雅思写作6.5分学习笔记.doc

7.14雅思作文：小作文：三分之一分数 150-180字大作文：三分之二分数 250-280字如何1+12？1、 记笔记：速记 自查2、 看参考书写作胜经：P115 33篇非常重要，看内容不看结构00-12年写作机经：每天四道，P28 08.1.10至最后读话题，找考点看题型，定结构划核心词，定同义、近义词T2解题步骤：1、 审题：话题 题型 核心词2、 思路：必须一分为二3、 结构：4/5段，prefer 4段4、 表达：话题考点话题：教育社会科技传媒国家政策题型：1、 让步反驳 3-7 do u agree or disagree2、 平衡写 5-5 discuss3、 问题解决（PRS）4、 组合题评分标准：Content： what why howOrganization： 衔接词VocabularyGrammar：18-22句话，7种不同句型EX: study in another country1、论点-7分-一心一意A great many advantages can be seen fromFirst of all, these developed countries are home to some of the most prestigious universities in the world, such as Cambridge and Oxford. In this sense, XXX can not only offer the best academic environment but also advanced educational facilities to XXX, which, by contrast, might not be easily obtained from their domestic study.2、衔接完善Secondly, XXX could highly broaden XX horizon, this is mostly because, XXX would gain knowledge of another culture, lifestyle, value, even attitude of life, leading to XXX.衔接词：大S顺序：To start/begin with, second, what is moreIn the first place, in the second place, in addition小S表因：This is possibly/partly/mostly/mainly becauseDue to/owing to the fact that小S表果：Lead to, as a resultBring about, result inTrigger, generate3、词汇近义互换：Benefit/drawbackAdvantage/disadvantageStrength/weaknessPositive/negativeMerit/demeritBlessing/curse词性转换ConsiderAfter a considered discussion of both viewsLack of consideration of othersHow considerate you are!A considerable number of findings show that形副出没Solve problemThe tough/urgent/pressing question/challenge can be effectively tackled by“极其非常”：HighlyExtremelyDefinitelyAbsolutelyVitalEssentialSignificant“仅仅，只是”：SimplyMerelyNothing more than4、语法：There be表状态、趋势There is an abundance of evidence to support the idea that it is 强调句It is widely accepted thatIt is undenied thatIt is an undeniable fact that被动Should never be neglected/denied/underestimated虚拟语气Financial aid could be one of the most practical/reasonable/useful methods to名词+插入语+more likely to doStudying abroad, as far as Im concerned, is likely to be an extremely significant Reading, generally speaking, would be more likely to cultivate childrens creativity and imagination.插入语：AlthoughIndeed/surely/certainlyNeedless to sayTo my knowledgethe+比较级，the+比较级The more passion we have, the more happiness we are likely to experience.and连接两个简单句Possible reasons leading to this matter will be carefully explored and effective solutions will be obtained accordingly.题型一：辩论型让步反驳3-7 Agree or disagree背景+作者观点让步反驳重申作者观点平衡写5-5 胜经P30背景+双方观点+作者目的观点A观点B亮明作者观点题型二：PRS背景+作者目的原因1原因2提出解决方式题型三：组合题背景+目的分析原因给出观点提建议先问观点，再问其他无关紧要问题：背景+目的让步反驳回答第二问T2文章分布：全文250字，18-22句1、首段2-3句话题目改写：In recent years/Over the recent decades, a heated debate about XXX has drawn the publics attention.Public attention has been led to XXX.In the past decades, XXX has become one of the most heated focuses of discussion and disputes across the whole country.双方观点（平衡写时才有）：Some people welcome the idea that While others hold a rather different opinion作者目的：In this essay, both views will be taken into careful consideration and my own conclusion will be drawn at the end.This essay will compare and contrast its controversy.开头举例：11.1.8The effects of using robots have drawn many peoples attention in recent years,Some people firmly believe that its vital for human beingWhile other hold an opposite idea.10.11.6Nowadays, there is a perception held by increasingly more people that its definitely vital for students to study at school until they become adult.For my part, I find myself in complete agreement with this idea.However, I hold opposite attitude toward this view.11.2.26There are a great number of people proposing currently that its definitely significant for central authority to provide food for its citizens rather than importing from other country.2、尾端2-3句重申总论点+强调作者观点提建议或解决方法3-7All in all, based on the above discussion, Im firmly convinced that the idea of is more rational than especially when XXX has been taken into consideration.5-5To sum up, the issue of XX, from my own perspective, depends/relies on the actual situation involved if XXX would/should/might尾段举例：11.2.7All in all, the issue of how to travel, from my personal view, depends on the actual situation involved,If people have time and money, going to the destination in person would be a better choice when XX is concerned.7.173-7让步论点：诚然：Certainly, there are several obvious reasons for people to support the view thatIts not denying that those who oppose to the idea also have their reasons to some extent.反驳：By contrast, people holding the opposite idea are oversimplifying the situation.Conversely, its not completely true to say this view is always good or beneficial/bad or harmful.5-5论点：On the one hand, its understandable for people to believe thatOn the other hand, its also reasonable for people to suggest thatIts definitely/completely true to say XX to some extent.小S论据：解释：见“原因”递进：近义词互换That is to sayIn other wordsBy that I meanThere is, first of all, a clear link between human and environmental problems.That is to say, whenever human lives, they damage the environment in some way.举例子：To illustrateTo demonstrateA case in point thatWe can find plenty of evidence, from my own school/work/life experience, to support the view that完整主体段框架：For one thing, for anotherTS: the idea of XX is comprehensive.大S: first and foremost, 小S: Put it in another way大S: more importantly and practically小S: XX could serve as a perfect example.Hence/thereby, the reasons of XX are easiest to note.第三节：教育类话题考点： 教育的目的和方式 选课 老师的不可替代性08.9.6有两件事情的题目：首段2句 背景+观点让步4句 父母好反驳3句 父母差反驳5-7句 老师全好结尾 2句 再次表明观点+提出意见Genes demonstrate a powerful influence onThe latest survey, relating to XX, has highlighted that XXThe traits we inherited from parents, apply a constant as well as repetitive and profound impact on A considerable number of findings show thatXX spend great about of time living with XX, when lifestyle, custom, attitude and value of life are formed.老师传道：1、 了解教育心理学Have a better knowledge/understanding of educational psychologyExploit ones natural resources without destroying them2、 专业教育方式Possess expertise in teaching methodContinued teaching and guided practice老师授业1、 吸收-传递-促进Stimulate ones interests in a smarter wayPass on a series of social skillsPromote teamwork spirit via2、 教导-培养Educate value and attitude, right and wrong, good and evilCultivate XX to become sociable, outgoing, optimistic and tolerant老师解惑1、教育者+父母A dual role is inevitably carried out byXXX shoulder the responsibility of not only an educator, but also a mentor in taking care of2、心理辅导师Can be grouped into09.10.8 P118 自学的好处Ease financial burden imposed byLearn how to exploit and develop their talent at their own paceDevelop faster socially第四节：社会类话题考点：1、家庭；老人 P119、P129老龄化人数增多好处：ExperiencedSocial harmony坏处：Labor forces shortageArmy/military/police forceFinancial pressure for youngsters3、 抽象What is happiness? 具体问题具体分析11.11.26Spiritualpermanent, eternal, ever-lastingMaterial-temporary过去 现在 将来UnpredictablePractical竞争好处：Motivation=driving factorProgress坏处：FrustratedTwisted value 环保犯罪择业手掌原则：个人 家庭 学校（单位） 媒体 政府犯罪考点：犯罪原因解决措施1. PRS首段：2-3句话The recent issue of XX has triggered serious problemsThere are probably several direct reasons leading to this situationsThe following content represents my view on why the case is and how to tackle it.2. PRS主体段分析原因Chief among the causes is thatAnother contributing factor is that3. PRS尾段解决措施All in all, we have no choice but to take some feasible actions as followsOne to be taken is thatAnother one could be adopted is that XX犯罪原因:Crime手掌原则应用：个人：Lacking of self-control ability, can be easily influenced by negative effects from outside world, to be more specific, 家庭：Unsuitable/improper/inappropriate parentingDomestic violencePhysical punishmentPsychological negligence学校：Focus too much on academic achievementQualities to be a responsible person are not valued at all媒体：Violent/pornographic scenesPoison ones mindsTrigger violent impulse政府：Gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wideIt is no easy task to adapt to the rapidly changing world7.1908.1.12监狱、刑期正面作用维护-补偿-预防Maintain the lawEnsure victims and their relatives some compensationFurther deter potential crimes择业考点：男女男女性别描述：女性：Better communicatorConsiderate and endurantPatient and gentleSubtleness and empathy男性：Physical advantageBorn to be adventurousHave instinct of being actively aggressive老少收入高低长期 vs. 临时第五节：科技传媒类话题1、 总体影响2、 传媒力量Profit-drivenExaggerateConceal3、 现代/传统TS:There are a great number of benefits ofThe comfortable use of undoubtedly/surely brings numerous unprecedented/exceptional/extraordinary benefits to大S：铁路的优点改变生活In the past decades, many people, such as businessman, commuters and even politicians realized that railways, with their power and speed, were transforming livesPut it in another way, you could bathe in the sea at Brighton in the morning, and you could have lunch in London. And you might be in Newmarket for a race meeting in the afternoon.小S：铁路的优点便捷And all these have been ensured with the prevailing use of, which enables to maximize their social opportunities.Overcome geographical barriers科技的缺点TS：Conversely, XX also results in some unavoidable problems.Personal information security is one of the biggest rising concerns ever involved.小S：再解释信息丢失Due to the fact thatThis is mostly because, huge inconvenience along with heavy loss of could be triggered by increasingly more virus threats and well-trained hackers.大S：科技的缺点缺少沟通Another problem of might lie in the fact that would become somewhat indifferent and feel isolated in the long run with sufficient face to face communication.第六节：国家政策类话题考点：1、 挣钱2、 买单3、 形象11.6.11 买教育、医疗还是艺术人民有权利：As honorable taxpayers, XX all contribute to a nations XX system.In this sense, XX should be entitled to receive financial support from public fund as necessary condition of a proper human life.政府有义务：Its a duty and inescapable duty for central authority to popularize free medical care and prosper education industry.Due to the fact that both of them are loosely related to citizens fundamental interests as well as benefits and rights.社会和谐：A more harmonious society would thus be secured in the long run.预算有限There is never a unlimited budget for administration.And there are simply too many other issues to be dealt with08.3.8Behave yourselfStay healthyProtect environmentObey the lawTreat your family wellMaintain a harmonious relationshipSmile to other peopleContribute to social stability7.24第七节：小作文概况图表分类：1、 数据图表Line graph=line curvePie chartBar chart=columnTable2、 非数据图表流程图：flowchart地图：geography数据图标特征：1、 两种状态：用时间分配动T1：上升下降波动静T=1：比大小2、 三种趋势巨大上升中速下降缓慢波动3、 四大金刚句型趋势/状态+数字4、 5步衔接起 终 高 低 交评分标准：1、 任务完成Summarize:大趋势决定分段Main features:同类关键点及变化Make comparisons:静态比较2、 衔接Start fromAnd followed byHowever, from them onAfterwards,Finally, XX finished by3、 词汇上升：Increase, riseImprove, growGo upUpward trend下降：Fall drop decrease decline波动：Rise and fallFluctuate平稳：Maintain the same levelRemain stable最值：顶点：Get to summitReach a peak谷底：Drop to the bottomHit the lowest point幅度巨大：Significant(ly)Considerable/considerablyDramatic/dramatically中速：Gradual(ly)General(ly)缓慢：Slight(ly)Slow(ly)时间：Between andDuring 20 years since 1979Over the period of 2 decades form 19794、 语法趋势状态：主谓There be拟人被动数字：括号（）分词：fallingWhich从句介词 with at aboutThe birth rate in China decreased slightly by 3%(from 23% to 20%) over the period of 30 years since 1966.There was a slight decrease of 3% in XX, falling slowly form XX to XX, between X and X.A slight decrease (3%) can be seen in , dropping from in to in The 30-year period since 1966 witnessed a 3% slight decrease in , which declined moderately from to 文章结构：150字，7-10句1、首段1-2句题目改写：时间 地点 对象 单位大趋势/状态2、主体段1-3段：按趋势/按图形关键点及变化3、 尾端1-2句：总结特征+比大小总结两张图的关系EXAs can be seen from the line graph starts from a high of units (at 0:00)And followed by a steady increase to estimate units However, from then on, XX drops sharply for the next 6 hours and hits the lowest point, at units.Thereafter, X is on a stable rise until , when the peak of the day is achieved, with units.The last two hours of the day see a sharp decrease in to the same level as its starting point.静态表达：占：Account forMake upTake upOccupy比大小：The most principle/significant/popular component is A, which makes up % of all, while B is the minimal segment, occupying Meanwhile, C lies in the middle (X %)多饼图-主体段1Cars increased greatly during these three decades: rising from in to in At the same time, both and displayed a gradual upward trend (from to and from to respectively)主体段2-降In contrast to these increased, X experienced a more or less decline.Among them, the former demonstrated a dramatic drop, decreasing from to overMeanwhile, the remainder declined slightly, which has not easy to notice.柱图-静态两个柱：以其中