基础-开头,结尾,主体.ppt

1 四级作文常见开头方式 Jessica 2 Introduction 2s 30w 突出表现Body 4s 80w 追求流畅Conclusion 2s 30w 但求无过 3 Introduction 2sentences 30words 1Backgroundinformation 1 A 背景B 事实C 反方观点2thesisstatement 1 4 1权威数据型 When1500childrenagedfrom6 10wereaskedwhattheywantedmost theanswersarenottoys sweetsorbeautifulclothes butspendingtimewithparentstogether Fromthissurvey wecouldseetheimportantroleofparentsintheprocessofchildren sgrowingup 5 2自问自答型 Whatishonesty Honestymeanstellingthetruthandbeingfairanduprightinact Honestyisagoodvirtue Hewholiesandcheatsisdishonest Thosewhogainfortunes notbyhardlabour butbyothermeans aredishonest 6 3名言谚语型 AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy isapopularsayinginEnglish Thereismuchtruthinit Itmeansthatinordertokeepourselvesingoodhealth wemusttakesufficientrecreations Nopains nogains Thisisaproverbfulloflogic Ifwearetoreachthetopofamountain wemustclimbit Ifwehopetoachievesuccess wehavetodohardandpainstakingwork Onthecontrary thelessonepains thelesshegains Todonothingistobringruinsupononeself 7 4现象 例子 Automobiles astheproductofmoderncivilization havebeenplayingavitalpartinthedailyactivitiesofhumansociety Industryneedsautomobilesfortransportation Agricultureneedsautomobilesforfarmingaswellastransportation Everyday automobilesdrivepeopletoandfromwork Atweekends automobilestakefamiliestojoyfuloutings Itcanbesaidthatthewheelsofautomobilesmovehumansocietyforward 8 5总分观点 Everyonetriestoachievesuccessinhiscareer However someonefinallyattainshisgoalwhileanotherfails Why Theonecontinueshiscausetotheendthroughlongperiodsofhardstruggling buttheotheriseasilydisappointedorstopshalfway 9 6先抑后扬型 先立后破 Nowadays peopleconstantlyfindthemselvesexposedtovariousfilms Filmsareindeednecessarytopeople Butsomeofthefilmsreallyhavenegativeeffectsonourlife 10 7定义型 Thegenerationgapisthedifferentideasandattitudestowardthesamematterbetweendifferentgenerations 11 8经典套句 1Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastotheviewoffate Somepeoplebelievethat2Fromthediagram chart wecanseeclearlythat 12 上图所示为1990年 1995年 2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况 请描述其变化 请说明发生这些变化的原因 可从计算机的用途 价格或社会发展等方面加以说明 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题 13 1 Asisclearlyshowninthechart studentsarenowspendingmuchmoretimeonthecomputer fromonehourtofourhoursperweekbetween1990and1995 2 Especially itincreasessharplytotwentyhoursintheyearof2000 3 Therearethreereasonsforthisphenomenon 1 Thechartshowsthatstudentsarenowspendingmuchmoretimeonthecomputer fromonehourin1990tofourhoursin1995perweek 2 Itisself evidentthatitincreasessharplytotwentyhoursintheyearof2000 3 Threepossiblereasonscontributetothisphenomenon 14 Ex ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists 1 名校校园正成为旅游新热点2 校园是否应对游客开放 人们看法不同3 我认为 15 主体部分的展开 paragraph2 16 Body1Topicsentence 1 2argument论证 2 3s 3concludingsentence 17 Topicsentence T S 主题词 角度词1Severalfactorscanaccountforthisphenomenon change 2Therearesomeeffectivewaysforparentstohelptheirchildrenbeindependent 3Tracingthereasonshiddenbehind wecaneasilyfinditismainlybecausesomestudentsareunawareoftheimportanceofthespelling 18 Argument 1摆事实 讲道理 经典理由2关联词语必须有first second thirdfirstandforemost moreover furthermore Lastbutnotleast Tobeginwith secondly finally 19 经典理由 经济 环境 效率 交流 他人 安全 方便 健康 情感 性格 经验 空间 耐久 20 3句型事先准备好itis a n that 经典被动倒装 比较主谓宾补 etc 21 HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview1面试在求职过程中的作用2 取得面试成功的因素 仪表 举止谈吐 能力 专业知识 自信 实事求是 22 举例 Tobesuccessfulinajobinterview wehavefiguredoutmanywaystomakeanexcellentperformanceinaninterview First theapplicantoughttopayattentiontohisappearanceandmannerofspeaking Second heissupposedtodisplayhisability Finally areallyimpressivejobseekermustconveyasenseofself confidence Inaword iftheintervieweedisplaysthesecharacteristicsandpresentshismostattractivequalitiesduringtheinterview theinterviewermightmakeanon the spotdecisiontotakehimon 23 DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling 1 如今不少学生在英语 论坛 学习中不重视拼写2 出现这种情况的原因3 这种现象导致的结果 24 1unawareof itis that 2Lesspractice 被动 3exam orientedlearningstresslesson 比较multiplechoices 25 Conclusion 2 3s 1总结2后果 影响3呼吁 26 Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatparentsdoplayavitalroleintheeducationoftheirchildren whichcannotbereplacedbyschooling 27 Toconclude smokingisnothingbutevilasitissoharmfultopeople Allsmokersshouldbetaughtothegreatharmofsmokingandbepersuadedoutofsmoking Moreimportantly weshouldprotectourchildrenfromtheharmofsmokingthrougheducation 28 2影响 后果 例1 Clearly ifweareblindtothisrecklessexploitationofourlimitednaturalresources itisverylikelythattherewillnotbeanynaturalresourcesforustoexploitanymore Andifthatdaydoescome itwillbetheendofourmoderncivilization 例2 Allthesethingscometoonesimplefact peoplearealwaystryingveryhardtogetabetterlife Anynationwhichignorestheimportanceofdevelopingitsproductivityandconsequentlyimprovingthelifeofitspeoplewouldpayahighprice 29 例2 Allthesethingscometoonesimplefact peoplearealwaystryingveryhardtogetabetterlife Anynationwhichignorestheimportanceofdevelopingitsproductivityandconsequentlyimprovingthelifeofitspeoplewouldpayahighprice 30 3呼吁 例1 Itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoprotectourenvironment Lawsandregulationsshouldbemadetopunishthosepollutingourenvironment andtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionshouldbeattachedbythepublic 31 例2 Onlywhenthewholecountryanditspeopleallgointoactionandfightagainstcrimecanwepurifyoursocietyandliveinsecurity 32 ReduceWasteonCampus1 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重2 浪费的危害3 从我做起 杜绝浪费 33 开头 Recently thephenomenonofwasteinsomecampuseshasbroughtintofocus Moreoftenthannot thelightison withnoonemakingtheslightestefforttoturnitoff evenwhenthereisbrightdaylight Thesameistrueoftherunningwater withtapleftonendlessly What smore atdinnertime collegestudentstendtothrowawaytheirleftoversintothegarbagecans evenjustonthetable 34 结尾 Itishightimewerememberedtheoldsaying Wastenot wantnot Andfightingwasteiseverybody sbusiness Asforuscollegestudents weshouldstrivetoreducewasteoncampus Witheveryonedoinghisbit itwon tbelongbeforethegoodoldsayingcomesback 35 Ex OnStudents SelectingLectures1有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任