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阅读范文提高英语作文水平一、学写叙事描写例1 Imitation : (Miss Andreas Model)Dear editor, Im writing to tell you how people celebrate the festival in our country. My Thanksgiving Day activities are very different from my normal weekly activities. First of all Im able to sleep later. I usually wake up around 8:30. Then I always go downstairs and help my mother and my sister to cook. We often cook until 3:00 in the afternoon. Sometimes I take a break from the kitchen to watch the football game on TV. We seldom eat before 3:00. Between 3:00 and 4:00, the whole family gathers around the table to eat. Afterwards, we clean up until about 5:30 or 6:00. When the kitchen is clean, we go outside and play games until about 8:00. Id like to learn more about the other kind of festivals in different countries, especially the Spring Festival in China. Best wishes Andrea学写 重点学写事情的性质和活动安排的时间顺序，模仿写出原句的结构。如中国的春节。例2 （选自China Daily）Shen told China Daily, “Foreign Minister Yang Jiechi looks exactly like the old-style intellectual from my hometown, considerate (考虑周到的), knowledgeable and gentle. Besides, he remembers every word of the lyrics (抒情诗) and sings in a broad range of pitches (声调).” “He is very suave (和蔼的), articulate (清晰的) and persuasive (有说服力的),” said David Shambaugh, a professor of political science and international affairs at the George Washington University. But “beneath his scholarly grace, Yang is very decisive and strong-minded”, said Zhao Shaohua, whose delegation was received by Yang in the US several years ago.学写 形容一个人的评价性描述：1. His industry, administrative activity, and public spirit were unrivalled.他的勤奋，他的行政活动以及他的公益精神，无人能与之相比。2. His readiness, his apprehension, his resource were extraordinary.他的敏捷，他的颖悟、他的谋略都是出类拔萃的。3. His argument is persuasive. 他的论据是有说服力的。4. She was a woman whose eye penetrated everywhere. 她是一个目光犀利能洞察一切的女人。5. He was a mature, capable young fellow with a keen mind and the ability to shape his future.他是一个成熟精干的小子。他思维敏捷，有能力主宰自己的未来。6. Mr. Yuan longping was truly a man before his time.袁隆平先生的确是一个站在时代前面的人。7. He was a larger-than-life personality. 他是个带有传奇色彩的人物。8. She was a humble, self-effacing person. 她是一个谦逊低调的人。二、学写叙事与感受例3 （2007湖北卷完形填空） When I was young, my parents ran a snack bar in our small town. One evening in early April, my mother told me to fill in at the snack bar for a worker who had the flu. I told her I would mess it up, because I had never worked at the bar before. I worried that instead of making money, I would end up owing it. “You can do it,” said my mother. “Besides, you wont get much business until lunch.” “But Ill never remember the orders, and Im no good with money. Please, Mom, dont make me.” “Then Ill help you,” she said. I shrugged my shoulders. I thought my mothers idea was a bad one, but I obeyed. When I got to the bar the next day, I found my mother was wrong. Because the weather that day was rainy and cold, people wanted hot snacks and drinks. At first, I was really slow at taking the orders and making change. The line of people grew, and everybody seemed impatient. I was so nervous that my hands shook, and I broke a cup into pieces. What a mess! Then my mother came to help me, and she also showed me how to make change. If someone gave me $5 for something that cost $3.25, I handed over three quarters and a dollar and said, “75 cents makes four dollars, plus one dollar makes five.” Things went more smoothly after that. By the end of the day, I could remember orders, add up the bill, and make change quickly with a smile. I was even a little disappointed when the sun came out and dried up business. My mother said she was proud of me, and when she suggested that I work at the snack bar again next year, I did not even shrug. I was too busy imagining the restaurant I would open one day.学写作者回忆小时曾在母亲快餐馆打工经历。通过叙述打工的经过和心理的变化谈他的感受：有一天我也开一个餐馆。有很多细节描述可试着模仿， 如：I was so nervous that my hands shook, and I broke a cup into pieces. What a mess! / Things went more smoothly after that. / My mother said she was proud of me, and when she suggested that I work at the snack bar again next year, I did not even shrug. I was too busy imagining the restaurant I would open one day.三、学写说明例4 （选自China Daily） Ten thousand smiles from children all over the world that is the image the opening ceremony of the Beijing Olympic Games will leave its audience with, as a symbol of the bright future awaiting all humankind. “It will be a very touching moment of the ceremony,” renowned（有名望的）Chinese film director Zhang Yimou, who has been tasked with designing the opening and closing ceremonies. “We are going to tell a human-interest story in a simple way during the performance which will be about 50 minutes long -such as who we are and why we are one family.” He said, “Red is my favorite color and you will see it in the opening ceremony. But there must be more than one color at the ceremony. It should look very colorful and splendid.”学写 导演张艺谋谈北京奥运会开幕式设计说明，Ten thousand smiles from children all over the world万张世界儿童的笑脸的设计理念、思路和象征意义以及色彩的基调所赋予的内涵等。例5（2007安徽卷-E-第5段） People from different parts of the world have different values, and sometimes these values are quite against each other. However, if we can understand them better, a multicultural environment (多元文化环境) will offer a wonderful chance for us to learn from each other.世界各地的人们有不同的价值观。有的时候这些价值观彼此冲突。然而，假如我们能了解得好些，一种多元文化环境会为我们提供美好的彼此互相学习的机会。例6（2006广东卷）描写今昔通讯方式的变化及给人们的生活带来的影响。(图略)More and more people reply on e-mail and mobile phones for communication rather than letters and public phones because the new tools seem faster and make our work more efficient. However, this change has bad as well as good result, especially dependence on the Internet. Firstly, as we lack enough practice, we are losing the beauty of hand-written Chinese words, which express the writer better while machine words all have the same looks. Secondly, our spelling becomes worse if we rely on the machine too much. Last but not least, the PC screen does harm to our eyes. I prefer the old way of communication even though it is much too slow in the eyes of many. (116words) 说明文特点：突出条理性、逻辑性。结尾展示出一个清晰的整体概念： Modern ways of communication make life easier and more convenient. However, they also bring some bad effects. For example, we are losing the beauty of hand-written Chinese words. Id rather keep in touch with my friends by letter, even though it is much slower.四、学写情景感受例7 （2007全国卷-I-A第3、4段） I was so sad that someone would steal our bike that I wrote to the newspapers and told them our story. Shortly after that, several people in our area offered to help. One wonderful stranger even bought a bike, then called my husband to pick it up. Once again my husband had a way to get to and from his job. It really is an honor that a complete stranger would go out of their way for someone they have never met before. People say that a smile can be passed from one person to another, but acts of kindness from strangers are even more so. This experience has had a spreading effect in our lives because it strengthened our faith in humanity (人性)as a whole. And it has influenced us to be more mindful of ways we, too, can share with others. No matter how big or how small, an act of kindness shows that someone cares. And the results can be everlasting.学写1 描写亲身经历：丈夫丢了唯一代步工具自行车，得到人们的关心和帮助。2 有感于人与人之间的帮助，认为善举意义深远。 People say that a smile can be passed from one person to another, but acts of kindness from strangers are even more so. This experience has had a spreading effect in our lives because it strengthened our faith in humanity (人性)as a whole. And it has influenced us to be more mindful of ways we, too, can share with others. No matter how big or how small, an act of kindness shows that someone cares. And the results can be everlasting.人们说一个微笑可以从一个人身上传递到另一个人。而来自陌生人的善举就更加如此。这次经历在我们的生活中散发影响，因为从总体上说它加强了我们对人性的信念，同时影响了我们与他人共享的更加关爱的作风。一个善举，无论大小，都表现了一种关爱，其影响是恒久的。五、学写文章的结构和层次, 表达观点态度例8 （2006全国卷-II-阅读-D） When asked to point out one or two things that are most important to themselves, many put friends ahead of homes, jobs, clothes and cars. A true friendship carries a long history of experience that determines who we are and keeps us connected. It is a treasure we should protect. Unfortunately, the better friends you are, the more probably youll have disagreements. And the result can be what you dont want an end to the relationship. The good news is that most troubled friendship can be mended. First, dont let your pride get in your way. Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open. Second, apologize when youre wrong -even if youve been wronged. Over the course of a friendship, even the best people make mistakes. Sometimes, it may be best if the wronged person takes the lead and apologizes. When you apologize, give your friend a chance to admit that he has been wrong. Third, see things from your friends point of view. And finally, accept that friendships change as our needs and lifestyles(生活方式) change. Making friends can sometimes seem easy. The hard part is keeping the connections strong during the natural ups and downs that have an effect on all relationships. My suggestion: Consider friendship an honor and a gift, and worth the effort to treasure and nurture (培养).学写1 主题点睛第1段提出话题：朋友是第一位的。第2段谈真正的友谊应该珍惜。第3段提出作者见解：友谊可以修补可使友谊保持长久。2 段落布局第1段大意：多数人认为朋友是第一位的。When asked to point out one or two things that are most important to themselves, many put friends ahead of homes, jobs, clothes and cars. 当被问到指出一两件最重要的东西时，许多人把家、工作、衣服和车子放在后面，把朋友放在首位。第2段大意：真正友谊应该保护。但好朋友也有不幸因观点有分歧而终止。A true friendship carries a long history of experience that determines who we are and keeps us connected. It is a treasure we should protect. Unfortunately, the better friends you are, the more probably youll have disagreements. And the result can be what you dont want an end to the relationship.真正的友谊伴有一个经历很长的历史，这个经历检验了我们是怎样的人并保持我们的联系。这是我们应该保护的财富。不幸的是你越好的朋友越有可能和你意见不和。而结果可能是你不愿看到的，会终止这段关系。3层次推进第3段大意：First, dont let your pride get in your way.Second, apologize when youre wrong -even if youve been wronged.Third, see things from your friends point of view.And finally, accept that friendships change as our needs and lifestyles(生活方式) change.四个方面可修补友谊：1。不要傲慢 2。有错要道歉 3。从朋友的角度看事情 4。接受因需要和生活方式的改变而产生友谊的变化。4细节支撑（修补友谊方面） 建议1：Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open. 有分歧和不同意见要开诚布公，大多数人能彼此原谅。 建议2：Apologize when youre wrong -even if youve been wronged. Over the course of a friendship, even the best people make mistakes. Sometimes, it may be best if the wronged person takes the lead and apologizes. When you apologize, give your frienda chance to admit that he has been wrong. 错了要道歉。即便你是被冤枉的。在建立友谊的过程中即使最好的人也会犯错误。有时被错怪的人首先道歉或许最好。道歉时给你的朋友机会承认错怪了你。建议3：See things from your friends point of view. 从朋友的角度看事情。 建议4：Making friends can sometimes seem easy. The hard part is keeping the connections strong during the natural ups and downs that have an effect on all relationships. 交朋友有时似乎很容易。难的是在自然的人生盛衰沉浮对所有关系产生影响时，牢固维系这种联系。5总结建议：My suggestion: Consider friendship an honor and a gift, and worth the effort to treasure and nurture(培养). 我的看法： 将友情视为荣耀和赠予，值得努力珍惜和培养这种友情。六、模仿范文写作技巧（1）Dear editor, I am very glad to write to tell you something about our warmly discussion on whether to move Beijing Zoo out to the suburb or not. There are two different kinds of opinions among us. Some students think it reasonable to move the zoo out to suburb. They hold the following reasons to support their opinion. One the one hand, nowadays, since more and more people are fond of animals, going to the zoo whenever they are free become their first choice, at the same time, Beijing zoo is so famous that it attracts a great number of tourists from other places and even foreign countries to have a visit there, as a result, lots of traffic jams will be caused. On the other hand, the environment in suburb is better than that in the centre of Beijing, which is fit for animals to live in. As is known to us, the air in suburb is much fresher and water there is much clearer. As every coin has two sides, others dont think it reasonable to do that. There are following reasons. Beijing Zoo was founded in 1906 and it has been well-known to the people both inside country and outside country. Whats more, it is possible to lead to the death of the animals on the of moving. In my opinion, it doesnt matter whether to move animals to suburb or not. Whats the most important is to find ways to take good care of animals because they are friends of human being. Do you agree with my opinion? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Lihua 笔记：记录抄写用以连贯的连接词语；吸收表达逻辑关系的贯通手法。 总结你所知道的连接词语。(2) （2008北京卷） From the pi