meet the teachers on the way, we must greet them. We cant eat or drink in the classroom. But we can eat outside. We cant listen to music or play games in class, either. We cant pick flowers or climb trees. （书面表达4） 根据下列中英文提示写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的一段话。（不少于50个字）Jim 是个中学生， 学习努力， 平时喜欢上网冲浪和看英语书。 他每周锻炼一至两次，饮食习惯良好， 天天步行上学，身体健康。提示词： Internet, once or twice , eating habit, hardly, junk food, healthy Jim is a high school student. He works hard at school. He usually likes surfing the Internet and reading English books .He exercises once or twice a week. He has good eating habits. He hardly ever eats junk food. Every day he goes to school on foot. So he is very healthy.（书面表达5）根据提示写一封6080字的信。Tom 邀请Li Ping 参加他这周日的生日宴会，但Li Ping的父母出差要到下个月回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。再说英语考试即将来临，因此，无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ping感到很抱歉，只好写信辞谢。Dear Tom,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.Id love to go but I cant.My parent_. From Li PingDear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.Id love to go but I cant.My parents are out on business.They are coming back next month.And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed.And I also need to study for my coming English exam.Im very sorry but I cant go to your party.Thank you for asking me.I hope you can have a good time.（书面表达6）请用所给资料写一篇短文。 Name:Li Bin Date of birth: September 12th,19901996: started to learn English 1999: started to play basketball2002: join the school boys basketball team2003: win the first prize of English Speech Contest at school Li Bin is my good friend. He was born on the 12th of September,1990. His mother is an English teacher. So he started to learn English when he was six . He started to play basketball at the age of nine. He played well and he joined the school boys basketball team in 2002. Last year he won the first prize of the English Speech Contest at school. （书面表达7）根据下列班级活动调查表，用英语写一篇文章。 Class 12,Grade 8: Activity SurveyActivityEvery DayTwice a WeekFour Times a WeekWatch TV60% 20%20%Have Sports10%20%70%Do homework100%0%0%( All students=100 Most students=5199 Some students = 150 No students = 0)Here are the results of the student activity survey in Class 12, Grade 8. Most students watch TV every day. Some students watch TV twice a week. Some students watch TV four times a week. Some students have sports every day. Some students have sports twice a week. Most students have sports four times a week. All the students do homework every day. No students do homework twice or four times a week.（书面表达8） 根据下列第三中学八年级（3）班学生上学方式的调查表，用英语写一篇短文。不少于70 个单词。许俊语辅导:严谨+经验=好成绩!上学方式BusWalkingBikeCar学生人数1510250There are fifty students in Class 1, Grade 8 at Yuying Middle School. Every day they go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school. Ten students walk. They think walking is good for their health and they live near the school. Twenty-five students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes very much and their homes are not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car （书面表达9） 一些英国朋友要来参加你们班举行的英语晚会。作为主持人，你需要用英语准备一份60-80个词的欢迎辞。包括以下英文提示的内容（开头已给出）： 1. the number of students (boys 32, girls 28) 2. What do you think of English? 3. How do you learn English in your free time (magazines, TV, radio, etc)? 4. Your English programs (plays, songs, etc). 5. ending（结束语） Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our class and welcome to our English Evening. First of all, let me say a few words about our class. Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our class and welcome to our English Evening. First of all, let me say a few words about our class. There are 60 students in our class. 32 of us are boys and the others are girls. Most of us like English and study hard at it. In our free time we often read English books, newspapers and magazines. Sometimes we learn English on the radio and sometimes on TV. This evening youll enjoy some short plays, songs, dances and so on by our classmates. I hope youll like these programs and have a good time. Thank you! （书面表达10） 请你写一篇制作玉米花(popcorn)的小短文。注意使用first, next, then, finally等表示过程的词。不少于50个词。 How to make popcornI like popcorn very much. I learned from my mother how to make popcorn. Now let me show you the ways. First you put the popcorn into the popper. Next, turn on the popper. Wait for several minutes. Then you pour the popcorn into the bowl. And put salt on the popcorn. Finally you can eat the popcorn.（书面表达11）根据以下情况写一篇短文介绍你的这位笔友 李华，英文名叫Tony，是第一中学一年级二班的学生他出生于1989年8月12日他的出生地在广东深圳他今年13岁，爱好音乐和篮球他喜欢英语，爱玩电脑游戏他经常放学后与同学打篮球 B)写短文介绍,开头已给出 I have a good pen pal. Let me tell you something about him._I have a good penfriend. Let me tell you something about him. His name is Li Hua. He has an English name. It is Tony. He is a middle school student in Class Two, Grade One of No. 1 Middle School. He is 13 years old now. He was born in Shenzhen, Guangdong. His birthday is August the twentieth. He likes playing basketball and listening to music. He often plays basketball with his classmates after school. His favourite subject is English and he likes playing computer games best. I like to write to him. He is my good friend.（书面表达）请你以校办公室的名义用英语发一则Notice。告知初二学生明天将去四个地方作调查，注意事项写在提示里，题目：Notice。写作提示：1.visit four places 2.tomorrow,leave after breakfast at 8:003.lunch at the place of visit 4.come back in the afternoon 5.four groups,each group to a place6.each class a group,say which place you want to visit,then tell the office NoticeAll the students in Grade Two will visit four places tomorrow.You will leave school after breakfast at 8 o clock.Lunch will be at the place of visit.All must come back in the afternoon.Each class will be a group.There ll be four groups together.Each group will visit a place.Please tell the school office which place you want to visit.School Office in No.14 Middle SchoolMay 16th,2005 （书面表达）你和你的好朋友Jean发生了争执，在自我反省过后，你觉得有必要给她写一封信向她道歉，并向她提一些意见。请就此向她发一封e-mail表示你的诚意，60词以上。Dear Jean,1. I am sorry to argue with you several days ago.We haven t talked with each other these days.You are my best friend,aren t you?Few days ago when I heard you lost my lovely book,I was really mad,so I argued with you,and said that I could not be your friend from then on.Later,I didn t sleep well those days.I always remembered a lot of fun we had.So I decided to write a letter to say sorry to you.I also think you should be careful and take good care of your things.Let s be best friends again,OK?（书面表达）请你谈谈在本学期有何打算或计划，就此写一篇短文，题目自拟，词数80左右。This term I should study harder.I am good at math,physics and science lessons.My English is not good.I think I should learn from my friend Nari.His English is good.Perhaps he would like to help me.Teacher said,my compositions were not good.So I should read more useful books after class.I believe I will do well in English.On the other way,I should do more exercise,this will make me strong.I like playing ball games.After class I should make more friends,because the more we are together,the happier we are.Yours ever,Julia（书面表达 ）假如你叫Han Meimei，现在青州一中上学。你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语写一封信给Mary要点如下：1你很抱歉，不能去。2你母亲病了，医生叫她卧床几日，你要照顾母亲。3谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片，你很喜欢，将它放在书桌上。 No.1 Middle School Qingzhou March 8，2003 Dear Mary， Thank you very much for inviting me to your party But I am very sorry I cant come My mother is ill The doctor asks her to stay in bed for several days I have to take care of my mother Thank you very much for sending me such a beautiful postcard I like it very much I am going to put it on my desk Could I hear from you soon Give my best wishes to your family Yours，（书面表达 ）你有集邮（collect stamps）的爱好吗？请谈谈你集邮的历史。如果没有，也可以谈谈你别的爱好，以此为内容写一篇60词左右的短文。I like to collect many things,such as nice stones,names of movies,books,toys,photos of famous people.But I like collecting stamps best.I have been collecting stamps for five years.When I was very young,my uncle sent me a stamp from Australia.I loved it at once.Since then I tried to collect stamps and fell in love with it.I have more than one hundred stamps.Some were sent by my friends,some were collected by myself;some were from foiregn countries,some were Chinese.I like them.Often,I take them out and show them to my friends.（书面表达 ）Kelly今天生日，你准备为她准备一次surprise party，并邀请你的朋友参加，并且还准备了一顿special meal。请用英语介绍你的准备情况及邀请的客人。需要用到的单词及短语：invite,ready,present,laugh,have a good time Today is Kelly s birthday.She is my best friend.I m going to have a surprise party for her in my house.I invited Leina,Sally,Macia,and many other friends.All of them are teenagers.Leina promised to bring some drinks.Sally will bring some snacks.David said he would bring some flowers and pictures.I bought a big cake and a present for her.I am going to get ready for a special meal.I bought humburgers,French fries,and I made some salad.Kelly likes hamburgers and fruit salad.Macia likes cakes and I like French f