广西贺州中学高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼（1）.doc

短文改错二轮精炼（1）【由河北省唐山市2014高考英语一模试题改编】 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。when i was a child, i spent more than ten years learn the violintherefore, i couldnt understand real musicafter i graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cooll will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store there i saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which i really enjoyedhe became my the first guitar teacherit took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful modelnow the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and i practice it every day.【参考答案】短文改错when i was a child, i spent more than ten years learn the violin. therefore, i couldn t learning howeverunderstand “real music”. after i graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we fromstarted to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. i will never forget the day start bothon that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. there i saw a guitar player playing the which guitar, which i really enjoyed. he became my the first guitar teacher. it took me such a long timechoose a guitar among several wonderful model. now the guitar is the to models most importantly part of my life and i practice it every day.important短文改错-1dear bob,hello. i learn about you from my english teacher, 1. _miss fang. id like to your penfriend, and get to 2. _know more about your country. first, let me tell you something more about myself. 3. _my name is li hua. i live in beijing, where is the 4. _capital of china. i go to hongqi middle school. we 5. _study quite a few subject, such as maths, chinese, 6. _english and physics. i use to play ping-pong a lot 7. _in my spare time, but now i am interesting in football. 8. _do you play any ball games? what your favorite 9. _sport? i look forward to hear from you soon. 10. _yours,li hua答案及解析1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。2. to 后加 be 或 become。3. 删去more。第一次告诉 bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。5. 此行无错。6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in为固定短语， “对感兴趣”。9. what 后加 is。此句无谓语。10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。【由陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟试题改编】短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，瀚你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个翻词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1、每处锗误及修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。on the childrens day last year, our city held an interested activity. in theactivity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. in the dinner, the richcould have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. parents allhoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. they hoped that our childrencould taught a lesson from the dinner. now many people on the earth dont have enoughfood and clothes. every day only one half the world can enjoy enough food. the activitywas held make the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich andalso make the parents know that too much material life wont always do good for the children.【参考答案】短文改错on the childrens day last year, our city held an interested activity. in the the interestingactivity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. in the dinner, the richacted could have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. parents allbreadhoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. they hoped that our children theircouldtaught a lesson from the dinner. now many people on the earth dont have enoughbefood and clothes. every day only one halfthe world can enjoy enough food. the activityor ofwas heldmake the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich andtoalso make the parents know that too much material life wont always do good for the children.for 改为to 或把do改为be【由宁夏银川市第九中学2014一模改编】短文改错:文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加： 在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。yesterday, i saw the old lady fall down when i was hurrying to school. i was about to help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that i might be accused of knocking her down. heard his words, i began to hesitate and slow down my steps. at the same time, another student, that saw everything, went up to help. the old lady said nothing but lots of thank to the good boy. i felt ashamed.as is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. even though some old people are becoming immorally, we cant let it to disappear. i have made my mi