雅思小作文之土地退化情况分析-智课教育出国考试.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 雅思小作文之土地退化情况分析 智课教育出国考试 剑桥雅思真题系类对于任何一个备考雅思考试的考生而言都是相当 有价值的资料 考生要吃透里面的知识点会收获很大 下面 智课教育 小编为大家带来的是雅思小作文之土地退化情况分析 一起来看一下吧 雅思作文题目 The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 剑8 test1 task1 范文 The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today Globally 65 of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance constituting 35 and 30 respectively A further 28 of global degradation is due to over cultivation of crops Other causes account for only 7 collectively These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s with Europe having as much as 9 8 of degradation due to deforestation while the impact of this on Oceania and North American was minimal with only 1 7 and 0 2 of land affected respectively Europe with the highest overall percentage of land degraded 23 also suffered from over cultivation 7 7 and over grazing 5 5 In contrast Oceania had 13 of degraded farmland and this was mainly due to over grazing 11 3 North America had a lower proportion of degraded land at only 5 and the main causes of this were over cultivation 3 3 and to a lesser extent over grazing 1 5 Overall it is clear that Europe suffered more from farmland degradation than the other regions and the main causes there were deforestation and over cultivation 一 题目类型 混合图 1饼 1表 二 题目简要内容 饼图 全球范围内土地退化原因 表图 三个区域土地退化原因 三 关注点 土地退化 四 素材积累 Degradation n 退化 Deforestation n 滥砍滥伐 Degrade n 退化 Over grazing n 过度放牧 Over cultivation n 过度耕作 Clearance n 清除 清理 Constitute n 占 构成 Account for v 占 导致 五 论据积累 1 本题为混合图 饼状图与表格图混合 考生要按照土地退化比例 大小的顺序进行描述 由大到小 小作文图表题考生要用具体数据来支 撑自己的写作 2 时态的使用也是值得注意的 饼状图涉及目前的状况 使用一般 现在时 而表格中有明显的时间the 1990s 因此在描写时 使用一般过去时 3 每幅图各写一段 重点描述图中体现的主要趋势和信息 结尾指 出两幅图之间的关系 进行比较或对比 如果没有直接关系 结尾简要 总结两幅图的主要特点就行 结构分析 第一段 第一段第一句话是改写题目 指出饼状图中的主要信息 The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today The pie chart shows that 饼图描述的是 degraded 退化 接下来三句话具体分析饼状图中信息 用具体数据支撑 Globally 65 of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance constituting 35 and 30 respectively A further 28 of global degradation is due to over cultivation of crops Other causes account for only 7 collectively grazing 放牧 tree clearance 滥砍滥伐 global degradation 全球退化 be due to 由于 起因于 over cultivation 过度开垦 account for 占 collectively 共同地 集体地 文中以百分比为主语 分别用了is caused by和is due to这两种表达方式比较好一些 不过文中的show与原题目中的show重复 不能一味的重复 否则 会失分 degraded degradation farmland agricultural land 第二段 先概括主要内容 不同原因影响不同地区的程度不同 然后具体分 析 1 先写占百分比最多的欧洲 指出在deforestation方面 欧洲的9 8 要远远大于大洋洲的1 7 和北美洲的0 2 These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s with Europe having as much as 9 8 of degradation due to deforestation 2 描述时可把前者和后两者进行对比 文中用while 引导的比较状语从句来进行对比 while the impact of this on Oceania and North American was minimal with only 1 7 and 0 2 of land affected respectively Europe with the highest overall percentage of land degraded 23 also suffered from over cultivation 7 7 and over grazing 5 5 文中首句these causes开头 指代上一段four main causes 起到了承上启下的作用 3 描述完欧洲之后 接下来描述的是大洋洲 先写指出土地退化 的总比率 然后写出主要原因 即为过度放牧 In contrast Oceania had 13 of degraded farmland and this was mainly due to over grazing 11 3 4 最后写土地退化比例最低的北美洲 首先指出总比例 之后按 照严重程度的顺序来写 North America had a lower proportion of degraded land at only 5 and the main causes of this were over cultivation 3 3 and to a less extent over grazing 1 5 结尾段 总结主要内容 即指出欧洲在三大地区中遭受土地退化的情况最严 重 主要原因为滥伐森林和过度耕种 Overall it is clear that Europe suffered more from farmland degradation than the other regions and the main causes there were deforestation and over cultivation it is clear that 明确 清楚 参考译文 饼状图显示了当今世界农田退化的四个主要原因 在全球范围内 65 的退化是由过度放牧和滥砍滥伐导致的 分别占35 和30 另外 28 的全球退化是由于农作物的过度耕作 其他原因只占总量的7 这些原因在90年代对不同地区造成了不同程度的影响 欧洲多达9 8 的退化是由于滥砍滥伐