浙江省宁波市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼（4）.doc

短文改错精炼（4）短文改错like most of my schoolmates, i have neither brothers 1._nor sistersin any other words, i am an only child. 2._my parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can 3._make sure that i get a good education. they did not want 4._me to do any work at family; they want me to 5._devote all my time to my studies so that ill get good marks in all my subject. 6. _we may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 7._not seem to get much time to talk about together. it looks 8._as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. do they 9._really understand their own daughter? what things are in 10._other homes, i wonder.答案及解析1. 此行无错。2. 删去 other 前的 any。in other words 为固定搭配， 意为“换句话说”。3. can 后加 to。此处不定式为目的状语。4. did 改为do。纵观全文， 应用一般现在时态。5. family 改为 home。family 多指由家庭成员、 婚姻维系的“家”， 而 home 则多指“住所”。另外， at home 为固定搭配。6. subject 改为 subjects。subject 属可数名词， all 后应用其复数。7. a 改为the 。same 作定语时前面一般用定冠词。8. 删去 talk 后的 about。9. and 改为or。a visitor 和 a guest 属不同类的两种人， 故不可用 and 连接， 需用or表示选其一。10. what 改为 how。此处是 i wonder 引导的宾语从句， 意为“我想知道在别人家里的情况是怎样的”。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 last evening, i went to teahouse with my best friend susan. before the tea was serving，we talked to each other happilywhen the waiter went to us with the tea, we didnt see himunfortunately, susan raises her hand to comb her hair just while the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. his hand hit the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅)on her trousers. in my surprise，instead of complaining，susan smiled，“so lucky that its not on my shirt，and i cant even clean it” her words were very inspired. we cannot foresee what will happen，but looking at it in a positive way can make us always be happy【参考答案】2.last evening, i went toteahouse with my best friend susan. before the tea was serving， a servedwe talked to each other happilywhen the waiter went to us with the tea, we didnt see him cameunfortunately, susan raises her hand to comb her hair just while the waiter bent to put the raised whenplate on the table. his hand hit the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅)on her trousers. in my her tosurprise，instead of complaining，susan smiled，“so lucky that its not on my shirt，and i cant oreven clean it” her words were very inspired. we cannot foresee what will happen，but looking inspiringat it in a positive way can make us always be happy此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。attention, please, everyone. weve accepted the 1. _weather forecast on the radio this morning that2. _there will have a heavy rain tonight. be sure 3. _to shut the windows and doors until you leave 4. _your classrooms. the sports meet when we planned to 5. _hold it tomorrow will be put off. after it becomes 6. _fine, well make other announcement. we will 7. _have classes on wednesday as usually. since it is 8. _colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. 9. _those come to school by bike, dont keep your 10._umbrellas open while riding. 【参考答案】3.1. accepted-received 2.正确 3. have -be 4. until-before 5. whenwhich6. it 7. otheranother 8. as usual 9. put on 10. those who此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。dear classmates ,now id like to tell you why i learn english i often 76 1.read english aloud and try learn something important by 2 hearts , which helps me remember it easily and form 3 the good habit of thinking in english i listen to a lot and 4 talk with others in english in this way , i was improved 5 my spoken english i keep a diary in english every day but 6 my writing english is becoming better and better i also try 7 my best to master the necessary grammar with this means , 8 i can express myself in english correct thats the way i 9 have been learning english i hope it will be useful to you 10 thats all thank you yours ,wang gang【参考答案】4.1why how 2try后加to 3hearts heart 4去掉to 5was have 6but and 7writing written 8with by 9correct correctly 10正确假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。in the winter vacation, i paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of handan. no sooner had i got off the bus when i was greatly surprising to see all the changes. it was far better than i had been expected. now every family can drink cleanly running water. the villagers neednt carry water himself any more. firewood is no longer used for cooking. marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. as all the families have color tv set, they can enjoy plays at home. it impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. i hope the mountain village will become better and better. 【参考答案】5.in the winter vacation, i paid a visita mountain village in a suburb of handan. no sooner tohad i got off the bus when i was greatly surprising to see all the changes. it was far better than i than surprisedhad been expected. now every family can drink cleanly running water. the villagers neednt carry cleanwater himself any more. firewood is no longer used for cooking. marsh gas, a new cheap clean