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高二英语作文专题训练 （一） 20XX年央视春晚的广告收入创新高但节目中的植入广告引发了热议最近某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查请根据以下饼图（piechart）所示信息用英语写一篇短文并提出你自己的看法 注意： 1对所给提示不要简单翻译可适当增加细节使行文连贯 2词数150左右开头已给出不计入总词数 3植入广告：productplacement FestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVmercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes. Theopinionsonthistopicvaryfrompersontoperson.Oneinfourthinkthereissomuchofproductplacementthatlotsofpeoplefeelunsatisfiedwhentheywatchtheprogrammes.And10%ofthepeoplethinkproductplacementintheprogrammesgreatlyruinstheimageofCCTV,beauseitwillleaveabadimpressiononaudienceinandoutsideChina.Besides,nearlyonethirdofthepeopleholdtheopinionthatitshardtorelatetheproductplacementtotheprogrammes,makingtheaudiencefeelunfortable. However,thereare15%ofthepeoplewhothinkitishelpfulforthedevelopmentofCCTV.Andtherestthinkthereisnoneedforustobesostrictwithproductplacement.Afterall,itsverynatural. Personally,theproductplacementisreallydisgustingandCCTVshouldtrytoavoidit. 本文总体结构非常清晰作者通过整合拼图谈论对待广告的两大观点最后陈述自己的观点除此之外作者在选词造句上也下了一番工夫在开头中间以及最后的结尾处优美、地道的句式层出不穷一些高级词汇相互响应熠熠生辉值得其他学生借鉴 The20XXSpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVmercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes. Accordingtothepiechart,wecansee15%ofthesurveyedpeoplethinkitsdifficulttodevelopCCTVwithouttheproductplacement,becauseitcanprovideenoughmoney.Atthesametime,20%ofthemthinktheproductplacementispresentedintheprogammeinanaturalway. Ontheotherhand,therestofthepeopleareagainstthemoveandtheyhavetheirownreasons.Nearlyonethirdofthemsaytheproductplacementhaslittletodowiththeprogrammes,whichreducestheirinterestsintheprogrammes.And10%ofthepeopleholdtheideathatthedisadvantagethatitruinstheimageofCCTVoutweighsitsadvantage.Besides,aquarterplaintherearetoomuchproductplacementintheprogrammes. AsfarasImconcerned,evenifitsmontoseeproductplacement,Idontthinkitshouldappearinsomeprogrammesofartandculture. 本文反映出作者对英文写作极强的驾驭能力首先作者能够很好地审题通过图表找准信息并且将文章结构安排地很合理让读者一目了然再次作者在语言方面极具天赋从开始的一个without的强调句到非限制性定语从句及后来SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVmercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes. Asisshowninthepiechart,20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkitacceptable,fortheproductplacementappearsintheprogrammesnaturally.And15%ofthemconsideritnecessaryforCCTVtomakemoneyfromproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentofCCTVitself. However,amongthepeoplesurveyed,morethanonethirdofthemplainthattheproductplacementhasnothingtodowiththeprogrammes.25%ofthemevenfeelhurtseeingsomuchofit.Furthermore,therest10%holdtheviewthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV. Fromthechartwecandrawaconclusionthatmostofthepeoplesurveyedareagainstproductplacementintheprogrammes.Inmyopinion,productplacementnowadaysisalmostunavoidable,butitshouldnotdamagetheartoftheshowandshouldtaketheaudiencesfeelingsintoaccount. （二） 你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论请你根据下表提 Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetherpassengerswhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunished. Asmallpartofthestudentsapproveofitforthereasonthatononehand,thispunishmentcandecreasetheamountofthetrafficaccidents.Ontheotherhand,itcanimprovethesafetyofpassengersanddrivers.Besides,avoidingridinginacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisnotonlyresponsibleforus,butalsoforthedriverandpedestrians. However,themajorityofthestudentsarestronglyagainstthispunishmentinthattheythinkithardforpassengerstojudgewhetherthedriverhasdrunkornot.Whatsmore,eventhepassengersknowthedriverhasdrunk,ifthedriverdoesntaccepttheiradvice,itsunfairtopunishthepassengers. Personally,Ithinkpeoplewhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunishedbecausethepublicssafetyisthemostimportant. 作者分三个段落来完成此篇书面表达先说明少数人赞成的观点接着说明多数人反对的观点最后给出作者自己的观点并说明理由结构紧凑要点全面作者观点鲜明理由具有说服力文章中作者使用了大量的高级词汇和高级结构为文章增添了色彩ononehand,ontheotherhand,besides,however,whatsmore,personally等过渡词增强了文章的流畅性 Imwritingtoyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetherpassengerswhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunished. Theminorityofthestudentswhoarefortheideathinkthatitcanreducetrafficaccidentsandpromotethesafetyoftraffic.Theyalsothinkavoidingtakingacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisanactivityresponsibleforpassengersandthedriverandotherpeopleontheroadaswell. Onthecontrary,themajorityofthestudentsareopposedtoit.Thefirstreasontheygiveliesinthatpassengershavedifficultyfindingwhetheradriverisdrunken.Apartfromthat,evenifpassengersknowthatthedriverisdrunken,itisunfairtopunishthemwhenthedriverdoesnttaketheirsuggestionseriously. Inmyview,itstrafficsecuritythatgreatlymattersandwe shouldpunishthosedrunkendriversratherthanthepassengers. 该文的最大亮点是多处使用的复杂句式体现作者娴熟的语言表达技巧Beopposedto,takeseriously等高级短语的使用亦为文章增添了色彩过渡词onthecontrary,apartfrom,evenif,inview,and等使用较为考究综合全文的这些特点该理应为一篇优秀作文 Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetherpassengerswhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunished. Theminorityofthestudentsholdtheopinionthatpunishingthepassengershelpsreducetrafficaccidentsandincreasetrafficsafety.Nottorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisnotonlyaresponsiblebehaviorforpassengersbutalsoforthedriverandotherpeopleontheroad. Themajorityofthestudents,however,disapproveoftheidea,statingthatitisdifficultformonpassengerstoknowwhetherthedriverhasbeendrinkingornot.Whatsmore,evenifthepassengerknowsthedriverhasdrunkalcoholandhasattemptedtopersuadethedrivernottodrive,itisunfairtopunishthepassengerwhenthedriverdoesnotfollowtheadvice. AsfarasIamconcerned,punishingpassengersaswellasthedriversisnotonlyunfairbutalsohardtocarryout. Yourssincerely, LiHua （三） 北京大学年将试行由中学校长实名推荐的招生改革被推荐的学生高考成绩可获得30分的加分年11月16日北大公布了39所有推荐资格的中学名单北大这一举措在全国引起了一场激烈的争论请根据以下要点给中国日报写一 willeollstudentsremendedbyhighschoolprincipalsthisyears.Theremendedstudentswillhaveanextra30pointsaddedtotheirnationalcollegeentranceexamscores.PekingUniversitysmovehassetoffanationwidedebate. Ontheonehand,somepeopleinfavorofitthinkthereisnodoubtthatPekingUniversitysmoveisaboldattemptofreformingtheeducationalsystem.Inaddition,itisalsoaguaranteeforoutstandingstudentsorthosegiftedinsomeaspectsthattheyhaveachancetobeadmittedintofirstclassuniversities.Besides,thismovewillencouragethemiddleschoolstopaymoreattentiontotheallrounddevelopmentofthestudents. Ontheotherhand,somethinktherearealotofdisadvantagesofthismove.Firstchancesarethatsomestudentstrytocheatbecause30pointsisagreatlureforthem.Also, itisunfairformoststudentsinmanyotherschools. Personally,weshouldbalanceitsadvantagesagainstitsdisadvantages.Itisthecollegeentranceexaminationthatdecidesstudentsfuturetoalargeextent.SoIdontthinkitsagoodideaorpolicy. 文章三段式写作层次分明结构清晰文章中大量地使用了一些高级词汇如：reform,guarantee,beadmittedinto和balanceagainst等另外最后一段的精心安排 willeollstudentsremendedbyhighschoolprincipalsthisyears.Theremendedstudentswillhaveanextra30pointsaddedtotheirnationalcollegeentranceexamscores.PekingUniversitysmovehassetoffanationwidedebate. SupportersholdtheopinionthatbydoingthisPekinguniversityattemptstoreformthecurrentuniversityentrancesystembravely.Inaddition,thepolicycanmakesurethatthestudentswhohavegoodqualitiesorspecialtalentswillbeeolledbyfirstclassuniversities.Whatsmore,itsalsoaneffectivemeasuretodrivehighschoolstofocusonthestudentsallrounddevelopment. Onthecontrary,thereisanothervoice.Theseobjectorsarguethatthereisnopointincarryingoutthepolicy.Firstly,itmayleadtocheating.Besides,itsagainsttheprinciplethattheuniversitiesentranceexamisheldonanequalbasis.Soitsunfairtootherstudents.Andtheythinkthereisnoneedtogiveextrascorestotheremendedstudents,mostofwhomareexcellentstudents. Frommypointofview,Ithinkitswellworthhavingatry.Afterall,itsagreatleapinreformingthecurrentuniversityentrancesystem. 读完此篇作文心中不禁感叹作者良好的英语语言驾驭能力作者在文中简约有序地组织表达了所有的内容要点用词精确谨慎所选句式难易交错固定句式及地道的短语赋予了文章别样的风采在文末水到渠成地用了一句itswellworth表达了自己的观点精彩圆满地完成了写作目标 Universitywilleollstudentsremendedbyhighschool