广西贺州中学高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼（2）.doc

短文改错二轮精炼（2）【由四川省成都市2014届高三英语摸底测试模拟试题（二）改编】短文改错。after watch “english tv” last sunday morning, i phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. while we are having a rest in the corridor, i saw mr. liu, my china teacher. he told me that we had made some progresses in english, but my chinese lagged behind, especially my chinese composition. he suggested i must read more and keeping a diary every day. in the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing. that was really good idea! what they said was quite right, and i should follow their advice. 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)after watch “english tv” last sunday morning, i phoned to my classmate and told watchinghim to go to see a film in the afternoon. before the film was over, we returned to school when/after to do our lessons. while we are having a rest in the corridor, i saw mr. liu, my china were chineseteacher. he told me that we had made some progresses in english, but my chinese progresslagged behind, especially my chinese composition. he suggested i must read more and should/去掉keeping a diary every day. in the evening my father told me that reading newspapers keepwould do me well for improving composition writing. that was really good idea! what good a或 athey said was quite right, and i should follow their advice. 短文改错my favorite sportmy favorite sport is football. i was a member of 1. _our school football team. we practise for three times 2. _every week and often watch football match on tv 3. _together. play football not only makes us grow 4. _tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and 5. _team spirit. we must keep in mind that we play 6. _for the team instead ourselves. also, the sport 7. _teaches us the important of obedience (服从). each 8. _player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9. _the team. and they must not break the rules too 10. _often if we want to win the game.答案及解析1. was 改为 am。综观全篇时态可知。2.删去 for。time 表示次数时， 之前一般无介词， 直接用作状语。如： we have meals three times a day。3. match 改为 matches。4. play 改为 playing。此处应用动名词作主语， 表示经常性、 习惯性动作， 而动词不定式作主语则表示一两次的动作。5. give 改为 gives。此处和上文 makes 一起作谓语， 属平行结构。6. 此行无错。7. instead 后加 of。instead 为副词， instead of 为介词短语。此处接宾语 ourselves， 需用介词短语。8. important 改为 importance。9. captain 前后 the。像 chairman， captain， monitor， mayor 这类词表示职务时， 前面用零冠词。但如这类职务用于指某人时， 前面用定冠词。10. they 改为 we。【由四川省成都市2014届高三英语摸底测试模拟试题（一）改编】短文改错。 文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的添加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线,在该词下边写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。in modern society, competition is everywhere. no wonder a english philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. in my opinion, all are important and necessary. lets take the competition at school for example. even a gifted student wont make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. thats because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. on the other hand, if we dont cooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. and thats why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.to conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.【参考答案】短文改错1.第2句第一个aan; 2.第2句problemproblems; 3.第3句thereforehowever;4.第3句stressstressed或wouldwill; 5.第4句allboth; 6.第6句去掉第二个a; 7.第7句andor;（or rather意为“确切地说”，为固定搭配） 8.第7句mademaking;9.第8句us和learn之间加to; 10.第10句successfulsuccessfully.【由东北三省2014模拟改编】短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面写出增加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。time flies! this is a third year that i have been in this school. in the past two and a half years, our school had organized many activities. what impressed me best was an activity called “learning to farm”. in an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes. having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. after divided into three groups, we started to work. some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. we continued doing that until all the work was done. although we were exhausted, but we felt fulfilled on our way back home. 短文改错：1. a改为the 2. had 改为has 3. best 改为most 4. in 改为 on 5. which改为where或前面加on6. so 改为such 7. divided前加being 8. hole 改为holes 9. them改为it 10.去掉but【由黑龙江省哈三中2014模拟改编】短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear editor, im writing to tell you about a food poisoning accidentseveral days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market after the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital after several hours treatment they finally escaped with death as some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures nor do they care about which happens to consumers they shall be charged by lawmeanwhile, i do hope whole society can realize the imp