广西贺州中学2016高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼(4).doc

短文改错二轮精炼（4）【由四川省资阳市2014模拟改编】短文改错。请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didnt want toany shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he wasdisappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of thestory was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as weneed both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness.We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to thinkabout that we might learn from the experience.【参考答案】一、参考答案Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didnt want to forany shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was the finisheddisappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the andstory was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we is completeneed both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. needWe often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think lessonsabout that we might learn from the experience. what二、评分意见 1. 未标注符号或符号标注不规范一律不给分。2. 答题位置（需修改的词下方或需添加位置的下方）不对（如答在上方或相距甚远的位置）一律不给分。短文改错Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 1. _party on Sunday. Id like very much come but 2. _had an examination on Monday morning. It is 3. _a very important exam but I cant afford to 4. _fail it. Ill spend all the whole weekend reading 5. _and prepare for it. So Im really sorry that I 6. _wont be able to come in this time. Hope you 7. _can understand. Ill take this chance to wish 8. _you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 9. _birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! 10. _Yours,Li Ming答案及解析1. on 改为 for。动词 thank 与名词 thanks 通常与介词 for 搭配。2. much 后加 to。 Id like to do something 为固定结构。3. had 改为 have。综观全文时态可知。4. but 改为 so。根据上下文逻辑， 此处应为因果关系。5. 删去 all。all 与 the whole 重复， 只能保留一处， 由于在此题型中， 只有多一个单词的可能， 故此处只能删去 all。6. prepare 改为 preparing。与上文的 reading 形成平行结构， 以满足“spend some time on sth./in doing sth.这一句型的需要。7. 删去 in。含有 this， that， last， next 等的时间状语前不加任何介词。8. 此行无错。9. wonderful 前加 a。10. return 改为 returns。return 此处为名词， many happy returns of the day 意为“祝你健康长寿”。【由浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷改编】短文改错。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily I was the am completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday evening. onLast week our class voted what to do for our class outing: visit the Singapore Zoo or go to the Night Safari(夜间动物园). Our girls wanted to go to the zoo, and since we were in the minority, we lose to the boys, who all wanted to the safari. We got the admission rate for students, which was greatly since I still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as anything at the souvenir shops. The safari was scary but a really fun. As we took the ride through the parks dark jungle, we could see the eye of many creatures looked out at us. Most of the animals there sleep when there is sunlight and waked up at night.【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Last week our class voted what to do for our class outing: visit the Singapore Zoo or go to onthe Night Safari(夜间动物园). Our girls wanted to go to the zoo, and since we were in the We butminority, we lose to the boys, who all wanted to the safari. We got the admission rate for students, lost which was greatly since I still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as greatanything at the souvenir shops. The safari was scary but a really fun. As we took the ride throughsomething the parks dark jungle, we could see the eye of many creatures looked out at us. Most of the eyes looking animals there sleep when there is sunlight and waked up at night. wake2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错短文改错。I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Mengs parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havent see each other much, but weve kept writing to each other.【参考答案】1.l friend=friendsl in=tol listen=listenedl Li Mengs parents invited I to spend= Li Mengs parents invited me to spendl week=weeksl beautifully=beautifull but=andl Li Meng came see me=Li Meng came to see mel her father has changed= her father changedl we havent see each other much= we havent seen each other much短文改错。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I went to the Summer Palace last weekAt the gate I happened to meet some American touristsI greeted to them in English and then we began to chatI got know that they were college students traveling in ChinaMost of them were fond with Chinese medicineThey are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the ch