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专题限时训练(四十五)议论文型短文改错 (限时：每篇8分钟)(一)thank you for read my letter. my name is li ming, and im a student at college. id like to say anything about the usage of mobile phone among college students.nowadays, college students use mobile phone not only for its convenience but also for its fashion and popularity. besides, using mobile phone affect the normal teaching order to some extent. in class, sometimes we hear the phone to ring here and there, and some of the students sent short messages now and then. as the result, we cant concentrate our work.people have different opinion about it. i think its good to use mobile phone, but college students shouldnt use them in class. finally, i hope you can pay attention to the phenomenon.(二)a young man called lowcarbon brother become a hit on the internet in 2011. he suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. for example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. while he is watching tv, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. some people think what he is doing is just a show. no one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. as far as i am concerned, i am strongly in support his idea and his behaviour. although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.(三)in recently years many young people prefer to go shopping on the internet. people have different opinion about online shopping. some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods are cheap. however, other believe it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. and it is possible to check the quality of the goods.as far as i am concern, going shopping in a store is a better way. it is a fun to walk around stores and looking at various goods on sale. we can choose what we really need and even find a good bargain. however, we can chat with the shop assistants and acquire a lot of useful information.(四) the other day i happen to read an eightyword passage about details. i found it prettily good. one who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what were doing. we should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. whats more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. when facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. in that case we are possible to neglect the details. so we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.专题限时训练(四十五)(一)thank you for readreading my letter. my name is li ming, and im a student at college. id like to say anythingsomething about the usage of mobile phone among college students.nowadays, college students use mobile phone not only for its convenience but also for its fashion and popularity. besideshowever, using mobile phone affectaffects the normal teaching order to some extent. in class, sometimes we hear the phone ring here and there, and some of the students sentsend short messages now and then. as thea result, we cant concentrate on our work.people have different opinionopinions about it. i think its good to use mobile phone, but college students shouldnt use themit in class. finally, i hope you can pay attention to the phenomenon.(二)a young man called lowcarbon brother becomebecame a hit on the internet in 2011. he suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducingreduce carbon dioxide in the air. for example, shehe always picks up some waste paper on the street orand uses the blank side to write something. while he is watching tv, he always turns updown the screen brightness to the 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